Roye bahoth rula ke wo ( Qadeertoopchi )

by qadeer_junaid on May 30, 2010, 04:22:42 PM
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Khud na aaye hame bula ke wo !!
Uspe haste hain dil jala ke wo!!

Unki aankhein yahi to kehti hain!!
Raat poori jagge, jaga ke wo !!

Chaid ke daastan mohabbt ki !!
Khud bhi roye bhut rula ke wo!!

Yaad ata hai unka sharmana  !!
Hunt katre the khuch bata ke wo !!

Kya pata gum kahan howe qadeer
Qaub jhote hame dikha ke wo !!



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«Reply #1 on: May 30, 2010, 04:57:31 PM »
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bahut hi unda ghazal
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«Reply #2 on: May 30, 2010, 05:13:48 PM »
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waaaah !!!!!
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«Reply #3 on: May 30, 2010, 06:01:36 PM »
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wah qadeer ji bahut achhe.


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Quote from: qadeer_junaid on May 30, 2010, 04:22:42 PM
Khud na aaye hame bula ke wo !!
Uspe haste hain dil jala ke wo!!

Unki aankhein yahi to kehti hain!!
Raat poori jagge, jaga ke wo !!

Chaid ke daastan mohabbt ki !!
Khud bhi roye bhut rula ke wo!!

Yaad ata hai unka sharmana  !!
Hunt katre the khuch bata ke wo !!

Kya pata gum kahan howe qadeer
Qaub jhote hame dikha ke wo !!



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«Reply #4 on: May 30, 2010, 07:13:30 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Qadeer ji...!!!
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«Reply #5 on: May 30, 2010, 08:27:19 PM »
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Bohat khoob mere bhai........is khoobsurat peshkash ke liye daad kabool kare.
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«Reply #6 on: May 30, 2010, 10:47:11 PM »
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bhut khoob Qadeer bhai kya kehne hain, bhut dilkash ghazal kahi hai aapne saare aashaar hi achay rahe magr khaas kar ye sher agr huns e ghazal kaha jaaye to ghalt nhi hoga

chaiD ke daastaa.n mohabbat ki
khud bhi roye bhut rula ke wo

bhut hi piyaara sher hai, umeed hai ki aage isse aur behtr kahenge daad hazir hai qubool keejiye khush rahiye


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«Reply #7 on: May 30, 2010, 11:09:43 PM »
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AATISH-E-DIL KO AUR BHADKA KE
KHUD BHI JHULSE MUJHE JALA KE WO

MUAAF KIJIYEGA ALFAZ KA AKAL JHEL RAHI HOON AAPKI TAAREEF ME.THODE ME BAHUT SAMJHEN.MEHABANI HOGI.
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«Reply #8 on: May 30, 2010, 11:18:45 PM »
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A.Qadeer bhai,umeed yehi hai aap bakhair honge,Allah aapki pareshani ko door kare,Ameen..ek behtreen aur purkashish ghazal ka izafa hai aap ki yeh taqleeq bahut khoob bahi,saare ashar bahot achhe hain lekin woh shair hont katre thhe kuch batake woh,haey kya istemal hai sahaab lafzaon ka..hmm bahot khoob ..daad qubool karein hamari taraf se.
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«Reply #9 on: May 31, 2010, 06:21:44 AM »
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   Bahut dino baad aapka koi kalaam padha or behad khushi hui padh k, hamesha ki tarah bahut khoobsurat likha hai aapne, 2nd,3rd,4th teeno sher lajawaab lage. Dheron daad aapko. Waise ab tak to dher bhi bahut badh gaya hoga itni daad jama karte-karte.hehehe. Giggle Hamesha khush rahein or yun hi likhte rahein.
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«Reply #10 on: May 31, 2010, 06:39:33 AM »
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Humesha Ki tarah Bahut Bahut Khoob Qadeer Bhai Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #11 on: May 31, 2010, 09:50:10 AM »
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«Reply #12 on: May 31, 2010, 11:45:12 AM »
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Mashallah, Bohat Achchi Ghazal Hai Qadeer Bhai,.
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Har Ashaar Mashallah Bohat Achcha Hai,.

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«Reply #13 on: May 31, 2010, 01:35:04 PM »
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buhat khoob.. parh kar achha laga...
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«Reply #14 on: May 31, 2010, 06:20:22 PM »
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Quote from: qadeer_junaid on May 30, 2010, 04:22:42 PM
Khud na aaye hame bula ke wo !!
Uspe haste hain dil jala ke wo!!

Unki aankhein yahi to kehti hain!!
Raat poori jagge, jaga ke wo !!

Chaid ke daastan mohabbt ki !!
Khud bhi roye bhut rula ke wo!!

Yaad ata hai unka sharmana  !!
Hunt katre the khuch bata ke wo !!

Kya pata gum kahan howe qadeer
Qaub jhote hame dikha ke wo !!

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Waah!! Waah!!! Qadeer bhai, bahot khoob!!! umdah peshkash..
Daad Hazir hai Kabul Farmayen... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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