QistoN meiN meri jaan gayi hai..........................................IFTAKHAR

by Iftakhar Ahmad on January 14, 2013, 12:23:30 AM
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Aashiq  huN   maiN  jaan  gayi  hai
Wo   bhi   ab   ye   maan   gayi  hai

Aaj     to       usne        baat       kari
Roothi   thi    ab    maan   gayi  hai

Hai   fitrat   se   wo    hoor,   malak
Wo bhi mujhko pehchaan gayi hai

YuN   hi    nahiN     gayi     wo   yaar
Le  ke   dil   ke   armaan  gayi   hai

Hoke      tujhse        juda      sanam
QistoN  meiN  meri  jaan  gayi  hai


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* Malak: Angel
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«Reply #1 on: January 14, 2013, 02:16:42 AM »
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waah boht khub boht umda hasan sir
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«Reply #2 on: January 14, 2013, 04:01:38 AM »
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«Reply #5 on: January 14, 2013, 05:20:15 AM »
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«Reply #6 on: January 14, 2013, 07:19:12 AM »
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Quote from: Iftakhar Ahmad on January 14, 2013, 12:23:30 AM

Aashiq  huN   maiN  jaan  gayi  hai
Wo   bhi   ab   ye   maan   gayi  hai

Aaj     to       usne        baat       kari
Roothi   thi    ab    maan   gayi  hai

Hai   fitrat   se   wo    hoor,   malak
Wo bhi mujhko pehchaan gayi hai

YuN   hi    nahiN     gayi     wo   yaar
Le  ke   dil   ke   armaan  gayi   hai

Hoke      tujhse        juda      sanam
QistoN  meiN  meri  jaan  gayi  hai


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* Malak: Angel

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Quote from: saahill on January 14, 2013, 02:16:42 AM
waah boht khub boht umda hasan sir
Shukriya Sahil bhai, but this is Iftakhar's post, Hasan sir ki post nahi hai and this the third time aapne meri post ko Hasan Sir ki post samjhi hai.  Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #9 on: January 14, 2013, 08:21:54 AM »
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boht khub hasan sir
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«Reply #10 on: January 14, 2013, 10:29:15 AM »
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Ifteqaar Sahaab Aadaab!


Kia abat hai janab waaH bahut khoob... badi hi khoob aur achchi
kalaam kahi hai.. Usual Smile

Kam lafzoN meiN bade hi khoob ashaar kahe hai aapne... Is khoob
kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye..


Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye..

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bohut khooob ahmed bhai lajwab daad qubool kareN
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
beautifully written
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