Rahe jab wo dil......<<...Pramod..>>

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Rahe jab wo dil jalate humara
Humne bhi khud ko kasho mei jala daala
Ab  jab bhi aayi wo , aayi yaadein bankar
Humne bhi Unhe ab Mai-khane me bhoola daala

Sauk the ye Kabhi mere lekin
Waqt ne inhe meri aadat bana daala
Maloom tha zakhm denge ye saaz bhi
Par Humne inhe hi humsafar bana daala


Jayein to jaye kaha aye zindagi tu hi bata
Jb Naseeb ne hi mere har zakhm ko Nasoor bana daala
Likhte to the par, aadi nahi the
Aaj Halato ne mujhe sayar bana daala
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«Reply #1 on: April 28, 2012, 06:07:27 AM »
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Nice
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waaaaaah waaaah promodjii...bahut khoob...ApplauseApplauseApplauseApplause
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waaaaaah waaaah promodjii...bahut khoob...ApplauseApplauseApplauseApplause
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Congratulations..

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  Shukriya bahut bahut shukriya admin ji
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«Reply #7 on: April 30, 2012, 11:49:39 AM »
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waah..waah,
aise halaaton ka shukriya jisne hamein Pramod ji se mila dala
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: April 30, 2012, 03:03:40 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut bahut khoob Pramod ji....!!!
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Quote from: amit_prakash_meet on April 30, 2012, 11:49:39 AM
waah..waah,
aise halaaton ka shukriya jisne hamein Pramod ji se mila dala
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Shukriya Amitji...........aapne dil Garden Garden Kar Daala
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut bahut khoob Pramod ji....!!!
Hriday ji. saath rehne ka shukriya dil se...........
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Quote from: sksaini4 on April 29, 2012, 05:45:21 AM
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shukriya saini sir
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waaaaaah waaaah promodjii...bahut khoob...ApplauseApplauseApplauseApplause
Shukriya Dolly ji.
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Quote from: masoom shahjada on April 28, 2012, 06:07:27 AM
Nice
Thankx sehjade ji
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very nice ji... Applause Applause Applause Applause
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