Saath tum ho, to, yah khushee bhi saath deygee zaroor! -Panna 2:Ghazals

abdbundeli

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«Reply #15 on: April 09, 2010, 07:36:27 AM »

Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on April 08, 2010, 07:56:33 PM

BEHTREEN ABD Clapping Smiley

Thanks a lot, khamosh_aawaaz ji!

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Re: Saath tum ho, to, yah khushee bhi saath deygee zaroor!

«Reply #16 on: April 09, 2010, 07:38:49 AM »

Quote from: madhuwesh on April 08, 2010, 08:19:33 PM

Bahut khoob Abd ji,very beautiful gazal.Malli ji aapne bhi bahut khoob likha.

Thanks a lot, Madhu!

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Re: Saath tum ho, to, yah khushee bhi saath deygee zaroor!

«Reply #17 on: April 09, 2010, 07:40:33 AM »

Quote from: Rajesh Harish on April 09, 2010, 03:18:42 AM

Good one Abd Ji

Thanks a lot, Rajesh ji!

- abd bundeli


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Pallavi Gupta

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Re: Saath tum ho, to, yah khushee bhi saath deygee zaroor!

«Reply #18 on: April 09, 2010, 07:44:04 AM »

abd ji bahut khub.....this gazal is amazing way to express the feeling......GOOD WORK ABD JI...
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Re: Saath tum ho, to, yah khushee bhi saath deygee zaroor!

«Reply #19 on: April 09, 2010, 09:46:35 AM »

Aap to bura maan gai Malli ji. Ye gazal kisne likhi hai maloom nahi lekin Shak aapne khud paida kiya hai. Ye puri gazal meter mein hai lekin aakhri sher meter mein nahi hai iski wajah hai usme "Malli" lafz galat jagah jodna. Ye kaise ho sakta hai ke koi shayar puri ghazal meter mein likhe aur ek sher meter mein na likhe.

Achha chaliye isi gazal ki zameen mein ek aur sherlikhkar dikhaiye.

Aaj maine aapki dusri posts bhi padhi aur paaya ke unmein kuchh poems kisi aur ki hain. for example:

Is baat se khafa nahi ,shikwa nahi mujhe
Mere qareeb reh ke bhi wo samjha nahi mujhe

Yoindia par aapne ye gazal 21.2.2010 ko post ki thi jo Kashif Durrani ki hai. Na to aapne NM likha na hi Poetry Launge mein post kiya. Agar google mein search karein to bahut jagah ye gazal aapko mil jayegi. Guest ko yahan link dene ki permission nahi hai isliye link nahi de saka.

Aapse request hai ke kisi aur ki creation post karein to uske shayar/kavi ka naam bhi likhen ya kam se kam apne naam se post na karein. Agar aapki creation koi apne naam se kahin publish kare to aapko kaisa lagega. Thanks.


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abdbundeli

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Re: Saath tum ho, to, yah khushee bhi saath deygee zaroor!

«Reply #20 on: April 09, 2010, 01:00:20 PM »

Quote from: Pallavi Gupta on April 09, 2010, 07:44:04 AM

abd ji bahut khub.....this gazal is amazing way to express the feeling......GOOD WORK ABD JI...
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Bahut-bahut shukriyah Pallavi ji! Mujhey khushee huye, ki, is gazal key kisee sher ney aapkey 'mamtaa bharey' dil-o-dimaag ko, eik lamhey key liye hi sahee, 'aandolit' to zaroor hi kiyaa hai!

- abd bundeli


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