Pyaar Ek Dawa Hai,Umar Bhar Yeh Dawa Di Jaaye "Khwahish"

by khwaish on May 14, 2013, 03:45:42 PM
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«Reply #15 on: May 15, 2013, 04:03:40 PM »
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waah waah bahut khoob

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«Reply #16 on: May 15, 2013, 04:29:27 PM »
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wah Khwahish saahab
baht hi umdaa ghazal kahi aapne
positve scoh se sarabor aapki ghazal ko humara Salaam
khus rahie

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wese hm aajkal ek hi rashm nbhate hain
mene 2 line likha tha kbhi aaj ke rash par--

rashm hai--nibhayenge hi
aashiqee me dil jalayenge hi

khayenge chott pe chott ar sahenge zakhm,magr
rashm hai--muskarayenge hi

means aajkl jadatar Ishq ki rashm hi nibhate hain log
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be happy alwwez
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«Reply #17 on: May 15, 2013, 10:02:30 PM »
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Waaaaaaaaah! kya khoob likhe ho khwaish ji. bahut khoob khayalath aur bahut gehri soch hai aapki. I m mesmerised. dil se mubarakbad qubool kare.
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«Reply #18 on: May 16, 2013, 12:26:01 AM »
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Khwahish jee Aadaab.....!


Bahut khoob janab bahut umda aik se badhkar aik khayaal aur khoob bayaani rahi aapki is kalaam meiN... Usual Smile

Sabhi ashaar qabil e tareef hai... Is khoobsurat kalaam par humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye... Bazm ko roshan karte rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile



Aapka Bahut bahut Shukriya Parwaaz Ji..

Yuhi Humesha Saath banaye Rakhiyega... icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #19 on: May 16, 2013, 12:31:52 AM »
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Rasm Kuch Aisi bhi Duniya MeN Nibha Di Jaaye
Zakhm Dene Wale Ko Bhi Kyun Naa Dua Di Jaaye

Bahut Hua Yeh Daur-E-ShikayatoN Ka Silsila
Jo Bhi Baat Ho, Usse Ussi waqt Daba Di Jaaye

Do BhaiyoN MeN Aakhir Kis Baat Ki Yeh Ladaai
Ghar Ek Hai Gar Beech Ki Deewar Utha Di Jaaye

Main Khud Ko Hi Dhundhta Phirta HuN Apno MeN
Zindagi MeN Khud Ko Kabhi Aisi Saza Na Di Jaaye

Main Dariya Hoon Mere Hunar Main Jaanta Hoon..!!
Samundar MeN milkar Meri Pehchan Na Gawa Di Jaaye

Keh Do Musafir Se,Aage Ki RaheN Asan Hain Himat Na Haar
Yeh Jhoot Hai To Yeh Jhooti Afwah Hi Udda Di Jaaye

Jab Tak Saansein Chal Rahi HaiN, Chal Rahe HaiN Hum
"Khwahish" Pyaar Ek Dawa Hai,Umar Bhar Yeh Dawa Di Jaaye

 
           ~~~~~Khwahish~~~~~


khoobsoorat ashaar se saji hui ghazal hai Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #20 on: May 17, 2013, 02:49:22 PM »
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ahcha likha hai saaheb, yunhi likhte rahen....
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«Reply #21 on: May 22, 2013, 08:52:26 PM »
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waah waah bahut khoob

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«Reply #22 on: June 05, 2013, 03:22:20 AM »
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Khwahish jee Aadaab.....!


Bahut khoob janab bahut umda aik se badhkar aik khayaal aur khoob bayaani rahi aapki is kalaam meiN... Usual Smile

Sabhi ashaar qabil e tareef hai... Is khoobsurat kalaam par humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye... Bazm ko roshan karte rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile



Aapka Bahut Bahut Shukriya Parwaaz ji Jo Aapne Apna Waqt diya..

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«Reply #23 on: September 30, 2013, 04:01:34 AM »
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Great Work.
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