Reit ki mutthi banana ........................................saru............

by SURESH SANGWAN on September 03, 2015, 04:41:56 PM
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फूँक  से  सूरज  बुझाना  छोड़  दो
रेत  की  मुट्ठी   बनाना  छोड़  दो

हो नहीं सकता जहाँ दिल से मिलना
हाथ  ऐसों  से  मिलाना  छोड़  दो

बाग़  में  अपने रहो कोयल बन के
ग़ैर  की तुम धुन में गाना छोड़ दो

जान  जाओ  जिंदगी की गहराई
बाप  की  दौलत उड़ाना छोड़ दो

आँख रोती  हो किसी की बारिश सी
यूँ किसी  को तुम सताना छोड़ दो

होंठ सिल दे ग़म कभी हावी होकर
ये  न हो  के  मुस्कुराना छोड़ दो

ख़्वाब में भी भूल जाना'सरु' उसको
और  आगे  दिल  लगाना छोड़ दो

सुरेश सांगवान ‘सरु’




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«Reply #1 on: September 03, 2015, 07:46:49 PM »
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waah waah waah kyaa baat hai, dheron daad. I can't help I have to give due waalaa Rau.
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«Reply #2 on: September 04, 2015, 04:59:42 AM »
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«Reply #3 on: September 04, 2015, 05:56:32 AM »
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श्री सुरेश जी बहुत ही सुंदर रचना है ढेरो दाद कबूल करे |एक छोटी सी करेक्शन है चाहे तो ठीक कर ले|रोटी के स्थान पर रोती कर ले तो अधिक ठीक होगा|
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«Reply #4 on: September 04, 2015, 06:46:22 AM »
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thanks sir ji...mein bhi kahoon Roti kahan se aagai.....ye english ki wajah se hui hai..
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श्री सुरेश जी बहुत ही सुंदर रचना है ढेरो दाद कबूल करे |एक छोटी सी करेक्शन है चाहे तो ठीक कर ले|रोटी के स्थान पर रोती कर ले तो अधिक ठीक होगा|
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«Reply #5 on: September 04, 2015, 08:49:09 AM »
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Very nice!
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thanks a lott vinery ji
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«Reply #7 on: September 04, 2015, 09:24:49 AM »
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«Reply #9 on: September 04, 2015, 01:03:59 PM »
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आँख रोती हो किसी की बारिश सी
यूँ किसी को तुम सताना छोड़ दो

होंठ सिल दे ग़म कभी हावी होकर
ये न हो के मुस्कुराना छोड़ दो

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आँख रोती हो किसी की बारिश सी
यूँ किसी को तुम सताना छोड़ दो

होंठ सिल दे ग़म कभी हावी होकर
ये न हो के मुस्कुराना छोड़ दो

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आँख रोती हो किसी की बारिश सी
यूँ किसी को तुम सताना छोड़ दो

होंठ सिल दे ग़म कभी हावी होकर
ये न हो के मुस्कुराना छोड़ दो

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