raahi gaya (by vb)

by vb on November 30, 2013, 07:10:33 PM
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Safar men chhor k tanha mujhay chala he gaya
Wo ake shakhs divaana mujhay bana he gaya

RaheeN na manzilen, na aashiyaaN, na raah koi
Ye waqt bhe meri aavaargi pe aa he gaya

Dhoondti aaeeN manaazil tu aa k kya dekha
Raastay, dasht men hayraaN kharay hen; raahi gaya

Uthaa k bojh musaafat ka, dastakeN day kar
Khula na dar tu musaafir kahiN chala he gaya

Ghubaar ban k reh gayay, main aur meri thakan
Jo meer-e-kaarvaaN tha, qaafila barha he gaya

Wo rasoomaat jo ba-waqt-e-hijar hoti hen
Meray bhe apnay aqeeday ki theeN; nibaahi gaya

JunooN men haath utha kar, ajaabatoN say na dar
Dua ki baat na kar, taalib-e-dua he gaya


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«Reply #1 on: November 30, 2013, 07:56:37 PM »
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waah waah ,.......khoobsoorat ghazal vb jee ,..........bohat c daad,.............
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«Reply #2 on: November 30, 2013, 08:27:23 PM »
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waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #3 on: November 30, 2013, 09:20:05 PM »
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Quote from: vb on November 30, 2013, 07:10:33 PM


Safar men chhor k tanha mujhay chala he gaya
Wo ake shakhs divaana mujhay bana he gaya

RaheeN na manzilen, na aashiyaaN, na raah koi
Ye waqt bhe meri aavaargi pe aa he gaya

Dhoondti aaeeN manaazil tu aa k kya dekha
K rastay, dasht men hayraaN kharay hen; raahi gaya

Uthaa k bojh musaafat ka, dastakeN day kar
Khula na dar tu musaafir kahiN chala he gaya

Ghubaar ban k reh gayay, main aur meri thakan
Jo meer-e-kaarvaaN tha, qaafila barha he gaya

Wo rasoomaat jo ba-waqt-e-hijar hoti hen
Meray bhe apnay aqeeday ki theeN; nibaahi gaya

JunooN men haath utha kar, ajaabatoN say na dar
Dua ki baat na kar, taalib-e-dua he gaya


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«Reply #4 on: November 30, 2013, 11:04:39 PM »
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वाह....वाह...बहुत खूब....
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«Reply #5 on: December 01, 2013, 07:37:58 AM »
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waah waah bahut khoob VB jee.
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«Reply #6 on: December 01, 2013, 09:45:14 AM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #7 on: December 02, 2013, 10:29:54 AM »
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Quote from: laaiba on November 30, 2013, 07:56:37 PM
waah waah ,.......khoobsoorat ghazal vb jee ,..........bohat c daad,.............

Shukriya....... laaiba jee.... Aap ka.....
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«Reply #8 on: December 02, 2013, 02:49:38 PM »
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Quote from: laaiba on November 30, 2013, 07:56:37 PM
waah waah ,.......khoobsoorat ghazal vb jee ,..........bohat c daad,.............

buhat shukriya aap ka laaiba jee!
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Quote from: sksaini4 on November 30, 2013, 08:27:23 PM
waah waah bahut khoob

shukrya.. sksaini4 jee...
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Quote from: Saman Firdaus on November 30, 2013, 09:20:05 PM
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thanx...
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Quote from: amit_prakash_meet on November 30, 2013, 11:04:39 PM
वाह....वाह...बहुत खूब....

amit_prakash_meet jee! hum maafi chahtay hen k hum hindi rasm-ul-khat parhnay ki nemat say mehroom hen... aap ne taareef ki ya tanqeed... hum dono sooraton men aap k thankful hen... tanqeed ki soorat men afsose raha hamen... k ham is tanqeed say kuchh seekh na payay...
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Quote from: Iftakhar Ahmad on December 01, 2013, 07:37:58 AM
waah waah bahut khoob VB jee.

Iftakhar Ahmad sahab! hausla afzaai ka buhat shukriya...
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Quote from: nandbahu on December 01, 2013, 09:45:14 AM
bahut khoob

thanx....
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