PYAR MERA UNKO NAMANZOOR HAI ..................... HASAN

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Pyar   mera   unko   Na - manzoor   hai  ,
Dil  isi  gham  se  to  chakna - choor  hai


Apsara  koi , paree  naa  Hoor   hai  ,
Jaane  phir  kyuuN  is qadar  Maghroor  hai


Rooth  jaate  haiN  zara  si  baat  par  ,
Sab  HaseenoN  ka  yahi  Dastoor  hai


Bach  na  paao ge  tum  in ke  daaoN  se  ,
Naaz - o - Nakhra  Aadat - e - Mastoor  hai


Kal  talak  Khanjar  bakaf  thha  jo  Raqeeb  ,
Abb  tah - e - dil  se  mera  Mashkoor  hai


Urr  hi  jaata  hai  Hawa - e - Waqt  se  ,
Husn  too  jaanaaN  faqat  Kaafoor  hai


Ishq se  pahle  'Hasan'  gumnaam  thha  ,
Abb  tumhaaare  naam  se  Mash'hoor  hai



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Namanzoor=Unacceptable ; Maghroor=proud ;
Dastoor=tareeqa ;Mastoor=Ladies ;Khanjar-
bakaf=Dagger in hands;Mashkoor=thankful;
Kafoor=Camphor/kapoor;faqat=merely
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«Reply #1 on: July 15, 2013, 04:32:22 PM »
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Apsara  koi , paree  naa  Hoor   hai  ,
Jaane  phir  kyuuN  is qadar  Maghroor  hai


Rooth  jaate  haiN  zara  si  baat  par  ,
Sab  HaseenoN  ka  yahi  Dastoor  hai


Urr  hi  jaata  hai  Hawa - e - Waqt  se  ,
Husn  too  jaanaaN  faqat  Kaafoor  hai


Ishq se  pahle  'Hasan'  gumnaam  thha  ,
Abb  tumhaaare  naam  se  Mash'hoor  hai

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Wah,Wah,Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Hasan Sir,
Bahut umdaa aur romantic ghazal kahi hai aapne.Really mujhe bahut pasand aayee. Dili mubarakbaad qabool farmaayin.
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«Reply #2 on: July 15, 2013, 04:42:19 PM »
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nice romantic creation brother.
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«Reply #3 on: July 15, 2013, 04:51:48 PM »
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Rooth jaate haiN zara si baat par,
Sab HaseenoN ka yahi Dastoor hai

Bach na paao ge tum in ke daaoN se,
Naaz-o-Nakhra Aadat-e-Mastoor hai

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«Reply #4 on: July 15, 2013, 04:57:29 PM »
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wah wah
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«Reply #5 on: July 15, 2013, 05:30:42 PM »
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Pyar   mera   unko   Na - manzoor   hai  ,
Dil  isi  gham  se  to  chakna - choor  hai


Apsara  koi , paree  naa  Hoor   hai  ,
Jaane  phir  kyuuN  is qadar  Maghroor  hai


Rooth  jaate  haiN  zara  si  baat  par  ,
Sab  HaseenoN  ka  yahi  Dastoor  hai


Bach  na  paao ge  tum  in ke  daaoN  se  ,
Naaz - o - Nakhra  Aadat - e - Mastoor  hai


Kal  talak  Khanjar  bakaf  thha  jo  Raqeeb  ,
Abb  tah - e - dil  se  mera  Mashkoor  hai


Urr  hi  jaata  hai  Hawa - e - Waqt  se  ,
Husn  too  jaanaaN  faqat  Kaafoor  hai


Ishq se  pahle  'Hasan'  gumnaam  thha  ,
Abb  tumhaaare  naam  se  Mash'hoor  hai



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Namanzoor=Unacceptable ; Maghroor=proud ;
Dastoor=tareeqa ;Mastoor=Ladies ;Khanjar-
bakaf=Dagger in hands;Mashkoor=thankful;
Kafoor=Camphor/kapoor;faqat=merely

very nice,sir
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«Reply #6 on: July 15, 2013, 05:40:35 PM »
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Kal  talak  Khanjar  bakaf  thha  jo  Raqeeb  ,
Abb  tah - e - dil  se  mera  Mashkoor  hai

waah waah lajawaab Hasan sahab
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bahut umda saaheb, bahut waqt baad aapko padho, aur har baar ki tarah is ghazal ko bhi taazgi se bhara paaya, bahut maza aaya padh kar, bas aage bhi aap yuNhi likhte raheN aur bazm meN chaar chaand lagaate raheN...!!
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«Reply #8 on: July 15, 2013, 07:56:53 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob hasan bhai.. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: July 15, 2013, 09:14:24 PM »
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Its very beautiful creation..
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waah waah Hasan Sir bahut hi khoob, laajawaab ghazal, jitni taareef karuN kam hai. DheroN daad aur ek Rau qubool kijiye meri taraf se.
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«Reply #11 on: July 15, 2013, 11:53:51 PM »
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«Reply #12 on: July 16, 2013, 02:26:41 AM »
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Badi umdah ghazal kahi hai Siddiqui sahab. Parhkar achha laga.
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«Reply #14 on: July 16, 2013, 03:18:08 AM »
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Wah Wah Kya Khub Ghazal Kahi Hai Saheb Maza Aa Gaya
Shuru Se Akhir Tak Sabhi Ashaar Behad Pasand Aaye Mujhey
Is Khoobsurat Peshkash Pe Dili Dad Ba Aawaz e Buland Kabul Farmaaye


Shad o Aabaad Rahiye

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