Rahein bas salamat teri bewafaiee......( Ghayel )

by Sajid_Ghayel on June 25, 2012, 07:10:54 PM
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Na aayee samajh humko ab tak na aayee
Yeh duniya khudara yeh teri khudaiee

Sabhi to bure hai bhala kaun mujhse
Karein kaun aakhir meri rehnumaiee

Na rindo se yaari na zahid raha main
Badi behunar umr maine bitaiee

Koi maal hota to rakhte bachakar
Jawani ka kya hai jawani lutaiee

Mai aisa nahi tha mai jo ban gaya hu
Rahein bas salamat teri bewafaiee

Tu usko bhula dein yeh behtar hai Ghayel
Jala de na tujh ko ye aatish paraaee

Sajid Ghayel
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«Reply #1 on: June 25, 2012, 07:29:34 PM »
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Quote from: Sajid_Ghayel on June 25, 2012, 07:10:54 PM
Na aayee samajh humko ab tak na aayee
Yeh duniya khudara yeh teri khudaiee

Sabhi to bure hai bhala kaun mujhse
Karein kaun aakhir meri rehnumaiee

Na rindo se yaari na zahid raha main
Badi behunar umr maine bitaiee

Koi maal hota to rakhte bachakar
Jawani ka kya hai jawani lutaiee

Mai aisa nahi tha mai jo ban gaya hu
Rahein bas salamat teri bewafaiee

Tu usko bhula dein yeh behtar hai Ghayel
Jala de na tujh ko ye aatish paraaee

Sajid Ghayel
Ghayal sirji--
mujhe nahi lagta ki mai iss ghazal par daad dene ki kabiliyat rakhta hun--
bas itna hi kahunga
thanx for this ghazal

sukriya
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«Reply #2 on: June 25, 2012, 08:40:43 PM »
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good....at least you wrote in rhythm (wazan and ba-har ie metre)
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«Reply #3 on: June 25, 2012, 08:46:33 PM »
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Yeh kehne lagi aaj hum se lugayee
bahut sardee he tum na kheencho razayee
abhi na jalao  muhabbat ka choohla
gulistaan mein kali ghata aaj chaai
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«Reply #4 on: June 25, 2012, 11:40:03 PM »
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Koi maal hota to rakhte bachakar
Jawani ka kya hai jawani lutaiee

Mai aisa nahi tha mai jo ban gaya hu
Rahein bas salamat teri bewafaiee

yeh lines hame bahut pasand aaya.  Applause Applause nice ghazal
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«Reply #5 on: June 26, 2012, 02:07:19 AM »
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waah ghayal ji ghaayal kar ke rakh diyaa dher saaree daad
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«Reply #6 on: June 26, 2012, 05:45:45 AM »
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 Applause
 bahut khoob , ghayalji.
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«Reply #7 on: June 26, 2012, 06:21:12 AM »
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Bahut acche ghayal jee
daad kubool keejiye.
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«Reply #8 on: June 26, 2012, 10:56:16 AM »
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great
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«Reply #9 on: June 26, 2012, 04:03:33 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: June 27, 2012, 07:45:36 AM »
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nihayat hi khoobsurat
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«Reply #11 on: June 27, 2012, 05:35:37 PM »
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Thank U very much friends.
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«Reply #12 on: June 29, 2012, 01:06:42 PM »
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bohat acha likha hai Sajid ji
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