Saaltaa hai mujhey, ab roz, dour-e-tanhaayee!

by abdbundeli on March 05, 2009, 04:05:31 PM
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Saaltaa hai mujhey, ab roz, dour-e-tanhaayee!
Aaj bhi, un kee, kaheen sey khabar naheen aayee!!

Jaagtey-jaagtey dushwaar huaa hai sonaa;
Dil-o-dimaag mein, lagtaa hai, ghataa ho chhaayee!!

Bhoolney ko to, bhooltey hain kabhee apney bhee;
Azeez dilrubaa meyraa, naheen hai harjaayee!!

Eik lamhah bhi, hijra kaa thaa dahar-saa jis ko:
Aaj lagtaa hai, na aaney ki qasam hai khaayee!!

Un kee khushboo-e-jism bhi hai nadaarad ab to;
Baad-e-magrib bhi, udhar sey, idhar naheen laayee!!

Lag rahaa hai, ki woh, shaayad kaheen mashriq mein hain!
Na jaane kab chaleygi fir muqeem purbaayee?

Kaash, koyee unhain kah dey, ki, lout ghar aayen!
Muntazir hai sarey bahaar, ‘abd’, shaidaayee!!

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«Reply #1 on: March 05, 2009, 06:05:38 PM »
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Bohot bohot khoob Babu Ji  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: March 05, 2009, 06:17:08 PM »
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wah wah , very very nice Bundeli ... bahut hi badiya likha hai aap neh

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«Reply #3 on: March 05, 2009, 09:40:38 PM »
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"ABD" chal ek kam karte hain
Bohat karli unse mohabbat, Ab khud se pyaar karte hain

Kab tak kare hum khudko zaleel, karke charcha unki be_wafaiee ka
Bohat ho chuka chal ab hum bhi kisi se be_wafaiee karte hain

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«Reply #4 on: March 06, 2009, 02:44:33 AM »
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Wah Wah, Abd Ji, Bahut Khoob Applause
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«Reply #5 on: March 06, 2009, 05:54:40 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on March 05, 2009, 06:05:38 PM
Bohot bohot khoob Babu Ji  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Thanks a lot Talat bitia!
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«Reply #6 on: March 06, 2009, 06:01:13 AM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on March 05, 2009, 09:40:38 PM
"ABD" chal ek kam karte hain
Bohat karli unse mohabbat, Ab khud se pyaar karte hain

Kab tak kare hum khudko zaleel, karke charcha unki be_wafaiee ka
Bohat ho chuka chal ab hum bhi kisi se be_wafaiee karte hain

-SG-

Sajid ji!

Beywafaa tu naheen ho paayegaa, koshish kar ley;
Woh aur hotey hain jo beywafaaiyaan kartey!
US ney jis khaak sey taameer kiyaa hai tujh ko:
Wafaaiyoun key liye deykhaa hai un ko martey!!

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«Reply #7 on: March 06, 2009, 06:04:22 AM »
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Quote from: Deepati on March 06, 2009, 02:44:33 AM
Wah Wah, Abd Ji, Bahut Khoob Applause
Thanks a lot, Deepati ji!
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«Reply #8 on: March 06, 2009, 06:08:27 AM »
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Quote from: jasbirsingh on March 05, 2009, 06:17:08 PM
wah wah , very very nice Bundeli ... bahut hi badiya likha hai aap neh

jasbir singh
Shukriyah, s. jasbir singh ji!
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«Reply #9 on: March 06, 2009, 06:09:19 AM »
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Saaltaa hai mujhey, ab roz, dour-e-tanhaayee!
Aaj bhi, un kee, kaheen sey khabar naheen aayee!!

Jaagtey-jaagtey dushwaar huaa hai sonaa;
Dil-o-dimaag mein, lagtaa hai, ghataa ho chhaayee!!

Bhoolney ko to, bhooltey hain kabhee apney bhee;
Azeez dilrubaa meyraa, naheen hai harjaayee!!

Eik lamhah bhi, hijra kaa thaa dahar-saa jis ko:
Aaj lagtaa hai, na aaney ki qasam hai khaayee!!

Un kee khushboo-e-jism bhi hai nadaarad ab to;
Baad-e-magrib bhi, udhar sey, idhar naheen laayee!!

Lag rahaa hai, ki woh, shaayad kaheen mashriq mein hain!
Na jaane kab chaleygi fir muqeem purbaayee?

Kaash, koyee unhain kah dey, ki, lout ghar aayen!
Muntazir hai sarey bahaar, ‘abd’, shaidaayee!!

                                   - abd bundeli


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«Reply #10 on: March 06, 2009, 06:15:34 AM »
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Wah wah bahoot khoob ABD ji.. Fir se kamal ka likha hai aapne.
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Bahoot bahoot khoob SIR ji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Thanks a lot, salma786 ji!
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«Reply #12 on: March 06, 2009, 07:39:10 AM »
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Quote from: Sophi on March 06, 2009, 06:15:34 AM
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Wah wah bahoot khoob ABD ji.. Fir se kamal ka likha hai aapne.
Thanks a lot, Sophi ji!
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