pyar simat aaya hai.......

by yati_om on August 31, 2009, 03:43:10 PM
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पहलू में ही डरकर प्यार सिमट आया है.
अपनी दुनिया का आकार सिमट आया है.

मॉं,बाबूजी,भइया,भाभी साथ नहीं हैं,
पत्नी-बच्चों तक परिवार सिमट आया है.

बच्चे अब चंदा मामा को भूल गए हैं,
टी.वी.तक उनका संसार सिमट आया है.

खीर-सिवैयां रंग-गुलाल वही हैं लेकिन,
अपने आँगन तक त्यौहार सिमट आया है.

शादी-ब्याह,ख़ुशी-मातम किसको फुर्सत है,
रिश्तों का भी कारोबार सिमट आया है.

          ओमप्रकाश यती
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«Reply #1 on: August 31, 2009, 05:12:24 PM »
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plz roman hindi me b lihkaen na....
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«Reply #2 on: August 31, 2009, 06:04:31 PM »
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dad deta hu aapki muhabbat ka
kyon kimujhe bhi kuch aisa hi
mahsoos hota hai apni jaan ke
bare me soch kar
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«Reply #3 on: August 31, 2009, 06:45:11 PM »
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Wah wah bahut khoob Yati ji and Kaisher ji very beautiful gazal. Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #4 on: September 01, 2009, 08:51:43 AM »
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bahut khub
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«Reply #5 on: September 01, 2009, 08:58:17 AM »
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Bahut achchha likhate ho Dost
Khubsurat rachna hai
Aise hi likhe jao, badi tarakki karoge
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«Reply #6 on: September 01, 2009, 01:26:14 PM »
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bhai Sarvesh ji,utsahvardhan ke liye bahut-bahut dhanyavad..........
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«Reply #7 on: September 01, 2009, 04:43:19 PM »
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can sum1 plz post in english? muhje b padrna hai!
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«Reply #8 on: September 03, 2009, 03:07:51 AM »
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pehloo mein hi darkar pyar simat aaya hai.
apni    duniya ka aakar simat    aaya hai.

ma,babuji,baiya, bhabhi saath nahin  hain,
patnee-bachchon tak pariwar simat aaya hai.

bachche ab chanda mama ko bhool gaye hain,
tee vee tak unka sansar simat   aaya hai.

shadi-byah,  khusi-matam kisko fursat hai,
rishton  ka  bhi karobar  simat  aaya hai.

kheer-sivaiyan,rang-gulal wahi hain lekin,
apne  aangan tak tyohar  simat  aaya  hai.

                   OMPRAKASH YATI
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«Reply #9 on: September 03, 2009, 05:01:38 AM »
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Wah wah bahut khoob Om ji wonderful gazal. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #10 on: September 03, 2009, 11:27:53 AM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bohot Khoob !!
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«Reply #11 on: September 04, 2009, 05:31:23 PM »
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Quote from: yati_om on August 31, 2009, 03:43:10 PM
पहलू में ही डरकर प्यार सिमट आया है.
अपनी दुनिया का आकार सिमट आया है.

मॉं,बाबूजी,भइया,भाभी साथ नहीं हैं,
पत्नी-बच्चों तक परिवार सिमट आया है.

बच्चे अब चंदा मामा को भूल गए हैं,
टी.वी.तक उनका संसार सिमट आया है.

खीर-सिवैयां रंग-गुलाल वही हैं लेकिन,
अपने आँगन तक त्यौहार सिमट आया है.

शादी-ब्याह,ख़ुशी-मातम किसको फुर्सत है,
रिश्तों का भी कारोबार सिमट आया है.

          ओमप्रकाश यती


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«Reply #12 on: September 09, 2009, 11:33:57 AM »
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omji..badi sunder bahut arthpurn rachna hai aapki....aaj k is maahol ka sahi chitran kiya hai aapne.... Applause Applause Applause

2 line likhne ka mera bhi man ho aaya....

रिश्ते नातों  का व्यवहार सिमट आया है
दिखावा अब समाज में  सिमट आया है

व्यापार  में मिलावट का आकार सिमट आया है
घर घर में अब बिमारी का आलम सिमट आया है


Quote from: yati_om on August 31, 2009, 03:43:10 PM
पहलू में ही डरकर प्यार सिमट आया है.
अपनी दुनिया का आकार सिमट आया है.

मॉं,बाबूजी,भइया,भाभी साथ नहीं हैं,
पत्नी-बच्चों तक परिवार सिमट आया है.

बच्चे अब चंदा मामा को भूल गए हैं,
टी.वी.तक उनका संसार सिमट आया है.

खीर-सिवैयां रंग-गुलाल वही हैं लेकिन,
अपने आँगन तक त्यौहार सिमट आया है.

शादी-ब्याह,ख़ुशी-मातम किसको फुर्सत है,
रिश्तों का भी कारोबार सिमट आया है.

          ओमप्रकाश यती
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«Reply #13 on: September 09, 2009, 04:52:15 PM »
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Quote from: smardia on September 09, 2009, 11:33:57 AM
omji..badi sunder bahut arthpurn rachna hai aapki....aaj k is maahol ka sahi chitran kiya hai aapne.... Applause Applause Applause

2 line likhne ka mera bhi man ho aaya....

रिश्ते नातों  का व्यवहार सिमट आया है
दिखावा अब समाज में  सिमट आया है

व्यापार  में मिलावट का आकार सिमट आया है
घर घर में अब बिमारी का आलम सिमट आया है



bahoot khoob smardia ji!!!
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«Reply #14 on: September 09, 2009, 09:35:35 PM »
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Wah bahut khoob Smardia ji beautiful lines. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause
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