pyasa

by hid_bigb on January 26, 2009, 08:59:16 AM
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ret ke sehra me pyasa khada tha
ek katre ki aas me jami per pada tha.

 mannate mangate dum nikalne ko hua
ek katra na fir bhi mayssar hua.

fir khuda ko mane gum e kissa mera sunaya
sun kissa pathar dil usne bhi ek katra aasu giraya

wo khuda ke aasu na the raham tha
ek jakhmi parinde ke liye murham tha


pyasa main pagal na kuch dekh paya
aasu aur pani me na fark samjh paaya.

pikar aasu main aaj khush tha
mere gumo ka bojh aaj to kam aaya.
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salil2002
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«Reply #1 on: January 26, 2009, 09:04:40 AM »
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achcha likha bhai jaan

kii ret k samandar mei qatr bhi keemti hai
haan ek ashq bhi , kohinoor sa keemti hai
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Roja
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«Reply #2 on: January 26, 2009, 09:43:56 AM »
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ret ke sehra me pyasa khada tha
ek katre ki aas me

Nice lines Bigb ji

Ret pe naam kabhi likhte nahi,
Kyun ke ret pe likhe naam kabhi tikhte nahi.
Aap kehte ho ke tum pathar dil ho,
Parr pathar pe like naam kabhi mithte nahi.

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afreen_madhu
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«Reply #3 on: January 26, 2009, 09:51:29 AM »
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Rilli awesum u three..
bohot hi acha likha app sab ne..
Nice lines Bigb ji

Ret pe naam kabhi likhte nahi,
Kyun ke ret pe likhe naam kabhi tikhte nahi.
Aap kehte ho ke tum pathar dil ho,
Parr pathar pe like naam kabhi mithte nahi.

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yeh humein sabse acha laga..
jisne bhi likha bohot khoob likha...
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Roja
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«Reply #4 on: January 26, 2009, 10:33:01 AM »
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Rilli awesum u three..
bohot hi acha likha app sab ne..
yeh humein sabse acha laga..
jisne bhi likha bohot khoob likha...

Thanks Madhu
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