rone na diyaa

by Pooja on September 11, 2004, 05:21:18 AM
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Hi
Here is a gem from Sudarshan Faakir (takkallus - faakir), I use to sing this one with My GrandFather. One of his Fav. Hope you enjoy it!

1. ishq meiN GHairat-e-jazbaat ne rone na diyaa
Warna kyaa baat thi kis baat ne rone na diyaa

[In love, my fear of being shamed/exposed did not allow me to cry
Otherwise, what reason/thing was it that did not allow me to cry]

2. aap kehte the ke rone se na badlenge naseeb
'umr bhar aapki is baat ne rone na diyaa

[You used to say that, by crying one's fate does not change
For my whole life, this very reason(your saying) did not allow me to cry]

3. tujh se milkar hameiN rona tha, bahut rona tha
tangi-e-waqt-e-mulaaqaat ne rone na diyaa

[When I met you, I wanted to cry; wanted to cry a lot
The shortness of the time of meeting did not allow me to cry]

(My Fav. Lines)
4. ek do roz kaa sadma ho to ro leiN, 'Faakir'
ham ko har roz ke sadmat ne rone na diyaa

[If the pain/sorrow were for a day or two, then I would have cried 'faakir'
For me, the sorrows of everyday, did not allow me to cry]

Dictionary : GHairat = shame, fear of exposure; sadmat - sorrow;
tangi-e-waqt-e-mulaaqaat = the shortness of the time of meeting
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«Reply #1 on: September 13, 2004, 06:31:03 PM »
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Very Nice ghazal! I Have listen this In Voice of jagjeet singh & Chitra Singh! No Doubt it is a Nice gazal!
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«Reply #2 on: September 18, 2004, 02:01:51 PM »
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very nice pooja ji
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Pooja
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«Reply #3 on: February 12, 2006, 06:14:12 AM »
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तमाम उम्र तेरा इंतज़ार हमने किया
इस इंतज़ार में किस-किस से प्यार हमने किया।

तलाश-ए-दोस्त को एक उम्र चाहिए, ऐ दोस्त!
कि एक उम्र तेरा इंतज़ार हमने किया।

तेरे ख़याल में दिलशाद मैं रहा बरसों
तेरे हुज़ूर इसे सौगवार हमने किया।

ये तिशनगी है कि उनसे क़रीब रहकर भी
‘हफ़ीज़’ याद उन्हें बार-बार हमने किया।

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दिलशाद = Cheerful, Winsome
तिशनगी = Desire (nm)
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«Reply #4 on: February 13, 2006, 04:17:30 AM »
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तमाम उम्र तेरा इंतज़ार हमने किया
इस इंतज़ार में किस-किस से प्यार हमने किया।

तलाश-ए-दोस्त को एक उम्र चाहिए, ऐ दोस्त!
कि एक उम्र तेरा इंतज़ार हमने किया।

तेरे ख़याल में दिलशाद मैं रहा बरसों
तेरे हुज़ूर इसे सौगवार हमने किया।

ये तिशनगी है कि उनसे क़रीब रहकर भी
‘हफ़ीज़’ याद उन्हें बार-बार हमने किया।

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दिलशाद = Cheerful, Winsome
तिशनगी = Desire (nm)


Waah Pooja ji!! Kya baat hai!!!!!!

Idhar Udhar Kai Manzil hain Chal Sako to Chalo!
Bane Banaye hain Sanche jo Dhal Sako to chalo!

Yahan Kisi Ko Koi Rasta Nahin deta,
Mujhe Gira ke agar Tum Sambhal sako to Chalo!

Har Ek Safar ko hai Mahfooz Raston ki Talash,
Hifazaton ki Riwayat Badal Sako to chalo

Kahin Nahin Koi Sooraj, Dhuan Dhuan hai Fizaa,
Khud Apne aap se Bahar Nikal Sako to chalo!


(NM)
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«Reply #5 on: February 13, 2006, 05:03:49 AM »
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wah...maan gai apko AKS ji, kaya jawab likha hai apne...her ek line bahoot hi kamal ki likhi hui hai.....
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«Reply #6 on: February 13, 2006, 02:22:40 PM »
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Thanks Pooja ji!!! Aapne bhi to kamaal ka likha tha ji!!!
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«Reply #7 on: February 27, 2006, 05:34:38 AM »
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wah pooja ji

ud gayi raton ki neend is ghjazal ne barson hame sone na diya
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«Reply #8 on: February 28, 2006, 04:06:38 AM »
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pooja ji,

aapkaa bahot bahot shukriyaa ye gazal yahaaN post karne ke liye.

bahot hee umadaa kalam hai.

hameshaa khush rahiye
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«Reply #9 on: February 12, 2008, 06:52:12 PM »
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Tumse mil kar, tumhe bhulana mushkil hai asaan nahi
deewane dil ko samjhana mushkil hai asaan nahi
Tumse mil kar tumhe bhulana mushkil hai asaan nahi.....

Her rasta her manjar ab to koi fasana lagta hai
jab se tum ayye ho, sara shehar suhana lagta hai
jaate lamho ko thehrana, mushkil hai asaan nahi
Tumse mil kar tumhe bhulana mushkil hai asaan nahi.....

Jhukati ankhein, Rukati saansein, dard adhura kahti hai
dil ki poori baatein akasar dil ke ander rahti hai
dil ki baat juban per laana, Mushkil hai asaan nahi
Tumse mil kar tumhe bhulana mushkil hai asaan nahi.....

Jo hum chahe wo tum chaho, phir bhi kyun yah doori hai
mil kar bhi hum, mil nahi paate, yah kaise majboori hai
Rasamo ki deewar girana, mushkil hai asaan nahi
Tumse mil kar tumhe bhulana mushkil hai asaan nahi.....(nm)
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«Reply #10 on: July 01, 2009, 08:33:17 AM »
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bahut khub kya likha hai
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«Reply #11 on: July 01, 2009, 08:39:23 AM »
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dil se dil ki duri nahi hoti
kash koe majburi nahi hoti
us se abhi milne ki tamanna hai
per sab kehte hai har tamnna puri nahi hoti
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«Reply #12 on: July 01, 2009, 08:46:24 AM »
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This was well writen.  Thanks
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«Reply #13 on: July 01, 2009, 03:56:33 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on September 11, 2004, 05:21:18 AM
Hi
Here is a gem from Sudarshan Faakir (takkallus - faakir), I use to sing this one with My GrandFather. One of his Fav. Hope you enjoy it!

1. ishq meiN GHairat-e-jazbaat ne rone na diyaa
Warna kyaa baat thi kis baat ne rone na diyaa

[In love, my fear of being shamed/exposed did not allow me to cry
Otherwise, what reason/thing was it that did not allow me to cry]

2. aap kehte the ke rone se na badlenge naseeb
'umr bhar aapki is baat ne rone na diyaa

[You used to say that, by crying one's fate does not change
For my whole life, this very reason(your saying) did not allow me to cry]

3. tujh se milkar hameiN rona tha, bahut rona tha
tangi-e-waqt-e-mulaaqaat ne rone na diyaa

[When I met you, I wanted to cry; wanted to cry a lot
The shortness of the time of meeting did not allow me to cry]

(My Fav. Lines)
4. ek do roz kaa sadma ho to ro leiN, 'Faakir'
ham ko har roz ke sadmat ne rone na diyaa

[If the pain/sorrow were for a day or two, then I would have cried 'faakir'
For me, the sorrows of everyday, did not allow me to cry]

Dictionary : GHairat = shame, fear of exposure; sadmat - sorrow;
tangi-e-waqt-e-mulaaqaat = the shortness of the time of meeting

beautifull ghazal pooja very nice
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«Reply #14 on: July 06, 2009, 05:42:00 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on February 12, 2008, 06:52:12 PM
Tumse mil kar, tumhe bhulana mushkil hai asaan nahi
deewane dil ko samjhana mushkil hai asaan nahi
Tumse mil kar tumhe bhulana mushkil hai asaan nahi.....

Her rasta her manjar ab to koi fasana lagta hai
jab se tum ayye ho, sara shehar suhana lagta hai
jaate lamho ko thehrana, mushkil hai asaan nahi
Tumse mil kar tumhe bhulana mushkil hai asaan nahi.....

Jhukati ankhein, Rukati saansein, dard adhura kahti hai
dil ki poori baatein akasar dil ke ander rahti hai
dil ki baat juban per laana, Mushkil hai asaan nahi
Tumse mil kar tumhe bhulana mushkil hai asaan nahi.....

Jo hum chahe wo tum chaho, phir bhi kyun yah doori hai
mil kar bhi hum, mil nahi paate, yah kaise majboori hai
Rasamo ki deewar girana, mushkil hai asaan nahi
Tumse mil kar tumhe bhulana mushkil hai asaan nahi.....(nm)

Wah Wonderful lines... Thanks for sharing di  Thumbs UP
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