Roo-b-roo tu nahin, to yeh uyoon kyaa deykheyn?

by abdbundeli on February 15, 2009, 02:53:26 PM
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Ye saranjaam kisee kaam key naheen meyrey!
Tu naheen hai to fasaadaat raheyngey gheyrey!

Kabhi bhi mein na teyrey aastaan-e-dar pahunchaa;
Baarhaa khoj kar thakaa maqaam bahuteyrey!

Gaauungaa, kyoun ki, suhaataa nahin ronaa mujh ko;
Go ki, aasaan nahin zindagee binaa teyrey!

Jab sey rukh par teyrey  noor-e-jamaal deykhaa hai;
Kyaa pataa, kyoun mujhey bhaatey hain bahut andheyrey?

Roo-b-roo tu nahin, to yeh uyoon kyaa deykheyn?
Mil rahey roz saamney wahee aireygairey!

Kharhey hain ham to sarey raah, muntazir kab key?
Kaash, mahboob daaltaa miley idhar pheyrey!!

Aaj mashriq mein hoon, kal tak thaa wahaan magrib mein:
Kahaan-kahaan nahin daaley hain jahaan mein deyrey?

Jaayegaa ab kahaan? Louteygaa kahaan tak jaa kar?
Zeyrey toofaan hai parwaaz, parindey ye rey!

Justjoo kar thakaa tamaam, ‘abd’,  ab ruk jaa;
Deykh to koun hai aabaad sarey pahloo, rey!!

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«Reply #1 on: February 15, 2009, 03:05:46 PM »
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Beautiful Ghazal Abd Ji.....and this sher tells something about life !!

Gaauungaa, kyoun ki, suhaataa nahin ronaa mujh ko;
Go ki, aasaan nahin zindagee binaa teyrey!


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«Reply #2 on: February 15, 2009, 03:07:43 PM »
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Raat bohat ho chuki ghazle nahi tu jam de "ABD"
Is bechain dil ko sata chuka ab aaram de "ABD"

-Sajid Ghayel-
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«Reply #3 on: February 15, 2009, 05:00:25 PM »
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Beautiful Ghazal Abd Ji.....and this sher tells something about life !!

Gaauungaa, kyoun ki, suhaataa nahin ronaa mujh ko;
Go ki, aasaan nahin zindagee binaa teyrey!


 Applause Applause Applause

Bahut-bahut shukriyah Celmira ji!
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«Reply #4 on: February 15, 2009, 05:04:30 PM »
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Raat bohat ho chuki ghazle nahi tu jam de "ABD"
Is bechain dil ko sata chuka ab aaram de "ABD"

-Sajid Ghayel-
Aaraam giraftaar hai pahloo mein yaar key!
Ab bhi bachey hain lamhey meyrey paas pyaar key!!

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«Reply #5 on: February 15, 2009, 06:08:47 PM »
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Bahut acche... abd ji  Applause

Last four lines bahut accha laga padkar.
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«Reply #6 on: February 16, 2009, 05:01:13 AM »
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Bahut acche... abd ji  Applause

Last four lines bahut accha laga padkar.

Thanks you, Roja ji! I'm happy to know that a part of the poem has pleased you!
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«Reply #7 on: February 16, 2009, 05:05:28 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Abdji..Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Ghazal Likhi Hai Aapne.. Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: February 16, 2009, 05:10:50 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Abdji..Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Ghazal Likhi Hai Aapne.. Applause Applause Applause Applause
Bahut-bahut shukriyah khwaish ji! Mujhey khushee huyee ki aapko meyree yah gazal pasand aayee!
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«Reply #9 on: February 16, 2009, 06:41:07 AM »
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 Applause Applause

Bohat khoob Abd ji...
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«Reply #10 on: February 16, 2009, 07:34:42 AM »
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Applause Applause

Bohat khoob Abd ji...
Thanks honeyrose ji!
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