Pyaar lutaate rahe.......................................................Aqsh -Panna 2:Ghazals

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«Reply #15 on: March 26, 2013, 06:20:27 PM »

Quote from: himanshuIITR on March 26, 2013, 05:15:22 PM

badhiya

thnx himanshu ji


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Re: Pyaar lutaate rahe.......................................................Aqsh

«Reply #16 on: March 26, 2013, 06:23:26 PM »

Quote from: ParwaaZ on March 26, 2013, 05:32:51 PM

Aqsh Jee Aadaab!

Lagta hai Madam jee ke kalam ko aajkal zaNg lag gaya shaayd...
jo aapki is kalaam meiN saaf nazar aa raha hai...

Log kahte haiN hum bewajhaa bhi tareef kar ke nikal jaate haiN... haaN sahiN
hai par unki hi karte haiN jinke likhne ke andaaz se hum na waqif hai.. par
aap ke toH likhne ke aNdaaz se hum kafi waqif hai jee so humari koi tareef nahi
hai is kalaam par...

Likhati rahiye... aur purzor koshish ke saath aur bazm meiN aati rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez...

jhooti tareef hame bhi achchi nahi lagti parwaaz ji. koshish karenge par wada nahi kar sakte. aapka bahut bahut shukriya ji. Jazakallah.


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Re: Pyaar lutaate rahe.......................................................Aqsh

«Reply #17 on: March 26, 2013, 09:24:07 PM »

khoobsurat rachnaa, bahut achchaa likhaa hai aapne Aqsh ji, bahut pyaaraa....jitni taarif ki jaaye kam hai... mazaa aa gayaa padh ke... par itnaa dard waalaa depth kyun? ? ? ? ? ? kyaa baat hai mohtarmaa.... .... too good hai ji...!!!

khwaab banke sajna thaa tumhaari aankhon mein
tumhe aansoo banaa ke aankh se judaa kar diyaa

baithe the tumhaare dil mein dhadkan ki tarhaa
tum ne dil se judaa kar ke gumshudaa kar diyaa


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Re: Pyaar lutaate rahe.......................................................Aqsh

«Reply #18 on: March 27, 2013, 12:24:31 AM »

aaaaaaaaaaaaahhhh..! sad5

..aapne to dil ko cheerkar bujhi raakh ko fir se sulga diya janaab! sad5


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Re: Pyaar lutaate rahe.......................................................Aqsh

«Reply #19 on: March 27, 2013, 01:55:13 AM »

Quote from: aqsh on March 26, 2013, 12:51:56 PM

Kuch is tarah woh humse, muhabbat nibhaate rahe
Khud muskuraate rahe aur, hame tadpaate rahe
kaun hai wo kambakht mujhe pataa bataao. khabar leti hoon uski
Hui nafrath unhe, mere masoom dil se kuch aise
Hansi churaakar, ashk palkhoN par sajaate rahe
tum bhi use bhool jaao aur kisi ke saath chali jaao to aqal thikane aa jaae gi janaab ki
KhwaboN ko meri, hasrathoN mein badal kar
Jo kabhi poori na ho saki, aisi aas jagaate rahe
ye mardo.n ki baat aisi hi hoti hai bewakoof banaa ne ki
Karte rahe hum, unse mulaqaat ki dua raat din
Par paas aakar bhi woh, humse nazreiN churaate rahe
buzdil insaan hai. matlab nikal gaya to pahchaante nahin. jaane do koi aur doa maango ALLAH se
Mujhko meri hi nazroN meiN, gira diya zaalim ne
Karke daga phir, hameiN hi bewafa bataate rahe
tum bhi khamosh kyon ho. uski aisi ki taisi kyon nahin karti.
Dil toh samajh hi nahi paaya unki berukhi “Aqsh”
Toote hue hai phir bhi, beintehaan pyaar lutaate rahe.
ye kya baat hui ji. samjhi nahin main
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bahut khoob aqsh.........!


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Re: Pyaar lutaate rahe.......................................................Aqsh

«Reply #20 on: March 27, 2013, 02:37:19 AM »

bahut umda likha hai aapne dhero mubaarakbaad aur holi ki shubhkaamnayein icon_salut


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Re: Pyaar lutaate rahe.......................................................Aqsh

«Reply #21 on: March 27, 2013, 05:25:38 AM »

Bahut khoob


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Re: Pyaar lutaate rahe.......................................................Aqsh

«Reply #22 on: March 27, 2013, 02:22:38 PM »

Quote from: ~Hriday~ on March 26, 2013, 09:24:07 PM

khwaab banke sajna thaa tumhaari aankhon mein
tumhe aansoo banaa ke aankh se judaa kar diyaa

baithe the tumhaare dil mein dhadkan ki tarhaa
tum ne dil se judaa kar ke gumshudaa kar diyaa

Woh bas aise hi likh diya hriday ji. aaj zara rone ka mood tha. toh bas dard hi dard.

Applause

kya khoob aapne likha hai jawab de hi deti hoon

Khwaab bankar aaye aankhon mein, humne sitaraa bana diya
Moti bankar tapke jo palkhon se, humne maang mein saja diya
Saansein rawaan hai meri sirf tumhara hi naam lekar
Dil se juda kar diya par, rooh ki gehraiyon mein basa diya


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Re: Pyaar lutaate rahe.......................................................Aqsh

«Reply #23 on: March 27, 2013, 02:26:19 PM »

Quote from: champak on March 27, 2013, 12:24:31 AM

aaaaaaaaaaaaahhhh..! sad5

..aapne to dil ko cheerkar bujhi raakh ko fir se sulga diya janaab! sad5

thnx champak ji


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Re: Pyaar lutaate rahe.......................................................Aqsh

«Reply #24 on: March 27, 2013, 02:27:19 PM »

Quote from: Sheba on March 27, 2013, 01:55:13 AM

bahut khoob aqsh.........!

hahahahahaha waaah sheba jee. aaj toh hansa hansa kar maar diya aapne. teekh hai aapki naseehat par amal karoongi. shukriya bahut bahut aapka


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Re: Pyaar lutaate rahe.......................................................Aqsh

«Reply #25 on: March 27, 2013, 02:28:27 PM »

Quote from: the soul shaker on March 27, 2013, 02:37:19 AM

bahut umda likha hai aapne dhero mubaarakbaad aur holi ki shubhkaamnayein icon_salut

thnx soulshaker


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Re: Pyaar lutaate rahe.......................................................Aqsh

«Reply #26 on: March 27, 2013, 02:29:22 PM »

Quote from: Advo.RavinderaRavi on March 27, 2013, 05:25:38 AM

Bahut khoob

thnx ravindera ji..


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Re: Pyaar lutaate rahe.......................................................Aqsh

«Reply #27 on: March 27, 2013, 03:22:08 PM »

waah waah waah waah .. bahut khoobsurat jawaab likha hai aapne... !!!

khwaab banaa ke tumhe main aakhon mein sajaataa hoon
geet banaa ke tumhe apne honthon se gungunaataa hoon
jab zikra hotaa hai kabhi mohabbat kaa yaaron mein
main misaal ke taur pe tumhaare kisse sunaataa hoon

Quote from: aqsh on March 27, 2013, 02:22:38 PM

Woh bas aise hi likh diya hriday ji. aaj zara rone ka mood tha. toh bas dard hi dard.

Applause


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Re: Pyaar lutaate rahe.......................................................Aqsh

«Reply #28 on: March 27, 2013, 05:10:54 PM »

Quote from: ~Hriday~ on March 27, 2013, 03:22:08 PM

waah waah waah waah .. bahut khoobsurat jawaab likha hai aapne... !!!

Superb jawab tha hriday ji.......

Tumhari aankhon mein rehti hoon khwaab bankar
Tumhare honton se khelti hoon gulaab bankar
Zikr yun na kijiye hamara apne doston ke beech
Rah na jaaon mai phir koi khuli kitaab bankar


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Re: Pyaar lutaate rahe.......................................................Aqsh

«Reply #29 on: March 27, 2013, 08:43:44 PM »

Bahut Khub Aqsh Hi Applause

Shad o Aabaad Rahiye

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