Saansein rawaan ho gayi.......................................Aqsh.

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Roz keh dete hai nazuk se ishaare aksar
Kitni khamosh muhabbat ki zubaan hoti hai


Dekhi jo teri surat, saanseiN rawaan ho gayi
Pal bhar meiN hi jaise, meri chahat jawaan ho gayi

Ho gaya hai mushkil chupaana, apni chahat ko
Nigaah jab se hai mili, dil ki zubaan ho gayi

Rukh kahiN bhi ho, bas tum hi tum nazar aate ho
AankhoN ki binaayi ko, tumhari pehchaan ho gayi

Kaisi yeh tishnagee hai, bujhti nahi meri pyaas hai
Sirf dil hi nahiN, meri jaan bhi, tum pe qurbaan ho gayi

Jakad hi looN tumheiN, apne zulfoN ki zanjeeroN meiN
Lagta hai aaj niyat meri bhi, kuch be imaan ho gayi

Kiya hai tumne jabse, ahad-e-wafa haath thaamkar
“Aqsh” ki zindagi hi nahiN, maut bhi aasaan ho gayi
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«Reply #1 on: April 20, 2013, 01:58:49 PM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on April 20, 2013, 01:58:49 PM
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Quote from: ~Aatish~ on April 20, 2013, 02:04:33 PM
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thank you sooo much aatish ji...
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«Reply #5 on: April 20, 2013, 02:14:54 PM »
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Ho gaya hai mushkil chupaana, apni chahat ko
Nigaah jab se hai mili, dil ki zubaan ho gayi

Rukh kahiN bhi ho, bas tum hi tum nazar aate ho
AankhoN ki binaayi ko, tumhari pehchaan ho gayi

Kaisi yeh tishnagee hai, bujhti nahi meri pyaas hai
Sirf dil hi nahiN, meri jaan bhi, tum pe qurbaan ho gayi

Jakad hi looN tumheiN, apne zulfoN ki zanjeeroN meiN
Lagta hai aaj niyat meri bhi, kuch be imaan ho gayi

Kiya hai tumne jabse, ahad-e-wafa haath thaamkar
“Aqsh” ki zindagi hi nahiN, maut bhi aasaan ho gayi

Beautiful..
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«Reply #6 on: April 20, 2013, 02:25:16 PM »
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Quote from: mkv on April 20, 2013, 02:14:54 PM
Ho gaya hai mushkil chupaana, apni chahat ko
Nigaah jab se hai mili, dil ki zubaan ho gayi

Rukh kahiN bhi ho, bas tum hi tum nazar aate ho
AankhoN ki binaayi ko, tumhari pehchaan ho gayi

Kaisi yeh tishnagee hai, bujhti nahi meri pyaas hai
Sirf dil hi nahiN, meri jaan bhi, tum pe qurbaan ho gayi

Jakad hi looN tumheiN, apne zulfoN ki zanjeeroN meiN
Lagta hai aaj niyat meri bhi, kuch be imaan ho gayi

Kiya hai tumne jabse, ahad-e-wafa haath thaamkar
“Aqsh” ki zindagi hi nahiN, maut bhi aasaan ho gayi

Beautiful..
bahut bahut shukriya mukesh ji. aapko pasand aayi it really matters.
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«Reply #7 on: April 20, 2013, 03:11:23 PM »
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Roz keh dete hai nazuk se ishaare aksar
Kitni khamosh muhabbat ki zubaan hoti hai

Dekhi jo teri surat, saanseiN rawaan ho gayi
Pal bhar meiN hi jaise, meri chahat jawaan ho gayi

Dekhi jo teri surat, saanseiN rawaan ho gayi
Pal bhar meiN hi jaise, meri chahat jawaan ho gayi

Ho gaya hai mushkil chupaana, apni chahat ko
Nigaah jab se hai mili, dil ki zubaan ho gayi

Rukh kahiN bhi ho, bas tum hi tum nazar aate ho
AankhoN ki binaayi ko, tumhari pehchaan ho gayi

Kaisi yeh tishnagee hai, bujhti nahi meri pyaas hai
Sirf dil hi nahiN, meri jaan bhi, tum pe qurbaan ho gayi

Jakad hi looN tumheiN, apne zulfoN ki zanjeeroN meiN
Lagta hai aaj niyat meri bhi, kuch be imaan ho gayi

Kiya hai tumne jabse, ahad-e-wafa haath thaamkar
“Aqsh” ki zindagi hi nahiN, maut bhi aasaan ho gayi
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Wah,Wah,Wah Mam.Very nice.Really beautiful written.Very emotional. Lazabab.



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Quote from: aqsh on April 20, 2013, 01:50:02 PM
Roz keh dete hai nazuk se ishaare aksar
Kitni khamosh muhabbat ki zubaan hoti hai


Dekhi jo teri surat, saanseiN rawaan ho gayi
Pal bhar meiN hi jaise, meri chahat jawaan ho gayi

Ho gaya hai mushkil chupaana, apni chahat ko
Nigaah jab se hai mili, dil ki zubaan ho gayi

Rukh kahiN bhi ho, bas tum hi tum nazar aate ho
AankhoN ki binaayi ko, tumhari pehchaan ho gayi

Kaisi yeh tishnagee hai, bujhti nahi meri pyaas hai
Sirf dil hi nahiN, meri jaan bhi, tum pe qurbaan ho gayi

Jakad hi looN tumheiN, apne zulfoN ki zanjeeroN meiN
Lagta hai aaj niyat meri bhi, kuch be imaan ho gayi

Kiya hai tumne jabse, ahad-e-wafa haath thaamkar
“Aqsh” ki zindagi hi nahiN, maut bhi aasaan ho gayi
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«Reply #8 on: April 20, 2013, 03:15:43 PM »
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Quote from: aqsh on April 20, 2013, 01:50:02 PM
Roz keh dete hai nazuk se ishaare aksar
Kitni khamosh muhabbat ki zubaan hoti hai


Dekhi jo teri surat, saanseiN rawaan ho gayi
Pal bhar meiN hi jaise, meri chahat jawaan ho gayi

Ho gaya hai mushkil chupaana, apni chahat ko
Nigaah jab se hai mili, dil ki zubaan ho gayi

Rukh kahiN bhi ho, bas tum hi tum nazar aate ho
AankhoN ki binaayi ko, tumhari pehchaan ho gayi

Kaisi yeh tishnagee hai, bujhti nahi meri pyaas hai
Sirf dil hi nahiN, meri jaan bhi, tum pe qurbaan ho gayi

Jakad hi looN tumheiN, apne zulfoN ki zanjeeroN meiN
Lagta hai aaj niyat meri bhi, kuch be imaan ho gayi

Kiya hai tumne jabse, ahad-e-wafa haath thaamkar
“Aqsh” ki zindagi hi nahiN, maut bhi aasaan ho gayi




Kiya hai tumne jabse, ahad-e-wafa haath thaamkar
“Aqsh” ki zindagi hi nahiN, maut bhi aasaan ho gayi

WAAH WAAH LAJAWAB AQSH JI ,,ZABARDAST..
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«Reply #9 on: April 20, 2013, 03:27:00 PM »
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Aqsh Sahibaa Aadaab...!


WaaH jee waaH kia kahne behad khoob aur behad umdaa kalaam, gazab ke ahsaas O khayaal bayaaN kiye haiN aapne.. Usual Smile

Sabhi ashaar qabil e daad hai jee.. Har ashaar par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye... bazm ko roshan karte rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #10 on: April 20, 2013, 04:53:53 PM »
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Quote from: aqsh on April 20, 2013, 01:50:02 PM
Roz keh dete hai nazuk se ishaare aksar
Kitni khamosh muhabbat ki zubaan hoti hai


Dekhi jo teri surat, saanseiN rawaan ho gayi
Pal bhar meiN hi jaise, meri chahat jawaan ho gayi

Ho gaya hai mushkil chupaana, apni chahat ko
Nigaah jab se hai mili, dil ki zubaan ho gayi

Rukh kahiN bhi ho, bas tum hi tum nazar aate ho
AankhoN ki binaayi ko, tumhari pehchaan ho gayi

Kaisi yeh tishnagee hai, bujhti nahi meri pyaas hai

HAI KAISI YE TISHNAGI, BUJHTI NAHIN PYAAS MERI
Sirf dil hi nahiN, meri jaan bhi, tum pe qurbaan ho gayi

Jakad hi looN tumheiN, apne zulfoN ki zanjeeroN meiN
Lagta hai aaj niyat meri bhi, kuch be imaan ho gayi

Kiya hai tumne jabse, ahad-e-wafa haath thaamkar
“Aqsh” ki zindagi hi nahiN, maut bhi aasaan ho gayi





nice,ma'am
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«Reply #11 on: April 20, 2013, 04:59:45 PM »
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waah waah khubsoorat ghazal,.........bohat c daad,........
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«Reply #12 on: April 20, 2013, 05:34:40 PM »
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Quote from: Sudhir Ashq on April 20, 2013, 03:11:23 PM

Roz keh dete hai nazuk se ishaare aksar
Kitni khamosh muhabbat ki zubaan hoti hai

Dekhi jo teri surat, saanseiN rawaan ho gayi
Pal bhar meiN hi jaise, meri chahat jawaan ho gayi

Dekhi jo teri surat, saanseiN rawaan ho gayi
Pal bhar meiN hi jaise, meri chahat jawaan ho gayi

Ho gaya hai mushkil chupaana, apni chahat ko
Nigaah jab se hai mili, dil ki zubaan ho gayi

Rukh kahiN bhi ho, bas tum hi tum nazar aate ho
AankhoN ki binaayi ko, tumhari pehchaan ho gayi

Kaisi yeh tishnagee hai, bujhti nahi meri pyaas hai
Sirf dil hi nahiN, meri jaan bhi, tum pe qurbaan ho gayi

Jakad hi looN tumheiN, apne zulfoN ki zanjeeroN meiN
Lagta hai aaj niyat meri bhi, kuch be imaan ho gayi

Kiya hai tumne jabse, ahad-e-wafa haath thaamkar
“Aqsh” ki zindagi hi nahiN, maut bhi aasaan ho gayi
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Wah,Wah,Wah Mam.Very nice.Really beautiful written.Very emotional. Lazabab.




bahut bahut shukriya sudhir ji
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«Reply #13 on: April 20, 2013, 05:36:49 PM »
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Quote from: sahal on April 20, 2013, 03:15:43 PM
Kiya hai tumne jabse, ahad-e-wafa haath thaamkar
“Aqsh” ki zindagi hi nahiN, maut bhi aasaan ho gayi

WAAH WAAH LAJAWAB AQSH JI ,,ZABARDAST..
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ek Rau to banta hai.


bahut bahut shukriya sahal housla afzai ka aur rau ke liye bhi.
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«Reply #14 on: April 20, 2013, 05:38:22 PM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on April 20, 2013, 03:27:00 PM
Aqsh Sahibaa Aadaab...!


WaaH jee waaH kia kahne behad khoob aur behad umdaa kalaam, gazab ke ahsaas O khayaal bayaaN kiye haiN aapne.. Usual Smile

Sabhi ashaar qabil e daad hai jee.. Har ashaar par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye... bazm ko roshan karte rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile


parwaazji bahut bahut shukriya meri ghazal ko padhne aur pasand karne ke liye.
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