Rukhsaar Kee Tarah...Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb' / रुख़सार की तरह...सतीश शुक्ला 'रक़ीब'

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«Reply #15 on: November 15, 2011, 03:17:30 PM »
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Bahut khoob,Satish ji.Achhi ghazal ke liye mubarakbad.Hasan
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«Reply #16 on: November 16, 2011, 04:54:33 AM »
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mkv ji,

Jawab dene aur khoobsoorat tabsire
ke liye bahut bahut shukriya.

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«Reply #17 on: November 16, 2011, 05:04:27 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause
"यूं तो दिलो दिमाग़ में आए बहुत ख़याल
 उतरे वरक़ पे चंद ही अशआर की तरह"

अच्छी ग़ज़ल |बधाई | शुभकामनायें |
-अरुण मिश्र.
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«Reply #18 on: November 16, 2011, 09:26:55 AM »
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ParwaaZ Ji,

Khoobsoorat jawab aur tabsire
ke liye bahut bahut shukriya.


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«Reply #19 on: November 16, 2011, 04:39:12 PM »
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Rahim Sahab,

Ghazal padhne, pasand karne aur
jawab dene ka bahut bahut shukriya.

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«Reply #20 on: November 18, 2011, 06:20:56 AM »
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Sanjeev Ji,

Hausala aafzai ka
bahut bahut shukriya.

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«Reply #21 on: November 18, 2011, 12:44:55 PM »
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Shihab Ji,

Jawab dene aur ghazal pasand
karne ka bahut bahut shukriya.

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«Reply #22 on: November 22, 2011, 07:25:36 AM »
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Suresh Ji,

Jawab dene aur hausala aafzai
ka bahut bahut shukriya.

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«Reply #23 on: November 22, 2011, 08:45:59 AM »
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Quote from: Satish Shukla on November 13, 2011, 07:06:07 AM
होता नहीं है प्यार भी अब प्यार की तरह
करने लगे हैं लोग ये ब्योपार की तरह

सूखे गुलाब, अधजली तस्वीर और ख़ुतूत
चूमे गए कभी लबो रुख़सार की तरह

इन्साफ़ की दुकान है मुंसिफ़ दुकानदार
बिकने लगा है जाओ खरीदार की तरह

यूं तो दिलो दिमाग़ में आए बहुत ख़याल
उतरे वरक़ पे चंद ही अशआर की तरह

मा'नी बदल गए यहाँ नेकी के जब 'रक़ीब'
"हम भी खड़े हुए हैं गुनहगार की तरह"

            --- सतीश शुक्ला 'रक़ीब'

hota naheeN hai pyaar bhi ab pyaar kee tarah
karne lage haiN log ye vyopaar kee tarah

sookhe gulaab, adhjalee tasveer aur khutoot
choome gaye kabhee lab-o-rukhsaar kee tarah

insaaf kee dukaan hai munsif dukaandaar
bikne laga hai jaao khareedaar kee tarah

yooN to dilo dimaag meN aaye bahut khayaal
utre waraq pe chand hee ash'aar kee tarah

maa'nee badal gaye yahaaN nekee ke jab 'Raqeeb'
"hum bhee khade hue haiN gunahgaar kee tarah"

                    --- Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'



bahut khoob. maqte ne to haqiqat ke qareeb khada kiya hai.waah
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«Reply #24 on: November 23, 2011, 06:32:10 AM »
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dinbandhu kumar ji,

Ghazal pasand karne aur jawab dene
ka bahut bahut shukriya.

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«Reply #25 on: November 23, 2011, 07:58:55 AM »
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Hasan Sahab,

Ghazal pasand karne aur hausala
aafzai ka bahut bahut shukriya.

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«Reply #26 on: November 25, 2011, 04:53:00 AM »
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Respected Arun Mishra Ji,

Jawab dene aur ghazal pasand karne ke
liye bahut bahut shukriya.

Aage bhi aise hee sneh banaaye rahe.

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«Reply #27 on: November 27, 2011, 04:52:13 AM »
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Sheba Ji,

Ghazal pasand karne aur
jawab dene ka bahut bahut
shukriya.

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«Reply #28 on: December 08, 2011, 11:16:08 AM »
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Quote from: Satish Shukla on November 13, 2011, 07:06:07 AM
होता नहीं है प्यार भी अब प्यार की तरह
करने लगे हैं लोग ये ब्योपार की तरह

सूखे गुलाब, अधजली तस्वीर और ख़ुतूत
चूमे गए कभी लबो रुख़सार की तरह

इन्साफ़ की दुकान है मुंसिफ़ दुकानदार
बिकने लगा है जाओ खरीदार की तरह

यूं तो दिलो दिमाग़ में आए बहुत ख़याल
उतरे वरक़ पे चंद ही अशआर की तरह

मा'नी बदल गए यहाँ नेकी के जब 'रक़ीब'
"हम भी खड़े हुए हैं गुनहगार की तरह"

            --- सतीश शुक्ला 'रक़ीब'

hota naheeN hai pyaar bhi ab pyaar kee tarah
karne lage haiN log ye vyopaar kee tarah   sad7 sad7 sad7

sookhe gulaab, adhjalee tasveer aur khutoot
choome gaye kabhee lab-o-rukhsaar kee tarah  Applause Applause Applause

insaaf kee dukaan hai munsif dukaandaar
bikne laga hai jaao khareedaar kee tarah  Applause Applause Applause

yooN to dilo dimaag meN aaye bahut khayaal
utre waraq pe chand hee ash'aar kee tarah  Applause Applause Applause

maa'nee badal gaye yahaaN nekee ke jab 'Raqeeb'
"hum bhee khade hue haiN gunahgaar kee tarah"   Applause Applause Applause

                    --- Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
Vaah Satish Sir
Kamaal Ka matla pesh kiya hai..Sacchaai bhi hai.. dard bhi..
aur ek pecheeda sawaal bhi
Poori ghajal ...bahut khoob
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«Reply #29 on: December 09, 2011, 05:17:56 AM »
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mkv ji,

Hausala aafzai ka bahut
bahut shukriya.

Is beech zara masroofiyat kee wazah
se YO par ziyaadaah waqt naheeb de
pa raha hoon.

Ek baar fir se jawab dene ka
shukriya.

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
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