Raat beeti karwatoN meN ...........................MKV -Panna 3:Ghazals

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«Reply #30 on: September 09, 2013, 08:30:51 PM »

Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on September 02, 2013, 05:08:48 PM

Bahut khoobsurat , sanjeeda , me'yaari shairi se
bharpoor hai aap ki yeh Ghazal. Parh kar tabeeat
khush ho gai. Sabhi ash'aar bahut aala hain ,
lekin zail ke ash'aar mujhe khusoosi tareef ke
liye majboor kar rahe hain . Khuda aap ke kalaam
ko yunhi zor ata karta rahe .Amin

khair-o-shar, aib-o-hunar sab saamne tere haiN ab
aab-e-dariya hai jawaani rokne se kab rukee

nafs-e-ammara ki zad meN hai mujhe ayn al- yaqeen
maarna chahe na isko , aadmii meN yeh kamee

kashti-e-umr-e-rawaaN par chalna majbooree 'çhiragh'
AasmaaN chhuune ki chahat ab naheeN dil meN rahee

bahut bahut shukriya Sir


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Re: Raat beeti karwatoN meN ...........................MKV

«Reply #31 on: September 09, 2013, 11:22:47 PM »

Quote from: Iqtedar on September 02, 2013, 05:25:21 PM

kis sher ki tareef karen, har sher lajawaab - padh kar bas waaah waaaah aur waaah hi nikla, dheron daad...
Applause

shukriya Iqtedar jee


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Re: Raat beeti karwatoN meN ...........................MKV

«Reply #32 on: September 10, 2013, 07:35:17 PM »

Quote from: prashad on September 02, 2013, 05:31:55 PM

bahut khoob, dhero daad Applause

Pasand karne ke liye shukriya Prashad jee


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Re: Raat beeti karwatoN meN ...........................MKV

«Reply #33 on: September 11, 2013, 11:25:47 PM »

Quote from: Iftakhar Ahmad on September 02, 2013, 07:40:46 PM

waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aah!!! waah waah waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah, bilkul top class, aa'la darje ki ghazal kahi hai Mukesh jee, taareef ke liye aaj alfaaz nahiN haiN, mizaaj khush ho gaya padh kar. Khususann Matla, 4th aur 5th sher bahut pasand aaye. DheroN mubarakbaad aur ek adna sa Rau de sakta huN filhaal to, haalaaNki ye ghazal bahut kuch deserve karti hai.

bahut bahut shukriya mere bhai


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Re: Raat beeti karwatoN meN ...........................MKV

«Reply #34 on: September 12, 2013, 11:12:35 AM »

Quote from: aqsh on September 02, 2013, 07:25:10 PM

Waaaaaah bahut achchi peshkash mukesh ji..sabhi ashaar qabil e daad rahe... khaas kar yeh ashaar bahut bahut bahut pasand aaye..

hai pareshaaN dekhe soorat aaine meN baar-baar
aaj mahfil sooni- sooni ajnabee si kyoN lagee

raat beeti karwatoN meN dil hi dil meN sochte
pher lee zaalim ne nazreN kya khata aakhir huee

nafs-e-ammara ki zad meN hai mujhe ayn al- yaqeen
maarna chahe na isko , aadmii meN yeh kamee

Applause

thanks


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Re: Raat beeti karwatoN meN ...........................MKV

«Reply #35 on: September 13, 2013, 09:39:55 PM »

kashti-e-umr-e-rawaaN par chalna mazbooree 'çhiragh'
AasmaaN chhuune ki chahat ab naheeN dil meN rahee Applause

Der se pad paaya, bahut khoob


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Re: Raat beeti karwatoN meN ...........................MKV

«Reply #36 on: September 14, 2013, 10:34:43 AM »

Quote from: Advo.RavinderaRavi on September 02, 2013, 08:22:26 PM

Nice One.

thanks


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Re: Raat beeti karwatoN meN ...........................MKV

«Reply #37 on: September 14, 2013, 02:41:13 PM »

Quote from: nashwani on September 03, 2013, 02:35:02 AM

Bahut bahut umda, laajawab mukesh jee..dhero dhero daad..iss behatareen peshkash par.. happy9

shukriya


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Re: Raat beeti karwatoN meN ...........................MKV

«Reply #38 on: September 14, 2013, 04:19:33 PM »

Quote from: Miraj. on September 03, 2013, 09:23:11 AM

waah waah super..................

Thanks a lot


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Re: Raat beeti karwatoN meN ...........................MKV

«Reply #39 on: September 15, 2013, 12:39:30 AM »

Quote from: Taish on September 03, 2013, 05:04:35 PM

mukesh sir ji, gair murradif ghazleN mujhe humesha se bahut ahchi lagti rahi haiN, aur aapne bhi bakhubi nibhaya hai is ghazal ko, is umda peshkash ke liye hazaaroN dili daad qubool farmaayeN...

Thanks Taish jee


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Re: Raat beeti karwatoN meN ...........................MKV

«Reply #40 on: September 15, 2013, 04:06:17 PM »

Quote from: amit_prakash_meet on September 04, 2013, 03:25:12 PM

बहुत ही उम्दा पेशकश.......ढेरों दाद और मुबारकबाद.....
Clapping Smiley

shukriya Amit jee


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Re: Raat beeti karwatoN meN ...........................MKV

«Reply #41 on: September 16, 2013, 07:23:49 PM »

waah waah bahut khoob


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Re: Raat beeti karwatoN meN ...........................MKV

«Reply #42 on: September 17, 2013, 05:46:13 PM »

Quote from: livingbytheday on September 08, 2013, 08:22:02 PM

waah waah bahut khoob

thanks Deepak jee


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Re: Raat beeti karwatoN meN ...........................MKV

«Reply #43 on: September 19, 2013, 03:17:54 PM »

Quote from: Ram Saraswat on September 13, 2013, 09:39:55 PM

kashti-e-umr-e-rawaaN par chalna mazbooree 'çhiragh'
AasmaaN chhuune ki chahat ab naheeN dil meN rahee Applause

Der se pad paaya, bahut khoob

Shukriya Sir


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Re: Raat beeti karwatoN meN ...........................MKV

«Reply #44 on: September 19, 2013, 07:40:42 PM »

Quote from: livingbytheday on September 16, 2013, 07:23:49 PM

waah waah bahut khoob

Aapne ise dobara padha..taareef bhi kee
bahut bahut shukriya


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