Raat jaag kar yaadon mein, neendon ko gawaya tha

by livingbytheday on July 13, 2012, 07:34:37 PM
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Kuch yaad nahi aata kabhi tujhko bataya tha
Raat jaag kar yaadon mein, neendon ko gawaya tha

Qaatil ki nigaahon mein, maqsad ki safayee thi
Phir raat ko shamma ne parwana jalaaya tha

Ek leher ki hadh tak hi,  tha khel nahi jaana
Jub ret ke mehlo mein khawabo ko sajaaya tha

Woh humse mohabatt ka ijhaar nahi karte
Par humko  kasam dekar iqraar karaaya tha

Kuch ishq ki marzi thi, kuch raah mein kaantein tey
Paidal ke musaaphir ne jub haar kamaaya tha

Aayegi zamaane ki baadal pe keher aakhir
Jugnu ki mohabatt mein kal chand chupaaya tha

Koi aag sulagti hain seene mein humesha se
Shabnam ne na  jaane koun sa, angaara bhujaya tha

Andhero ke fat_tey hi, ghar  roshni ayee  hain
Kya jaane yahan  “Deepak”  kisne jalaaya tha
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«Reply #1 on: July 14, 2012, 05:41:04 AM »
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Bahut khoob Deepak jee
Vaah vaah kya baat hai
Bahut khoobsurat ghajal pesh kee hai.
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«Reply #2 on: July 14, 2012, 07:37:04 AM »
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bahut khoob deepak jee dheron badhaaiyaan
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«Reply #3 on: July 14, 2012, 11:16:39 AM »
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Waah bhai Deepak ji. bahut khubsurat ghazal hai.
har  sher  umda . khaas  taur se 3rd sher  bahut
pasand aaya.Dheron daad lijye. HASAN
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«Reply #4 on: July 15, 2012, 10:59:52 AM »
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Quote from: mkv on July 14, 2012, 05:41:04 AM
Bahut khoob Deepak jee
Vaah vaah kya baat hai
Bahut khoobsurat ghajal pesh kee hai.

thank you so much sir for kind words
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«Reply #5 on: July 15, 2012, 11:23:00 AM »
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har alfaaz khoobsurat...gehri bhawnao ka samundar....jinhe shayad samjhna itna bhi aasaan nahi....bahut hi khoob  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: July 15, 2012, 02:03:30 PM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on July 14, 2012, 07:37:04 AM
bahut khoob deepak jee dheron badhaaiyaan

thank you saini sir
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«Reply #7 on: July 15, 2012, 02:11:27 PM »
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 Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: July 16, 2012, 03:07:42 AM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on July 14, 2012, 11:16:39 AM
Waah bhai Deepak ji. bahut khubsurat ghazal hai.
har  sher  umda . khaas  taur se 3rd sher  bahut
pasand aaya.Dheron daad lijye. HASAN

sir aap logo ki housla afjayee ne hi mujhe encourage kiya, accha likhne ke liye, main aapka tahe dil se shukriyaa karta hu, thank you
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«Reply #9 on: July 16, 2012, 02:51:32 PM »
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Quote from: Nikhaar on July 15, 2012, 11:23:00 AM
har alfaaz khoobsurat...gehri bhawnao ka samundar....jinhe shayad samjhna itna bhi aasaan nahi....bahut hi khoob  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

bahut shukriyaa, thank you
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«Reply #10 on: July 16, 2012, 03:07:20 PM »
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boht khub deepak ji
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«Reply #11 on: July 17, 2012, 01:49:23 PM »
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Quote from: mkv on July 14, 2012, 05:41:04 AM
Bahut khoob Deepak jee
Vaah vaah kya baat hai
Bahut khoobsurat ghajal pesh kee hai.

thank you sir
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Quote from: saahill on July 16, 2012, 03:07:20 PM
boht khub deepak ji

thank you saahil ji
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«Reply #13 on: July 17, 2012, 01:52:28 PM »
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thank you sumanji
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