Rone Ka Mann Kiya,,,,ghazal jeet jainam

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meri badkismati ne jo dard diya
na chahte bhi Rone Ka Mann Kiya;

itni tadpati hai zindagi meri ki,
mout ki godh main Sone Ka Mann Kiya;

meri takdeer main dhoker likhi jinhone;
Aaj Un Riston Ko todne Ka Mann Kiya;

jinki khatir mit gyi zindagi meri;
aaj unke aansu dekhne Ka Mann Kiya;

subah o shaam hoti na thi unhe dhekhe bager;
Aaj Na Jane Kyun Unse Muh Modne Ka Man Kiya;

Jhooth Bolta tha main duniya Se akser;
bewaafa woh hai ye Sach Bolne Ka Mann Kiya;

apne tute dil ke tukdo ko samet kar;
kisi or ke Dil ko Jodne Ka Mann Kia;

chali gyi woh uski yaad na gyi bhoolayi,
aaj kabar se usko bulane ka mun kiya,,,
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«Reply #1 on: May 27, 2014, 02:30:19 AM »
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mai kese karu shiva meri ruthh gai takdir,
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«Reply #2 on: May 27, 2014, 04:03:25 AM »
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Bahut khoobsrat andaz mein byaan kiya hai,,,,,,bahut khoob Jeet jee.Bhai Rau Due Rha.!!
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«Reply #3 on: May 27, 2014, 08:06:09 AM »
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aap kaya gaye jindgi mushkrana hi bhul gai,
rone ka bahana chahi ye tha,
aanshu ne rasta hi mod liya....
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«Reply #4 on: May 27, 2014, 09:57:49 AM »
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 SHUKRIYA KHANJNA JI
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«Reply #5 on: May 27, 2014, 09:59:52 AM »
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shukriya ravi sir ji
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«Reply #6 on: May 27, 2014, 10:51:21 AM »
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Bahut Khoob Likhaa Hai Aapne. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #7 on: May 27, 2014, 01:30:35 PM »
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बहुत ही संवेदना से भरे हुए एहसास....

apne tute dil ke tukdo ko samet kar;
kisi or ke Dil ko Jodne Ka Mann Kia;

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bahut khooooooooooob daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaad hazir hai
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Waaahhhh bahaut khoob Jeet ji
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