saba kam hai,,,,ghazal,,,,,jeet jainam

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fizzaa,o main faili  aaj  saba  kam hai,
badlo ke aansu,o se   mera  gam kam hai,

kisi ko kiya dosh datey   apni haalat ka,
khuda ke dar par ki  dua ka asar kam hai,

log puchte hai aksr meri bebasi ka karan,
beyaan to  kar datey par aaj waqt kam hai,

dard itna hai ke lafji  beyaan nahi hota,
hath main kalam hai par  siyaahi  kam hai,

aanshu rukte nahi  rokne se  mare bewaffa,
tadap badhti gayi aankho me aansu kam hai,

zindagi veeran har manjil sunsaan hai mari
itni ghootan badh gayi ki   saanse kam hai,
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«Reply #1 on: November 16, 2014, 07:58:14 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: November 16, 2014, 08:50:05 PM »
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waaaaaaaaaaH kyaa baat hai, bahut umdah peshkash hai.
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«Reply #3 on: November 17, 2014, 01:30:36 AM »
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bahut khob jeet ji
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