QATL TO BAATIL HUA HAI....////..................................////....IFTAKHAR

by Iftakhar Ahmad on November 18, 2014, 09:40:22 PM
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«Reply #15 on: December 04, 2014, 05:01:13 AM »
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Qadeer saheb nawazish, behad shukriya ghazal pe waqt dene ka. Maine Shahar ko 12 use kiya hai mere khayaal se aap isse 21 dekh rahe haiN. Maine kitne shayaroN ko shahar 12 use karte dekha hai haalaaNki mujhe maaloom hai ye asl lafz shahr (21) hi hota hai.

ifteqaar sahab aaj yahan aana hua aapka jawab parh kar acha laga....kya aap mujhe bata sakte hain ke kaunse shair ne lafz shahr ko 12 istemaal kiya hai ? ...khair kissi ki achaiyun ko apnana chahiye ghalatiyun ko nahi ....chunke aapki ghazal jub mukkamal bhr me hai to phir kyun fizool me ek sher ke liye apni fanni shaqsiyat ko qatre me daala jaaye ..baaqi aap sahebe iqtyaar hain ...

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