Ro lena (hamain yaken hai aap ko ya ghazal passand ai ge)

by muneeb on September 14, 2004, 12:00:23 PM
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«Reply #15 on: June 08, 2005, 09:51:07 AM »
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wow mumseeb ji saari gazal bahut hai achhi this i like all of them specially "Jaane kyun " & "Ro Lena"
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«Reply #16 on: June 08, 2005, 06:07:18 PM »
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wah muneeb ji,har ek gazal dil ko chhui hai,bohat khoob.
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«Reply #17 on: June 12, 2005, 06:37:23 PM »
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Asalam_O_Alaikum, to all
aap saaab kay bohat bohat shukeriya kay aap ko hamare ghazals passand ai aap saab kay isleya main ek aur ghazal pash karna chahoga ager aap ke ejazat hon tu and i hope u like it also...





Chiraagh Bhuj Gai Khud Ko Jalaana Hoga




Na Samjhna K Tumse Bicharh K Khush Hain
Humain Logon Ki Khaatir Muskuraana Hoga



Phir Shaam Dhal Gai Tum Aaiay Na Aaj Bhi
Dil Ko Aaj Phir Umeedoon Se Behlaana Hoga



Waada Khilaafi Kar K Muskurate Ho Aap
Dekhna Aik Din Sanam Aapko Pashtaana Hoga



Lahoo Se Apne Kafan Pe Tera Naam Likh Jaoungi
Thaam K Haath Main Phool Tumko Aana Hoga



Abhi Se Na Kejiyai Takaaz-E-Masroofiat K Aap
Abhi Utthna Hai Janaza Kaandha To Daina Hoga



Muddaton Kiya Hai Tera Intizaar Aai Sanam
Umar Kat Chuki Ab To Jaana Hoga
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«Reply #18 on: July 03, 2005, 08:38:06 AM »
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Vaade pe o aitbaar nahi karte, Hum zikre mohabbat sare bazaar nahi karte. Darta hai dil unki ruswai se, Aur who sochte hai hum unse pyar nahi karte
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«Reply #19 on: July 03, 2005, 10:02:41 AM »
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HELLO to u Muneeb,
first two ghazals to bahut bahut bahut hi achi lagi mujhe.....khud ko maine unmein dooba paya...der tak. Baaki jo bhi ghazals aapne likhi hain MUNEEB bahut hi achi hain.
             Yun hi likhte rahiyega.[/b]
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«Reply #20 on: July 03, 2005, 01:26:44 PM »
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Hi nikki howa are you, thanx kay aap ko ghazals passand ai ek aur ghazalz sunna chaho ge

tu mera nam na pocha kr
main tery zat ka hisa hon
main tery soch main shameyl hon
main tery need ka hisa hon
main tery khwab ka hasil hon
main tery yad ka mehwar hon
main tery sanse ka jhonka hon
tu munzar main pase munzar hon
main lhmha hon main jezba hon
jezby ka koi nam nahi
tu mera nam na pocha kr
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«Reply #21 on: July 03, 2005, 01:30:11 PM »
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me not well,  Par aapne ghazal bahut achi likhi hai.............................................
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«Reply #22 on: July 03, 2005, 05:57:36 PM »
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bahoot achha likhtey hain aap muneeb ji....

'harsh'
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«Reply #23 on: July 05, 2005, 09:23:32 AM »
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chand doob jata hay dakh kar tara chahra
choom kar tari zolfain raat moskorati hay

hosn sa chalaktay hain rang may farooshi k
zolf sa chalak ti ha sawano ki angrai........

jaam raqs kartay hain har taraf fizaoo main
dhal ka tari ankhoo sa jab sharab ati hay

kiya tari adain hai, kiya tari jawani hay...
aur nazar tari zalim bijliya giratihay...


chand doob jata hay dakh kar tara chahra
choom kar tari zolfain raat moskorati hay
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«Reply #24 on: July 09, 2005, 11:01:07 PM »
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again very nice Muneeb ji..................................
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«Reply #25 on: August 04, 2005, 07:37:01 AM »
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Quote from: "muneeb"
Tanhai k Lamhon mein aker
ik roz amar mujhay bus ker jaoo
meri aankhein zinda rehnay do
meray khawab mujhay bus day jaoo
jis din say juda hoon mein tum say
bas khoya khoya rehta hoon
meri yadein sooni sooni hain
meri yadein mujhay bus day jaoo
meri aankhon ko ab aadat hay
aainay jesay chehray ki
mujhay jeenay ka haq bus day jaoo
meray khawab mujhay bus day jaoo
meray paas gharonday toot gay
khawab main khilonay kia bechoon
tum aur koi dunya dhoondo
meray khawab mujhay bus day jaoo
meray khawab jo tum nay cheen liay
wo khawab mera sarmaya thay
mera sab kuch le lo mujh say tum
meray khawab mujhay bus day jaoo
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«Reply #26 on: August 06, 2005, 09:50:34 AM »
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Muneeb Ji....

Saari Ghazlein, Nazm aur Jawab mein likhe gaye Qata aur sher pade....

bahut khoob.....dil ki gehraion se daad kabool karo nacheez ki.....
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