Rukh Pe Jaise Naqaab Hai Koyee /रुख़ पे जैसे नक़ाब है कोई........Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'

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यह हक़ीक़त कि ख़्वाब है कोई
सामने बेनक़ाब है कोई

बन्दगी में तेरी किफ़ायत क्यों
रहमतों का हिसाब है कोई

भेजना कर के सैकड़ों पुर्ज़े
ख़त का यह भी जवाब है कोई

ज़िन्दगी क़ैद-ए-बामशक़्क़त है
इससे बढ़कर अज़ाब है कोई

चाँद पर छाये ऐसे बादल हैं
रुख़ पे जैसे नक़ाब है कोई

हुस्ने दोशीज़ा है तसव्वुर में
या पुरानी शराब है कोई

जिसको देखो 'रक़ीब' पढ़ता है
जैसे चेहरा किताब है कोई

yeh haqeeqat ki khwab hai koyee
saamne benaqaab hai koyee

baNdagi meN teri kifaayat kyoN
rahmatoN ka hisaab hai koyee

bhejana kar ke saikadoN purze
khat ka yeh bhi jawaab hai koyee

zindagi qaid-e-bamashaqqat hai
is se badhkar azaab hai koyee

chaand par chhaye aaise baadal haiN
rukh pe jaise naqaab hai koyee

husne dosheeza hai tasawwur meN
ya purani sharab hai koyee

jisko dekho ‘Raqeeb’ padhata hai
jaise chehra kitaab hai koyee

----- Satish Shukla ‘Raqeeb’
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«Reply #1 on: March 14, 2014, 08:33:55 PM »
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JUST EXCELLENT dili daad qubool farmaayen
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«Reply #2 on: March 14, 2014, 08:41:46 PM »
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waaah waaah bahot khob
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«Reply #3 on: March 14, 2014, 09:01:53 PM »
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Wah Wah! La-jawaab Ghazal!!! Bohat Bohat Bohat Hi Khub!



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«Reply #4 on: March 14, 2014, 11:48:14 PM »
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भेजना कर के सैकड़ों पुर्ज़े
ख़त का यह भी जवाब है कोई

चाँद पर छाये ऐसे बादल हैं
रुख़ पे जैसे नक़ाब है कोई

हुस्ने दोशीज़ा है तसव्वुर में
या पुरानी शराब है कोई

Bahut umda ghazal lekar aaye hain aap..
par in asharon ka javaab naheen
is baar bhi..kaafi intzaar karna pada

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«Reply #5 on: March 15, 2014, 12:11:06 AM »
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यह हक़ीक़त कि ख़्वाब है कोई
सामने बेनक़ाब है कोई

बन्दगी में तेरी किफ़ायत क्यों
रहमतों का हिसाब है कोई

भेजना कर के सैकड़ों पुर्ज़े
ख़त का यह भी जवाब है कोई

ज़िन्दगी क़ैद-ए-बामशक़्क़त है
इससे बढ़कर अज़ाब है कोई

चाँद पर छाये ऐसे बादल हैं
रुख़ पे जैसे नक़ाब है कोई

हुस्ने दोशीज़ा है तसव्वुर में
या पुरानी शराब है कोई

जिसको देखो 'रक़ीब' पढ़ता है
जैसे चेहरा किताब है कोई

yeh haqeeqat ki khwab hai koyee
saamne benaqaab hai koyee

baNdagi meN teri kifaayat kyoN
rahmatoN ka hisaab hai koyee

bhejana kar ke saikadoN purze
khat ka yeh bhi jawaab hai koyee

zindagi qaid-e-bamashaqqat hai
is se badhkar azaab hai koyee

chaand par chhaye aaise baadal haiN
rukh pe jaise naqaab hai koyee

husne dosheeza hai tasawwur meN
ya purani sharab hai koyee

jisko dekho ‘Raqeeb’ padhata hai
jaise chehra kitaab hai koyee

----- Satish Shukla ‘Raqeeb’


Bahut Khoob.
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«Reply #6 on: March 15, 2014, 09:40:39 AM »
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bahut khoob, dhero daad
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«Reply #7 on: March 15, 2014, 02:34:04 PM »
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Hausala afzai ka bahut shukriya.....Raqeeb Lucknowi
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«Reply #8 on: March 15, 2014, 04:03:48 PM »
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WOW..........just superb........
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«Reply #9 on: March 15, 2014, 04:06:20 PM »
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JUST EXCELLENT dili daad qubool farmaayen

Hausala afzai ka bahut shukriya.....Saini Sahab....Raqeeb

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waaah waaah bahot khob

Bahut shukriya .... Rajan Kondal Ji.....Raqeeb
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Wah Wah! La-jawaab Ghazal!!! Bohat Bohat Bohat Hi Khub!




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Bhaut shukriya Shireen Hakani Ji......Raqeeb

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«Reply #13 on: March 16, 2014, 04:04:43 PM »
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भेजना कर के सैकड़ों पुर्ज़े
ख़त का यह भी जवाब है कोई

चाँद पर छाये ऐसे बादल हैं
रुख़ पे जैसे नक़ाब है कोई

हुस्ने दोशीज़ा है तसव्वुर में
या पुरानी शराब है कोई

Bahut umda ghazal lekar aaye hain aap..
par in asharon ka javaab naheen
is baar bhi..kaafi intzaar karna pada



Bahut shukriya.....Chirag Sahab.....Raqeeb Lucknowi

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Bahut Khoob.

Bahut bahut shukriya.....Ravi JI....Raqeeb Lucknowi
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