Qareeb Apne Jo Aayega, Woh Chaahe Ho 'Raqeeb' Apna....Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'

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qareeb apne jo aayega, woh chaahe ho 'Raqeeb' apna
magar rakhkhenNge ham uskee mohabbat kaa bharam kuchh kuchh

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
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«Reply #1 on: June 10, 2011, 05:56:29 PM »
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acha hai…
lekin hum bhi auron ki tarah chahenge ki aap ye poori ghazal ekmust post karen…
hume ek sath parhkar ye smjh ayega ki ye aapne kis base aur feel se likha hai…
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«Reply #2 on: June 11, 2011, 01:08:47 AM »
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qareeb apne jo aayega, woh chaahe ho 'Raqeeb' apna
magar rakhkhenNge ham uskee mohabbat kaa bharam kuchh kuchh

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'

Good One ... Satish Ji !
Dil Se Daad ... !!!!
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«Reply #3 on: June 11, 2011, 04:53:21 AM »
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Nirala Ji,

She'r passand karne aur jawab dene ka
Bahut..bahut shukriya.

Pooree ghazal jaldi hee post karoonga.

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«Reply #4 on: June 11, 2011, 04:58:31 AM »
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Anshumali Ji,

Bahut bahut shukriya aapka ki aapne
meri ghazal ke ek she'r ko pasand
kiya aur reply kiya. Ab tak poori ghazal
is site par post kar chuka hoon, lekin
kishton men.

Jaldi hi post karoonga ek saath.

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«Reply #5 on: June 11, 2011, 05:49:23 AM »
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qareeb apne jo aayega, woh chaahe ho 'Raqeeb' apna
magar rakhkhenNge ham uskee mohabbat kaa bharam kuchh kuchh

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'


        bahut khoob
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            iss duniya daari mein sabhi hain aaj besharam bechain,
           magar beti ki izaat ke khatir  rak te hain sharam kuch kuch
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«Reply #6 on: June 11, 2011, 06:43:41 AM »
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Waah...waah Bechain Sahab aapne to
nahle pe dahla maar diya.

Jawab dene aur usee bahr men tabshira
wo bhi itni jaldi karne ke liye bahut
bahut shukriya.

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«Reply #7 on: June 19, 2011, 08:37:45 AM »
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qareeb apne jo aayega, woh chaahe ho 'Raqeeb' apna
magar rakhkhenNge ham uskee mohabbat kaa bharam kuchh kuchh

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'

BAHUT KHOOB SSR
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«Reply #8 on: June 19, 2011, 11:45:09 AM »
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qareeb apne jo aayega, woh chaahe ho 'Raqeeb' apna
magar rakhkhenNge ham uskee mohabbat kaa bharam kuchh kuchh

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'

Good One ... Satish Ji !

Dil se daad ... !!
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«Reply #9 on: June 19, 2011, 11:53:17 AM »
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KA Ji,

She'r pasand karne ka bahut bahut shukriya.
Shayad ab tak pooree ghazal bhi pad lee hogee.

Please comment if likes.

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«Reply #10 on: June 19, 2011, 11:59:47 AM »
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Naresh Ji,

Jawab dene ka bahut bahut shukriya..

Ab tak to shayad pooree ghazal bhi padh
lee hogee aapne agar naheen to zaroor padhen
abhee bhee YO main page par hai...

Heading hai....

Mohabbat Kee Qasam Kuchh Kuchh....Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'

Please comments if likes.

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Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
 
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«Reply #11 on: October 22, 2011, 11:20:29 AM »
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qareeb apne jo aayega, woh chaahe ho 'Raqeeb' apna
magar rakhkhenNge ham uskee mohabbat kaa bharam kuchh kuchh

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
Bahut Khoob Satish ji
Apne lucknow valo ki shaan badha di hai.
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«Reply #12 on: October 24, 2011, 06:48:25 AM »
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mkv ji,

Jawab dene aur she'r pasand
farmaane ka bahut bahut shukriya.

Waise poori ghazal baad men post ke
hai Roman men bhe aur Devnaagri men bhi.
agar ab tak na dekhi ho to dekh sakte hain.

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