raat katt tee nahee,,,,,,,,,ghazal,,,,,jeet jainam saini

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raat  katt tee  nahi  din  gujartaa nahee,
zindagi rook  jati  hai  waqt rukta nahee,

dard e dil hone se  aankhe  nam hotee jab,
fir zamaane main gam koee chuptaa nahee,

tanhaiya  hone  lage jab  bhee  mere kareeb,
tufaan  udasiyo,n ka  seene fir rukta nahee,

ahal e jahaa,n ke  taane  talwaar  ke jaise,
jo zakham  de  jate  to  lahoo  rukta nahee,

jaam pee late jab  koee yaad  aa jata hai,
woh tadpane  wala manzar  fir rukta nahee,

woh gayi  chore ke  esya  sadma laga jeet,
yaad aaye  shab e firak dil dhadkta nahee,
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«Reply #1 on: February 17, 2015, 12:15:29 PM »
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Bahut khub. dheron daad. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: February 17, 2015, 12:27:56 PM »
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shukriya raji ji daaaaaaaaaaddddd kabool
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Applause Applause icon_flower icon_flower :icon_flower:bahut khoob dheo daad
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«Reply #4 on: February 17, 2015, 07:50:58 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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achi koshish,,, Applause
agar ash'aar wazan mein hotay to kia baat thee!


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dard e dil se  jab aankhein hojaati hein nam,
fir zamaane se gam koee chuptaa nahee
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bahut hee sunder Jeet Sahib.
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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shukriya mazHur ji ger thori urdu aati hame to apko shikayat ka mouka nahi dete,
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 Applause Applause Applause.......

 Bahut bahut khub…..jeetji
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Quote from: jeet jainam on February 17, 2015, 12:05:00 PM



raat  katt tee  nahi  din  gujartaa nahee,
zindagi rook  jati  hai  waqt rukta nahee,

dard e dil hone se  aankhe  nam hotee jab,
fir zamaane main gam koee chuptaa nahee,

tanhaiya  hone  lage jab  bhee  mere kareeb,
tufaan  udasiyo,n ka  seene fir rukta nahee,

ahal e jahaa,n ke  taane  talwaar  ke jaise,
jo zakham  de  jate  to  lahoo  rukta nahee,

jaam pee late jab  koee yaad  aa jata hai,
woh tadpane  wala manzar  fir rukta nahee,

woh gayi  chore ke  esya  sadma laga jeet,
yaad aaye  shab e firak dil dhadkta nahee,


wonderful composition ,sir just mind the spelling you will perform very nice in future.
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