Raat beeti karwatoN meN ...........................MKV:Ghazals

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raah ki dushwaariyaN aur bemuravvat zindgee
par umeedoN ke sahaare saans ye chalti rahee

hai pareshaaN dekhe soorat aaine meN baar-baar
aaj mahfil sooni- sooni ajnabee si kyoN lagee

raat beeti karwatoN meN dil hi dil meN sochte
pher lee zaalim ne nazreN kya khata aakhir huee

khair-o-shar, aib-o-hunar sab saamne tere haiN ab
aab-e-dariya hai jawaani rokne se kab rukee

nafs-e-ammara ki zad meN hai mujhe ayn al-yaqeen
maarna chahe na isko , aadmii meN yeh kamee

kashti-e-umr-e-rawaaN par chalna mazbooree 'çhiragh'
AasmaaN chhuune ki chahat ab naheeN dil meN rahee

nafs-e-ammara- ill desires
ayn al- yaqeen- the eye of certainty


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Re: Raat beeti karwatoN meN ...........................MKV

«Reply #1 on: September 02, 2013, 02:32:19 PM »

just suupeerb MKV ji mind blowing


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Re: Raat beeti karwatoN meN ...........................MKV

«Reply #2 on: September 02, 2013, 02:53:08 PM »

nafs-e-ammara ki zad meN hai mujhe ayn al- yaqeen
maarna chahe na isko , aadmii meN yeh kamee

WAAH WAAH MKV JI KYA KHOOB KAHA HAI ZABARDAST.

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Re: Raat beeti karwatoN meN ...........................MKV

«Reply #3 on: September 02, 2013, 03:31:28 PM »

daad hee daad


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«Reply #4 on: September 02, 2013, 03:31:52 PM »

very nice


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Re: Raat beeti karwatoN meN ...........................MKV

«Reply #5 on: September 02, 2013, 03:37:29 PM »

Quote from: mkv on September 02, 2013, 01:27:53 PM

raah ki dushwaariyaN aur bemuravvat zindgee
par umeedoN ke sahaare saans ye chalti rahee

chhote monh barii baat jaisi hogi ye kahna par kah hi deta hu..... Jitna achcha pahla mishra tha, dosra nahi lagaa...

hai pareshaaN dekhe soorat aaine meN baar-baar
aaj mahfil sooni- sooni ajnabee si kyoN lagee

Bahtreen.... Bahut saandaaaar..... Apni surat dekhe baar-baar waah waah

raat beeti karwatoN meN dil hi dil meN sochte
pher lee zaalim ne nazreN kya khata aakhir huee

Kitna achcha sher kahaa hai aapne........ Wakayi aesa hota hai... kaai baar hota hai.... Sabke saath hota hai... Khud mere saath bhi aesa ho chuka hai... Koi apna dekhkar bhi ajnabi ban jata hai....Tab ye sawaal dil me uthta rahta hai

khair-o-shar, aib-o-hunar sab saamne tere haiN ab
aab-e-dariya hai jawaani rokne se kab rukee

wwaaah waaaah

nafs-e-ammara ki zad meN hai mujhe ayn al- yaqeen
maarna chahe na isko , aadmii meN yeh kamee

Waah kyaa baat kah di ..... Dil jeet liyaa aapne

kashti-e-umr-e-rawaaN par chalna mazbooree 'çhiragh'
AasmaaN chhuune ki chahat ab naheeN dil meN rahee

ha ha ha ha.....Aasmaan ko naa chhuu ao to achchaa hai...... Pataa hai na pichli baar kyaa huaaaa thaaa

nafs-e-ammara- buri icchaayeN
aynul- yaqeen- gahra viswaas

++1 for Yor my darling brother


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Re: Raat beeti karwatoN meN ...........................MKV

«Reply #6 on: September 02, 2013, 03:48:44 PM »

Quote from: mkv on September 02, 2013, 01:27:53 PM

raah ki dushwaariyaN aur bemuravvat zindgee
par umeedoN ke sahaare saans ye chalti rahee

hai pareshaaN dekhe soorat aaine meN baar-baar
aaj mahfil sooni- sooni ajnabee si kyoN lagee

raat beeti karwatoN meN dil hi dil meN sochte
pher lee zaalim ne nazreN kya khata aakhir huee

khair-o-shar, aib-o-hunar sab saamne tere haiN ab
aab-e-dariya hai jawaani rokne se kab rukee

nafs-e-ammara ki zad meN hai mujhe ayn al- yaqeen
maarna chahe na isko , aadmii meN yeh kamee

kashti-e-umr-e-rawaaN par chalna mazbooree 'çhiragh'
AasmaaN chhuune ki chahat ab naheeN dil meN rahee

nafs-e-ammara- buri icchaayeN
aynul- yaqeen- gahra viswaas

waah bohat khoob mkv ji,..bohat c daad,...


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ParwaaZ

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Re: Raat beeti karwatoN meN ...........................MKV

«Reply #7 on: September 02, 2013, 04:39:50 PM »

MKV Jee Aadaab...!

Achchi kalaam huyi hai janab.. khoob khayaal piroye haiN aapne...

Amuman puri kalaam khoob huyi par matla aur maqta khaas rahe, aur maqte se ulaa sher bahut umdaa raha...

Is khoob kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez...


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Re: Raat beeti karwatoN meN ...........................MKV

«Reply #8 on: September 02, 2013, 04:52:36 PM »

bahut khoob Applause


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Re: Raat beeti karwatoN meN ...........................MKV

«Reply #9 on: September 02, 2013, 04:56:06 PM »

waaaaaaaah waaaaaaaaaah.... bahut bahut aur bahut khoob mukesh ji..

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Re: Raat beeti karwatoN meN ...........................MKV

«Reply #10 on: September 02, 2013, 05:08:48 PM »

Bahut khoobsurat , sanjeeda , me'yaari shairi se
bharpoor hai aap ki yeh Ghazal. Parh kar tabeeat
khush ho gai. Sabhi ash'aar bahut aala hain ,
lekin zail ke ash'aar mujhe khusoosi tareef ke
liye majboor kar rahe hain . Khuda aap ke kalaam
ko yunhi zor ata karta rahe .Amin

khair-o-shar, aib-o-hunar sab saamne tere haiN ab
aab-e-dariya hai jawaani rokne se kab rukee

nafs-e-ammara ki zad meN hai mujhe ayn al- yaqeen
maarna chahe na isko , aadmii meN yeh kamee

kashti-e-umr-e-rawaaN par chalna majbooree 'çhiragh'
AasmaaN chhuune ki chahat ab naheeN dil meN rahee


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Re: Raat beeti karwatoN meN ...........................MKV

«Reply #11 on: September 02, 2013, 05:25:21 PM »

kis sher ki tareef karen, har sher lajawaab - padh kar bas waaah waaaah aur waaah hi nikla, dheron daad...
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«Reply #12 on: September 02, 2013, 05:31:55 PM »

bahut khoob, dhero daad Applause


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«Reply #13 on: September 02, 2013, 07:25:10 PM »

Waaaaaah bahut achchi peshkash mukesh ji..sabhi ashaar qabil e daad rahe... khaas kar yeh ashaar bahut bahut bahut pasand aaye..

hai pareshaaN dekhe soorat aaine meN baar-baar
aaj mahfil sooni- sooni ajnabee si kyoN lagee

raat beeti karwatoN meN dil hi dil meN sochte
pher lee zaalim ne nazreN kya khata aakhir huee

nafs-e-ammara ki zad meN hai mujhe ayn al- yaqeen
maarna chahe na isko , aadmii meN yeh kamee

Applause


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«Reply #14 on: September 02, 2013, 07:40:46 PM »

waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aah!!! waah waah waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah, bilkul top class, aa'la darje ki ghazal kahi hai Mukesh jee, taareef ke liye aaj alfaaz nahiN haiN, mizaaj khush ho gaya padh kar. Khususann Matla, 4th aur 5th sher bahut pasand aaye. DheroN mubarakbaad aur ek adna sa Rau de sakta huN filhaal to, haalaaNki ye ghazal bahut kuch deserve karti hai.


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