Raat hui hai gehri bahut tanhayee ko tara de do

by livingbytheday on May 15, 2012, 04:11:46 PM
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Raat hui hai gehri bahut tanhayee ko tara de do
Sagar mein kahi duub na jaye, in moujo ko kinara de do

Mehfil mein tanha rehtey hain, aisey kaisey behlega dil
Dil ko sach gur behlana hain, toh ek yaad tumhara de do

Aakhir baar safar par hain, phirse teri zaroorat hain
Ek kandhe ki ub bhi kami hain, tum hi phir se sahara de do

Khaawish ki raat mili hain, khawabo sa sab kuch ho jaye
Behki behki saanjh dhali hain, ub ik chand aawara de do

Ya toh ishq ki thandak ho, Ya toh jal kar khaakh ho jaye
Dheeme dheeme sulag raha dil, Yaadon ka angara de do

Apne naam ki mehndi lekar, dil ko mere rang jo gaya hain
uski yaadon mein hain zinda hum, wo rangrej dubara de do

sub aate hain raah se pehle manzil aankhon mein lekar
jisko “Deepak”  raste ka nasha ho,  aisa ek banjara de do


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«Reply #1 on: May 15, 2012, 04:16:58 PM »
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Raat hui hai gehri bahut tanhayee ko tara de do
Sagar mein kahi duub na jaye, in moujo ko kinara de do

Mehfil mein tanha rehtey hain, aisey kaisey behlega dil
Dil ko sach gur behlana hain, toh ek yaad tumhara de do

Aakhir baar safar par hain, phirse teri zaroorat hain
Ek kandhe ki ub bhi kami hain, tum hi phir se sahara de do

Khaawish ki raat mili hain, khawabo sa sab kuch ho jaye
Behki behki saanjh dhali hain, ub ik chand aawara de do

Ya toh ishq ki thandak ho, Ya toh jal kar khaakh ho jaye
Dheeme dheeme sulag raha dil, Yaadon ka angara de do

Apne naam ki mehndi lekar, dil ko mere rang jo gaya hain
uski yaadon mein hain zinda hum, wo rangrej dubara de do

sub aate hain raah se pehle manzil aankhon mein lekar
jisko “Deepak”  raste ka nasha ho,  aisa ek banjara de do




gud one. lekin tumhara nahin tumhaari hoga.! check kar lein
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«Reply #2 on: May 15, 2012, 04:38:53 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause mindblowing.... bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne deepak ji... bahut bahut khoob.....!!!
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«Reply #3 on: May 15, 2012, 04:51:59 PM »
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thodaa language par dhyaan do baaqqe bahut achhe khyaal hain
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«Reply #4 on: May 15, 2012, 04:54:22 PM »
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Nice... Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: May 15, 2012, 04:58:40 PM »
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acha likha hai apne
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«Reply #6 on: May 15, 2012, 06:14:12 PM »
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bht khoob
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«Reply #7 on: May 15, 2012, 06:14:53 PM »
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bht khoob
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«Reply #8 on: May 15, 2012, 06:34:18 PM »
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Deepak Srivastav Jee Aadaab!


janab behad achci kalaam kahi hai aapne.. sabhi ashaar
aik se badhkar aik rahe... Usual Smile

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Humari dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye.. Usual Smile

HaaN aapne dusra sher meiN yaad tumhaara de do kaha hai.. "
Yaad feminine word hai toH yaad tumhari de do hoNga par
shayad aapne kafiye ko match karne ke liye yeH galti
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Khair ... aate rhaiye.. Likhate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
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«Reply #9 on: May 15, 2012, 07:04:41 PM »
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very nice dear...
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«Reply #10 on: May 16, 2012, 11:28:58 AM »
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Bahut Khoob Deepak jee
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«Reply #11 on: June 04, 2012, 04:18:50 PM »
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thodaa language par dhyaan do baaqqe bahut achhe khyaal hain

thank you sir, apka feedback is much appreciated
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«Reply #12 on: June 06, 2012, 12:02:11 PM »
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gud one. lekin tumhara nahin tumhaari hoga.! check kar lein

thank you for the feedback, i will correct it
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«Reply #13 on: June 06, 2012, 12:03:03 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause mindblowing.... bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne deepak ji... bahut bahut khoob.....!!!

shukriyaa,,,,,,
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«Reply #14 on: June 06, 2012, 12:03:39 PM »
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Nice... Usual Smile

thank you
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