Raqeeb hee raqeeb hain, ki, ab meree nigaah mein!

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Sukoon khojtey hain log, meyri har karaah mein!
Patah naheen ayaan hai kyaa, mazeed waah-waah mein?

Ajeeb daastaan hai yeh; ajeeb hamsafar hun main;
Na jaaney kiskey saath huun azeem khwaabgaah mein!

Shareek beywajah nahin rahaa hun is zama’at mein;
Milaa hai chain-e-zeyhn, yaar, teyri waah-waah mein!

Khataa key ba’ad, fir, khataa huyee hai mujhsey baarahaa;
Sazaa milee hai, baarahaa rahaa hun ab karaah main!

Haseen dilrubaa mein hain, ‘abd’, hazaar khuubiyaan:
Raqeeb hee raqeeb hain, ki, ab meyri nigaah mein!

                      - abd bundeli
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«Reply #1 on: November 01, 2013, 02:20:52 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on November 01, 2013, 01:46:06 PM
Sukoon khojtey hain log, meyri har karaah mein!
Patah naheen ayaan hai kyaa, mazeed waah-waah mein?

Ajeeb daastaan hai yeh; ajeeb hamsafar hun main;
Na jaaney kiskey saath huun azeem khwaabgaah mein!

Shareek beywajah nahin rahaa hun is zama’at mein;
Milaa hai chain-e-zeyhn, yaar, teyri waah-waah mein!

Khataa key ba’ad, fir, khataa huyee hai mujhsey baarahaa;
Sazaa milee hai, baarahaa rahaa hun ab karaah main!

Haseen dilrubaa mein hain, ‘abd’, hazaar khuubiyaan:
Raqeeb hee raqeeb hain, ki, ab meyri nigaah mein!

                      - abd bundeli


wah wah abd bundeli sb aap bahut bahut khoobsurat ghazal likha hai. meri bahut bahut daad sweekar kariyega.  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Thumbs UP
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«Reply #2 on: November 01, 2013, 02:49:12 PM »
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waaah abd sahab waah bohut khub
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«Reply #3 on: November 01, 2013, 03:43:28 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on November 01, 2013, 01:46:06 PM
Sukoon khojtey hain log, meyri har karaah mein!
Patah naheen ayaan hai kyaa, mazeed waah-waah mein?

Ajeeb daastaan hai yeh; ajeeb hamsafar hun main;
Na jaaney kiskey saath huun azeem khwaabgaah mein!

Shareek beywajah nahin rahaa hun is zama’at mein;
Milaa hai chain-e-zeyhn, yaar, teyri waah-waah mein!

Khataa key ba’ad, fir, khataa huyee hai mujhsey baarahaa;
Sazaa milee hai, baarahaa rahaa hun ab karaah main!

Haseen dilrubaa mein hain, ‘abd’, hazaar khuubiyaan:
Raqeeb hee raqeeb hain, ki, ab meyri nigaah mein!

                      - abd bundeli



bahot bahot bahot khoobsurat peshkash hai aapki Bundeli saab.... kyaa kehne, aapki waah waah pe waah waah hi nikal rahi hai... daaad pesh hain is kaamyaab ghazal pe..

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«Reply #4 on: November 01, 2013, 04:29:37 PM »
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वाह....वाह....बुल्देली जी....बहुत खूब....ढेरों दाद...
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wah wah abd bundeli sb aap bahut bahut khoobsurat ghazal likha hai. meri bahut bahut daad sweekar kariyega.  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Thumbs UP

Bahut-bahut shukriyah, Suman ji!
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Quote from: saahill on November 01, 2013, 02:49:12 PM
waaah abd sahab waah bohut khub


Bahut-bahut shukriyah, 'Saahill' ji!
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Quote from: sidra04 on November 01, 2013, 03:43:28 PM

bahot bahot bahot khoobsurat peshkash hai aapki Bundeli saab.... kyaa kehne, aapki waah waah pe waah waah hi nikal rahi hai... daaad pesh hain is kaamyaab ghazal pe..

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Bahut-bahut shukriyah, Sidra ji!
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Quote from: amit_prakash_meet on November 01, 2013, 04:29:37 PM
वाह....वाह....बुल्देली जी....बहुत खूब....ढेरों दाद...


Bahut-bahut shukriyah, Amit ji!
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bahut bahut bahut khoob bundeli sahab....dheron dheron daad...
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Haseen dilrubaa mein hain, ‘abd’, hazaar khuubiyaan:
Raqeeb hee raqeeb hain, ki, ab meyri nigaah mein!

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Shad o Aabaad Rahiye

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Quote from: Bishwajeet 'Musaahib' on November 01, 2013, 05:36:40 PM
bahut bahut bahut khoob bundeli sahab....dheron dheron daad...
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Bahut-bahut shukriyah, 'Musaahib' ji!
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