Rukhsaar Kee Tarah...Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb' / रुख़सार की तरह...सतीश शुक्ला 'रक़ीब'

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होता नहीं है प्यार भी अब प्यार की तरह
करने लगे हैं लोग ये ब्योपार की तरह

सूखे गुलाब, अधजली तस्वीर और ख़ुतूत
चूमे गए कभी लबो रुख़सार की तरह

इन्साफ़ की दुकान है मुंसिफ़ दुकानदार
बिकने लगा है जाओ खरीदार की तरह

यूं तो दिलो दिमाग़ में आए बहुत ख़याल
उतरे वरक़ पे चंद ही अशआर की तरह

मा'नी बदल गए यहाँ नेकी के जब 'रक़ीब'
"हम भी खड़े हुए हैं गुनहगार की तरह"

            --- सतीश शुक्ला 'रक़ीब'

hota naheeN hai pyaar bhi ab pyaar kee tarah
karne lage haiN log ye vyopaar kee tarah

sookhe gulaab, adhjalee tasveer aur khutoot
choome gaye kabhee lab-o-rukhsaar kee tarah

insaaf kee dukaan hai munsif dukaandaar
bikne laga hai jaao khareedaar kee tarah

yooN to dilo dimaag meN aaye bahut khayaal
utre waraq pe chand hee ash'aar kee tarah

maa'nee badal gaye yahaaN nekee ke jab 'Raqeeb'
"hum bhee khade hue haiN gunahgaar kee tarah"

                    --- Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
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«Reply #1 on: November 13, 2011, 09:57:48 AM »
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Quote from: Satish Shukla on November 13, 2011, 07:06:07 AM
होता नहीं है प्यार भी अब प्यार की तरह
करने लगे हैं लोग ये ब्योपार की तरह

सूखे गुलाब, अधजली तस्वीर और ख़ुतूत
चूमे गए कभी लबो रुख़सार की तरह

इन्साफ़ की दुकान है मुंसिफ़ दुकानदार
बिकने लगा है जाओ खरीदार की तरह

यूं तो दिलो दिमाग़ में आए बहुत ख़याल
उतरे वरक़ पे चंद ही अशआर की तरह

मा'नी बदल गए यहाँ नेकी के जब 'रक़ीब'
"हम भी खड़े हुए हैं गुनहगार की तरह"

            --- सतीश शुक्ला 'रक़ीब'

hota naheeN hai pyaar bhi ab pyaar kee tarah
karne lage haiN log ye vyopaar kee tarah

sookhe gulaab, adhjalee tasveer aur khutoot
choome gaye kabhee lab-o-rukhsaar kee tarah

insaaf kee dukaan hai munsif dukaandaar
bikne laga hai jaao khareedaar kee tarah

yooN to dilo dimaag meN aaye bahut khayaal
utre waraq pe chand hee ash'aar kee tarah

maa'nee badal gaye yahaaN nekee ke jab 'Raqeeb'
"hum bhee khade hue haiN gunahgaar kee tarah"

                    --- Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'

Waah Waah Waah!!!

Bahut bahut Khoob Satishji..Kya Kehne

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«Reply #2 on: November 13, 2011, 11:14:08 AM »
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bahut khub ,,,,raqeeb ji,,,,haquiqat bayan ki hai aapne ,,,bahut hi behatar assaar hain ,,,
Quote from: Satish Shukla on November 13, 2011, 07:06:07 AM
होता नहीं है प्यार भी अब प्यार की तरह
करने लगे हैं लोग ये ब्योपार की तरह

सूखे गुलाब, अधजली तस्वीर और ख़ुतूत
चूमे गए कभी लबो रुख़सार की तरह

इन्साफ़ की दुकान है मुंसिफ़ दुकानदार
बिकने लगा है जाओ खरीदार की तरह

यूं तो दिलो दिमाग़ में आए बहुत ख़याल
उतरे वरक़ पे चंद ही अशआर की तरह

मा'नी बदल गए यहाँ नेकी के जब 'रक़ीब'
"हम भी खड़े हुए हैं गुनहगार की तरह"

            --- सतीश शुक्ला 'रक़ीब'

hota naheeN hai pyaar bhi ab pyaar kee tarah
karne lage haiN log ye vyopaar kee tarah

sookhe gulaab, adhjalee tasveer aur khutoot
choome gaye kabhee lab-o-rukhsaar kee tarah

insaaf kee dukaan hai munsif dukaandaar
bikne laga hai jaao khareedaar kee tarah

yooN to dilo dimaag meN aaye bahut khayaal
utre waraq pe chand hee ash'aar kee tarah

maa'nee badal gaye yahaaN nekee ke jab 'Raqeeb'
"hum bhee khade hue haiN gunahgaar kee tarah"

                    --- Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
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«Reply #3 on: November 13, 2011, 12:28:31 PM »
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Is shaandaar ghazal ke liye dheron mubaarakbaad
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«Reply #4 on: November 13, 2011, 12:48:30 PM »
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s shaandaar ghazal ke liye dheron mubaarakbaad
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«Reply #5 on: November 13, 2011, 05:58:19 PM »
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Bahut Khoob Satish Sir
Aaj bahut dino baad aapka ek reply dekha..bahut dino ke baad kuch likha hai apne. ummeeed karta hu sab khairiyat hai

vahi andaaj..vahi lahja...
Sir, koi mujhe itna bhar bata de ki ye ghajal yoindia par post hui hai to mai bina padhe aapki, saini sir ya hasan sahab, kisne likhi hai , ye sun ke hi bata sakta hu...isse jyada kya kahu...
aap logo ko padh kar hi seekhne ki kaoshish karta hu,,aap aur saini sahab to guide bhi karte hai uske liye mai apne ko bada khushkismat manta hu..
Ye peshkash laajavaab hai. with lots of messages.   
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«Reply #6 on: November 13, 2011, 06:09:23 PM »
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Raqeeb Sahaab Aadaab!

Masha Allaah janab kia umdaa gazal se nawaaza hai bazm
ko aapne.. behad khubsurat khayaal aur umdaa adaygii rahi
aapki janab.. hazaroN daad hazir hai aapki is khusurat
gazal par.. Usual Smile

Sabhi ashaar aik se badhkar aik rahe janab ...
Humari dheroN daad O mubarakbad kabul kijiye.. Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye.. Aate rahiye..
Khush O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile    




Quote from: Satish Shukla on November 13, 2011, 07:06:07 AM
होता नहीं है प्यार भी अब प्यार की तरह
करने लगे हैं लोग ये ब्योपार की तरह

Bahut khoob janab behad umdaa khayaal se
matle ko nawaaza hai aapne.. humari daad kabul kareN..
behad sahiN farmayaa janab.. aajkal woH baat kahaaN ?    

सूखे गुलाब, अधजली तस्वीर और ख़ुतूत
चूमे गए कभी लबो रुख़सार की तरह

Masha Allaah Janab aik behad adabi sher kaha hai
aapne.. shaayri ki dehlij meiN rahkar aik umdaa sher ko janm diya
aapne .. humari dehroN daad is sher par daad daad daad.. Usual Smile    

इन्साफ़ की दुकान है मुंसिफ़ दुकानदार
बिकने लगा है जाओ खरीदार की तरह

Kia baat hai Raqeeb sahaab haq baat kahi hai..
Khairdaar ki tarhaa jao to kuch bhi mil jaata hai bahut khoob..
waqai sach kaha janab.. Insaaf kia aur munsif kia sab bite haiN
aajkal.. Usual Smile    

यूं तो दिलो दिमाग़ में आए बहुत ख़याल
उतरे वरक़ पे चंद ही अशआर की तरह

Kia kahne janab bahut umdaa bahut khoob..
behad achcha sher kaha hai.. achche sukhanwar hai aap Usual Smile    

मा'नी बदल गए यहाँ नेकी के जब 'रक़ीब'
"हम भी खड़े हुए हैं गुनहगार की तरह"

Waah waah janab bahut khoob achcha khayaal ataa kiya hai... waqai bahut achcha maqta raha daad.. Usual Smile


Kar bhi do mauf hume ab aye dil e tamannaa
Kab se jhukaye haiN sar khataawaar ki tarhaa    
    

            --- सतीश शुक्ला 'रक़ीब'

hota naheeN hai pyaar bhi ab pyaar kee tarah
karne lage haiN log ye vyopaar kee tarah

sookhe gulaab, adhjalee tasveer aur khutoot
choome gaye kabhee lab-o-rukhsaar kee tarah

insaaf kee dukaan hai munsif dukaandaar
bikne laga hai jaao khareedaar kee tarah

yooN to dilo dimaag meN aaye bahut khayaal
utre waraq pe chand hee ash'aar kee tarah

maa'nee badal gaye yahaaN nekee ke jab 'Raqeeb'
"hum bhee khade hue haiN gunahgaar kee tarah"

                    --- Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
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«Reply #7 on: November 13, 2011, 07:52:05 PM »
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Wah Wah aur Wah..
Kya baat hai Satish jee..
Khoob likha hai apne..Bahaut khoob..
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Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #8 on: November 14, 2011, 03:17:21 AM »
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BAhut BAhut BAhut Khoob Satish Ji
BAhut Hi Umda Khyaal Pesh Kiya Hai Aapne
Hazaroo LAkhoo Daaaaaaaaaaaaad
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«Reply #9 on: November 14, 2011, 11:51:47 AM »
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khwaish ji,

Sabse pahle mere kalaam padhne
aur reply dene ke liye tahe dil se shukriya.

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«Reply #10 on: November 15, 2011, 04:47:41 AM »
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Sunil Ji,

Hausala aafzai ka bahut bahut
shukriya janaab.

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«Reply #11 on: November 15, 2011, 08:14:30 AM »
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sksaini4 ji,

Hausala aafzai ka bahut bahut
shukriya..

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satish ji bahut khoob likhi hai.
daaaad kubool kijiye.
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«Reply #13 on: November 15, 2011, 11:22:58 AM »
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Sadiq Sahab,

Jawab dene ki zahmat uthane aur
hausala aafzai ka bahut bahut
shukriya.

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«Reply #14 on: November 15, 2011, 02:48:43 PM »
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होता नहीं है प्यार भी अब प्यार की तरह
करने लगे हैं लोग ये ब्योपार की तरह

सूखे गुलाब, अधजली तस्वीर और ख़ुतूत
चूमे गए कभी लबो रुख़सार की तरह

इन्साफ़ की दुकान है मुंसिफ़ दुकानदार
बिकने लगा है जाओ खरीदार की तरह

यूं तो दिलो दिमाग़ में आए बहुत ख़याल
उतरे वरक़ पे चंद ही अशआर की तरह

मा'नी बदल गए यहाँ नेकी के जब 'रक़ीब'
"हम भी खड़े हुए हैं गुनहगार की तरह"

            --- सतीश शुक्ला 'रक़ीब'

hota naheeN hai pyaar bhi ab pyaar kee tarah
karne lage haiN log ye vyopaar kee tarah

sookhe gulaab, adhjalee tasveer aur khutoot
choome gaye kabhee lab-o-rukhsaar kee tarah

insaaf kee dukaan hai munsif dukaandaar
bikne laga hai jaao khareedaar kee tarah

yooN to dilo dimaag meN aaye bahut khayaal
utre waraq pe chand hee ash'aar kee tarah

maa'nee badal gaye yahaaN nekee ke jab 'Raqeeb'
"hum bhee khade hue haiN gunahgaar kee tarah"

                    --- Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'[/color][/size]
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