SAARA MANZAR BANJAR LAGTA HAI....////................////....IFTAKHAR

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Wo  chaaNd   bhi   uske     aage   kamtar  lagta hai
ChhaNd se  bhi   pyaara,    mera    dilbar   lagta hai

Jaanam teri  zulfeiN,   haiN   ghataaeiN  saawan ki
Uss   per    ye    tera     aaNchal,   ambar   lagta hai

AaNkhoN meiN  teri    jaadu,   laboN  pe  tere jaam
Ye  jism     damakta      tera      marmar    lagta hai

Sharma ke jab mujh  se, tum  nazreiN jhukaati ho
Allah   qasam    ek      khanjar      andar    lagta hai

Kehte   ho     mujh     ko     teri,    yaad    nahiN aati
Aye  jaanam  tujh  ko   aisa   kyuN   kar   lagta hai

PhooloN meiN khaamoshi kaliyaaN bhi roothi haiN
Bin  tere     saara       manzar,      banjar    lagta hai

Tum paas jo mere ho raunaq  hai  bahaaroN meiN
Ab to  mujh  ko   rangeeN,   har   manzar lagta hai



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«Reply #1 on: June 02, 2013, 09:00:24 AM »
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ahchi aashiqana kosish thi iftakhar saaheb.... mujhe doosra sher haasil-e-ghazal laga, umeed karta hun aapke kalam se aage v yuNhi aur umda kalaam padhne ko milte raheNge...
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«Reply #2 on: June 02, 2013, 09:10:50 AM »
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«Reply #3 on: June 02, 2013, 11:21:10 AM »
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Bahaut khoob Ifteqaar ji....bade rangeen aur vivid expressions hain apke .... Daad !!!
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«Reply #4 on: June 02, 2013, 11:28:52 AM »
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ufffffff bahut romantic ghazal kahi hai aapne iftakharji. har sher mohabbat se doobi hui. padhkar bahut maza aaya. hazaron dili daad qubool kare..
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«Reply #5 on: June 02, 2013, 11:56:45 AM »
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khubsurat , romantic ghazal hai.sabhi ashaar bahut khooob hain.Iftakhar sahib , bahut mubarakbaad .
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«Reply #6 on: June 02, 2013, 01:05:38 PM »
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Wo  chaaNd   bhi   uske     aage   kamtar  lagta hai
ChhaNd se  bhi   pyaara,    mera    dilbar   lagta hai

Jaanam teri  zulfeiN,   haiN   ghataaeiN  saawan ki
Uss   per    ye    tera     aaNchal,   ambar   lagta hai

AaNkhoN meiN  teri    jaadu,   laboN  pe  tere jaam
Ye  jism     damakta      tera      marmar    lagta hai

Sharma ke jab mujh  se, tum  nazreiN jhukaati ho
Allah   qasam    ek      khanjar      andar    lagta hai

Kehte   ho     mujh     ko     teri,    yaad    nahiN aati
Aye  jaanam  tujh  ko   aisa   kyuN   kar   lagta hai

PhooloN meiN khaamoshi kaliyaaN bhi roothi haiN
Bin  tere     saara       manzar,      banjar    lagta hai

Tum paas jo mere ho raunaq  hai  bahaaroN meiN
Ab mujh  ko  to   rangeeN,   har   manzar lagta hai






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«Reply #7 on: June 02, 2013, 01:11:29 PM »
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PhooloN meiN khaamoshi kaliyaaN bhi roothi haiN
Bin  tere     saara       manzar,      banjar    lagta hai


lajawaab likha hai iftikhar sahab..
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«Reply #8 on: June 02, 2013, 01:19:32 PM »
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Wo  chaaNd   bhi   uske     aage   kamtar  lagta hai
ChhaNd se  bhi   pyaara,    mera    dilbar   lagta hai

Jaanam teri  zulfeiN,   haiN   ghataaeiN  saawan ki
Uss   per    ye    tera     aaNchal,   ambar   lagta hai

AaNkhoN meiN  teri    jaadu,   laboN  pe  tere jaam
Ye  jism     damakta      tera      marmar    lagta hai

khoobsurat ghazal Iftakhar bhai
par ye sher to behad khoob rahe..
kuch vaisa ehsaas..
dhoop bhari chhat pe baras gaya paani.
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«Reply #9 on: June 03, 2013, 01:21:44 AM »
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ahchi aashiqana kosish thi iftakhar saaheb.... mujhe doosra sher haasil-e-ghazal laga, umeed karta hun aapke kalam se aage v yuNhi aur umda kalaam padhne ko milte raheNge...
Bahut bahut shukriya janaab hausla afzaai ka.
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«Reply #10 on: June 03, 2013, 01:54:32 AM »
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Bade Rangeen Aur Aashiqana Khayaalat Pesh Kiye Hain Aapne.Iftikhaar Sahab.Mahboob Ki Tahsin Se Bharpura Aapki Yeh Ghazal Bahut Achchi Bani Hai
Shuru Se Akhi Tak Sabhi Ashaar Khub Kahe Aapne
Is Khoobsurat Peshkash Pe Mubaraqbaad Aur Dili Daad Ba Aawaz e Buland Kabul Farmaayen...

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«Reply #11 on: June 03, 2013, 03:13:10 AM »
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Wo  chaaNd   bhi   uske     aage   kamtar  lagta hai
ChhaNd se  bhi   pyaara,    mera    dilbar   lagta hai
kaun hai ji wo mujhe bhi uss se milwana.....! icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
Jaanam teri  zulfeiN,   haiN   ghataaeiN  saawan ki
Uss   per    ye    tera     aaNchal,   ambar   lagta hai
kya kahne bhai wah.............!
AaNkhoN meiN  teri    jaadu,   laboN  pe  tere jaam
Ye  jism     damakta      tera      marmar    lagta hai
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Sharma ke jab mujh  se, tum  nazreiN jhukaati ho
Allah   qasam    ek      khanjar      andar    lagta hai
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Kehte   ho     mujh     ko     teri,    yaad    nahiN aati
Aye  jaanam  tujh  ko   aisa   kyuN   kar   lagta hai
bahut dino.n se tum ne jo chat nahin ki mujh se icon_flower icon_flower
PhooloN meiN khaamoshi kaliyaaN bhi roothi haiN
Bin  tere     saara       manzar,      banjar    lagta hai
acha ,mujhe to aisa nahin lagta icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent
Tum paas jo mere ho raunaq  hai  bahaaroN meiN
Ab mujh  ko  to   rangeeN,   har   manzar lagta hai

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ifti, mujhe bahut pasand aaya tumharaa ye kalaam is liye ek rau nazr karti hoon...!
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«Reply #12 on: June 03, 2013, 07:29:15 AM »
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ifti, mujhe bahut pasand aaya tumharaa ye kalaam is liye ek rau nazr karti hoon...!
Mohtarma, bahut nawaazish, mujhe to aapke comments ka intezaar rehta hai, dil baagh baagh ho gaya aapke comments dekh kar.
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«Reply #13 on: June 03, 2013, 07:29:57 AM »
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Bade Rangeen Aur Aashiqana Khayaalat Pesh Kiye Hain Aapne.Iftikhaar Sahab.Mahboob Ki Tahsin Se Bharpura Aapki Yeh Ghazal Bahut Achchi Bani Hai
Shuru Se Akhi Tak Sabhi Ashaar Khub Kahe Aapne
Is Khoobsurat Peshkash Pe Mubaraqbaad Aur Dili Daad Ba Aawaz e Buland Kabul Farmaayen...

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shad o aabaad rahiye

shihab
Janaab, tah-e-dil se aapka shukriya itni hausla afzaai ke liye.
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«Reply #14 on: June 03, 2013, 07:31:15 AM »
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Wo  chaaNd   bhi   uske     aage   kamtar  lagta hai
ChhaNd se  bhi   pyaara,    mera    dilbar   lagta hai

Jaanam teri  zulfeiN,   haiN   ghataaeiN  saawan ki
Uss   per    ye    tera     aaNchal,   ambar   lagta hai

AaNkhoN meiN  teri    jaadu,   laboN  pe  tere jaam
Ye  jism     damakta      tera      marmar    lagta hai

khoobsurat ghazal Iftakhar bhai
par ye sher to behad khoob rahe..
kuch vaisa ehsaas..
dhoop bhari chhat pe baras gaya paani.
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Mukesh bhai, bahut bahut shukriya itni taa'reef aur hausla afzaai ka. YuN hi saath banaaye rakhiye.
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