!!~~ " Rishta Ishq Ka "~~!! by Shally.

by k.shael on October 05, 2010, 09:04:29 AM
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Maloom hua jab use pyaar kamjori hai meri,
Phir aaye roz mere dil ka fayda uthaya bahut,

Khushi di jab bhi aankhein chalak uthti thi meri,
Aur phir baandh ke gungroo gham ke nachaya bahut,

Jab gire to mila na koi hame sambhalne wala,
Yuoon magar apne banne ka ehsas karaya bahut,

Jab bhara na dil meri duniya ujadti dekh kar,
Phir keh ke yaar ne bewafa hamko jalaya bahut,

Ek rishta ishq ka, na nibha saka wo jalim,
Par bewafayi thi jise shiddatt se nibhaya bahut..

Shally. 05-10-2010
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«Reply #1 on: October 05, 2010, 09:11:43 AM »
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Maloom hua jab use pyaar kamjori hai meri,
Phir aaye roz mere dil ka fayda uthaya bahut,

Khushi di jab bhi aankhein chalak uthti thi meri,
Aur phir baandh ke gungroo gham ke nachaya bahut,

Jab gire to mila na koi hame sambhalne wala,
Yuoon magar apne banne ka ehsas karaya bahut,

Jab bhara na dil meri duniya ujadti dekh kar,
Phir keh ke yaar ne bewafa hamko jalaya bahut,

Ek rishta ishq ka, na nibha saka wo jalim,
Par bewafayi thi jise shiddatt se nibhaya bahut..

Shally. 05-10-2010


Kya kahe Shally Ji..

Humesha Ki tarah, Lajawaab!!!!

Bahut bahut Aur Bahut Khoob!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

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«Reply #2 on: October 05, 2010, 09:33:21 AM »
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bahu khoob kaha shally jiii...daad dheer sariii~
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«Reply #3 on: October 05, 2010, 09:39:10 AM »
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bahut khoob likha hai aapne Shally ji...!!!
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«Reply #4 on: October 05, 2010, 10:18:42 AM »
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pehli baar padh rahe hain aapko Shally ji aur ab ummeed hai hamesha padhenge... bahut khoob likha hai aapne shukriya !

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«Reply #5 on: October 05, 2010, 11:08:19 AM »
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bahut hi umda likha hai shally

mana ki na nibha paye rishta wafa ka
bewafa kah ker ilzaam aapne lagaye bahut

sath rahne ka wada ker ke na sath diya
per juda hoker tujh se wo roye bahut
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«Reply #6 on: October 05, 2010, 01:01:10 PM »
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bahaut dino baad Shally jee apko yahan dekha..khushi hui bahaut..

aur bahaut khubsoorat ghazal likhi hai apne..teh dil se daad apko.. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: October 05, 2010, 02:11:34 PM »
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WAH BAHUT HI BADIYA LIKHA HAI       SHALLY JI.....


JAB MALOOM THA "YO" KI KAMJORI HAI AAP
KYUN CHOD GAYE AAP SABKO YAAD AAEY BAHUT...
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