Rishto Ki Haqeeqat.."Khwaish"

by khwaish on June 29, 2009, 03:38:12 PM
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Dosti,Mohabbat,Apne,Paraye...Yeh sab Insaani Rishte Duniya Mein Jeete Rehne Ke liye bahut zaroori hote Hai..Duniya Ka Har Insaan Kahin na Kahin,Inn Rishto Se Juuda Hota hai...Par Guzarte Waqt Ke Saath Zindagi mein Bahut Si tabdeeliyan Aati Hai,Aise Hi Kuch Jazbaat,Kuch Ehsaas Ko Zehan mein Rakh Kar Kuch Likh raha Hoon,Umeed Karta Hoon Aap Sab ko Pasand Aaye.....


Woh Ek Shaks Jo mehfil Mein Bolta Tha Bahut,
Suuna Hai Woh Andar Se Khokla Thaa Bahut!!!

Waqt par Faisle Lene Se Hi Taqdeerein Badalti Hai!!
Zindagi mein kuch Naa Kar Paaya Woh Shaks,
Jo Sirf Sochta Tha Bahut!!!

Dosti,Yaari jaise Lafzo Par Ab Usse Kuch Aitbaar Nahi,
Woh Dost Bhi Kya Dost??
Jo Ehsaan kar Ke Jatlaata tha Bahut!!!!


Naa Jaane Kahan Gaya Woh banjara
Jo mere ghar Ke Gali Se Guzra Karta Tha!!
"Zindagi Bahut Khoobsurat Hai"
Woh kuch yuh Pukaarta Tha Bahut!!!!

Mohabbat Sirf Zubaan Ki mohtaaj Nahi Hai!!
Nazrein Jhuka Kar Guzarne Wala Bhi
Tujhe Chaahta Tha Bahut!!!!!

Uske Dard Ka Andaaza Hum Log Kya Laga Paayenge??
Jo Dard Ko chupane Ke liye Muskura Tha Bahut!!!!!

Aaj Ek Mehfil Mein Baithkar Bhi,
Uss Shaks Se Koi Guftuugu Nahi,
Ek waqt Tha,Jab Woh Tere dil Mein Rehta Tha Bahut!!!!!

Aaj Puchna Chaahta Hoon tujhse,
 Kya Main tujhe Kuch Yaad Bhi Hoon??
Zara Dekh!!! Main Aaj Bhi Wahi Hoon,
 Jo teri Nazro Se Kabhi Gira Tha Bahut!!!!

Aaj Apne Aur Gairo Mein Usse Kuch Fark Nazar Nahi Aata!!
Jo kabhi Rishto Ko Apne Tatolta Tha Bahut!!!!

Duniya Ke Iss Bheed Mein Kabhi Apni Pehchaan Ko Naa Khona,
Woh Shaks Har kadam par Tere Saath Hai!!
Jo Iss bheed mein Kabhi Tujhe Dhoondhta Tha Bahut!!!

Laut Aayengi Phir Se Woh Bahaarein
Gar Tujhe Khud Par Yakeen Hai!!!
"Khwaish" Manzil Tak Pahunch Hi Jaata Hai Woh musafir!!
Jo Kabhi Patharo Se Thakrata Tha Bahut!!!!!

               ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~
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«Reply #1 on: June 29, 2009, 04:02:20 PM »
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Quote from: Shihab on June 29, 2009, 03:47:09 PM
Bahut Hi Umda Khwaish Bhai.
Aapke Kalaam Mein Humesha
Gehri Bat Hoti Hai Aur Samjhne Wali Bhi

Keep It Up...

Bahut Bahut Shukriya majid Bhai..Aapne Padha Aur Saraha,Yeh Jaankar Bahut Khushi Hui..
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«Reply #2 on: June 29, 2009, 04:14:03 PM »
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Fantastic.. bahoot hi behtareen aur bahoot hi Gehraai dikhi aapki iss ghazal mea... Bahoot bahoot Khoob!
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«Reply #3 on: June 29, 2009, 04:16:27 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahoot khoob khwaish bro
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«Reply #4 on: June 29, 2009, 04:51:19 PM »
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Wahh, behad khoobsurat likha hia Khwaish ji aapne.. bahut bahut gehrai se tarasha gaya hai har lafz...

As usual, extraordinary work...
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«Reply #5 on: June 29, 2009, 09:29:58 PM »
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Wah wah Khwaish ji,wonderful creation,  :thumbup:kamaal ka likha aapne,
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley :clapping:keep it up.
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«Reply #6 on: June 29, 2009, 10:16:50 PM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smileyek ek lafz kamaal ka likha hai khwaish ji!!! Good Creation!!

yah line dil ko chu gai:

Mohabbat Sirf Zubaan Ki mohtaaj Nahi Hai!!
Nazrein Jhuka Kar Guzarne Wala Bhi Tujhe Chaahta Tha Bahut!!!!!

Aaj Ek Mehfil Mein Baithkar Bhi,Uss Shaks Se Koi Guftuugu Nahi,
Ek waqt Tha,Jab Woh Tere dil Mein Rehta Tha Bahut!!!!!
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«Reply #7 on: June 30, 2009, 12:20:31 PM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bohot Khoob Dost, Rishton ki haqiqat pe aapne jo lafz likhe hain bohot hi gehre hain...kuch alfaaz dil main utar gaye, kuch chubh se gaye.....Bohot bohot Khoob Khwaish
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«Reply #8 on: June 30, 2009, 12:23:14 PM »
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bhut khoob khwaish sahab bhut khoob, waseem bareilvy sahab ki ghazal ke chand aasahaar yaad aa rhe hain ijazat chahunga....

ab aisa ghar ke dareecho ko band kya rakhna
hawa ke aane ka koi to raasta rakhna

jab apne log hi aayenge lootne ke liyn
to dosti ka taqaza hai dar khula rakhna

ye qurbatai.n hi bade imtehaan laiti hain
kisi se waasta rakhna to door ka rakhna
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«Reply #9 on: June 30, 2009, 12:26:33 PM »
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Quote from: aaina on June 30, 2009, 12:23:14 PM
bhut khoob khwaish sahab bhut khoob, waseem bareilvy sahab ki ghazal ke chand aasahaar yaad aa rhe hain ijazat chahunga....

ab aisa ghar ke dareecho ko band kya rakhna
hawa ke aane ka koi to raasta rakhna

jab apne log hi aayenge lootne ke liyn
to dosti ka taqaza hai dar khula rakhna

ye qurbatai.n hi bade imtehaan laiti hain
kisi se waasta rakhna to door ka rakhna

Aslam Ji,

Bohot hi khoob.....bohot gehre maaene rakhte hain ye asha'ar Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: July 01, 2009, 04:15:21 AM »
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Quote from: Sophi on June 29, 2009, 04:14:03 PM
Fantastic.. bahoot hi behtareen aur bahoot hi Gehraai dikhi aapki iss ghazal mea... Bahoot bahoot Khoob!

Thankyou Soooooooooooooo Much Sophi!! Usual Smile

Thanks For Always Appreciating My Work.. icon_flower
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«Reply #11 on: July 01, 2009, 03:48:10 PM »
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Quote from: bekarar on June 29, 2009, 04:16:27 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahoot khoob khwaish bro

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Sanjeev Bro... Usual Smile
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«Reply #12 on: July 05, 2009, 12:53:11 PM »
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Quote from: {Angel} on June 29, 2009, 04:51:19 PM
Wahh, behad khoobsurat likha hia Khwaish ji aapne.. bahut bahut gehrai se tarasha gaya hai har lafz...

As usual, extraordinary work...

Thankyou Soooooooooo Much Dear Angel!!!

Your Appreciation is Valued A Lot..Thankyou.. icon_flower
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«Reply #13 on: July 07, 2009, 11:10:48 AM »
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Bahoot khub Khwaish ji....bahut lajwab likha hai aapne....lkn khuch swal phr se dil me aa rahe hai,un swalon ki kehne ki koshish kar rhi hu....khuch galat kaha ho to maafi chahugi

Rishton ki haqeeqat ko koi samajh paye kaise
Apno-begano ki kashmakash ko koi suljhaye kaise

Har ummid,har khwab jiska kaanch ki tarah toot gya ho
Phr se koi nayi ummid wo jgaye kaise

Jiske har faisle ne use khud hi barbaad kiya
Koi faisla lene ki himmat wo phr se laye kha se

Use na rha ab vishwas na apno par,na begano par
Wo khud me ek nya vishwaas jgaye kaise

Ab koi khushi uske paas se gujarti bhi nahi
Zindagi khubsurat hai,wo ye gungunaye  kaise
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«Reply #14 on: July 08, 2009, 06:21:19 AM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on June 29, 2009, 09:29:58 PM
Wah wah Khwaish ji,wonderful creation,  :thumbup:kamaal ka likha aapne,
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley :clapping:keep it up.

Thankyou Soooooooo Much Madhu.. Usual Smile
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