Sabhee soofiyaanah: jalaa daaliye?

by abdbundeli on July 09, 2009, 04:33:48 AM
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Dosto!
Aaj jo gazal peish kar rahaa huun, iltijah hai, ki aap, usey khaas gour farmaatey huye padhney ki inaayat kareyngey! Shukriyah!

Sanam kaa thikaanah: jalaa daaliye?
Kharhaa aashiyaanah: jalaa daaliye?

Ibaadat kaa har aastaan torhiye?
Banaa kar nishaanah: jalaa daaliye?

Mazaaroun mein baa-amn khaamosh hai:
Sabhee soofiyaanah: jalaa daaliye?

Har aayeen-e-insaan, kufraan hai?
Banaa kuchh bahaanah: jalaa daaliye?

Tawaareekh bas eik, taareekh bhi?
Sabhee kuchh puraanaa: jalaa daaliye?

Mohabbat ko zindah dafan keejiye?
Jigar aashiqaanah: jalaa daaliye?

Layaliyoun key sir sab, qalam keejiye?
Majaazee zamaanah: jalaa daaliye?

Khushee dey jo kuchh bhi, na baaqee bachey?
Adab kaa khazaanah: jalaa daaliye?

Na insaaniyat ho, na insaan hon?
Shahar moosiiqaanah: jalaa daaliye?

Masarrat kee ab bazm khaamosh ho?
'Abd', shaamiyaanah: jalaa daaliye?

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«Reply #1 on: July 09, 2009, 05:45:24 AM »
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Wah Wah Wah Bhaut Bahut Khoob Abd Ji, Wonderful Ghazal, Kya kahe ham iss beshkeemti kaam ki taarif mein..bass wah aur wah Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Shally.
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«Reply #2 on: July 09, 2009, 06:03:56 AM »
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Quote from: k.shael on July 09, 2009, 05:45:24 AM
Wah Wah Wah Bhaut Bahut Khoob Abd Ji, Wonderful Ghazal, Kya kahe ham iss neshkeemti kaam ki taarif mein..bass wah aur wah Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Shally.
Thanks a lot Shally!
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«Reply #3 on: July 09, 2009, 06:19:39 AM »
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wah kaya zajbaat hai,..... bahoot khoob Abd ji...
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«Reply #4 on: July 09, 2009, 06:22:44 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on July 09, 2009, 06:19:39 AM
wah kaya zajbaat hai,..... bahoot khoob Abd ji...
Thanks a lot Pooja ji!
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«Reply #5 on: July 09, 2009, 06:24:52 AM »
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KYA BAAT HAI  ABD JI.....

MITA DO IS DUNIYA KO,SAB BARBAAD HAI YAHAN,
JOOTHA HAI PYAAR SABKA,INSAANO MEIN RAHETE HAI, HAYWAAN YAHAN.
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«Reply #6 on: July 09, 2009, 06:40:51 AM »
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Quote from: cara on July 09, 2009, 06:24:52 AM
KYA BAAT HAI  ABD JI.....

MITA DO IS DUNIYA KO,SAB BARBAAD HAI YAHAN,
JOOTHA HAI PYAAR SABKA,INSAANO MEIN RAHETE HAI, HAYWAAN YAHAN.
Shukriyah cara ji!

Mohabbat sey nafrat jalaa daaliye!
Bahut kuchh bhalaa hai: bhalaa paaliye!!

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«Reply #7 on: July 09, 2009, 06:41:49 AM »
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Quote from: cara on July 09, 2009, 06:24:52 AM
KYA BAAT HAI  ABD JI.....

MITA DO IS DUNIYA KO,SAB BARBAAD HAI YAHAN,
JOOTHA HAI PYAAR SABKA,INSAANO MEIN RAHETE HAI, HAYWAAN YAHAN.

Nice lines Cara ji
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«Reply #8 on: July 09, 2009, 12:14:32 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on July 09, 2009, 04:33:48 AM

Dosto!
Aaj jo gazal peish kar rahaa huun, iltijah hai, ki aap, usey khaas gour farmaatey huye padhney ki inaayat kareyngey! Shukriyah!

Sanam kaa thikaanah: jalaa daaliye?
Kharhaa aashiyaanah: jalaa daaliye?

Ibaadat kaa har aastaan torhiye?
Banaa kar nishaanah: jalaa daaliye?

Mazaaroun mein baa-amn khaamosh hai:
Sabhee soofiyaanah: jalaa daaliye?

Har aayeen-e-insaan, kufraan hai?
Banaa kuchh bahaanah: jalaa daaliye?

Tawaareekh bas eik, taareekh bhi?
Sabhee kuchh puraanaa: jalaa daaliye?

Mohabbat ko zindah dafan keejiye?
Jigar aashiqaanah: jalaa daaliye?

Layaliyoun key sir sab, qalam keejiye?
Majaazee zamaanah: jalaa daaliye?

Khushee dey jo kuchh bhi, na baaqee bachey?
Adab kaa khazaanah: jalaa daaliye?

Na insaaniyat ho, na insaan hon?
Shahar moosiiqaanah: jalaa daaliye?

Masarrat kee ab bazm khaamosh ho?
'Abd', shaamiyaanah: jalaa daaliye?

                                  - abd bundeli


Babu Ji,

Ye ghazal padhi..aur baar baar padhi......kitni maasoomiyat se aaj ke haalat aur kuch logon ki soch ko aapne alfaaz main utaar diya.....bohot achchi lagi ye ghazal...Bohot bohot khoob Babu Ji  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: July 09, 2009, 12:30:51 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on July 09, 2009, 12:14:32 PM

Babu Ji,

Ye ghazal padhi..aur baar baar padhi......kitni maasoomiyat se aaj ke haalat aur kuch logon ki soch ko aapne alfaaz main utaar diya.....bohot achchi lagi ye ghazal...Bohot bohot khoob Babu Ji  Applause Applause Applause

Thanks a lot bitia Celmira!
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«Reply #10 on: July 09, 2009, 02:38:04 PM »
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Quote from: @kaash on July 09, 2009, 02:09:49 PM
Applause Applause Applause
bahot khoob ghazal likhi hai aapne Abd ji
very nicely created
bahot ache ashaar hain,very nice
Thanks a lot @kaash ji!

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«Reply #11 on: July 09, 2009, 02:50:10 PM »
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WaaB Abd ji... SubaanAllah kya khoob Likha hai... bahoot hi behtreen.. Bahoot Bahoot Khoob!
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«Reply #12 on: July 09, 2009, 03:53:46 PM »
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Quote from: Sophi on July 09, 2009, 02:50:10 PM
WaaB Abd ji... SubaanAllah kya khoob Likha hai... bahoot hi behtreen.. Bahoot Bahoot Khoob!
Thanks a lot Sophi ji!
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«Reply #13 on: July 09, 2009, 04:01:36 PM »
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Khushee dey jo kuchh bhi, na baaqee bachey?
Adab kaa khazaanah: jalaa daaliye?

Na insaaniyat ho, na insaan hon?
Shahar moosiiqaanah: jalaa daaliye?

Masarrat kee ab bazm khaamosh ho?
'Abd', shaamiyaanah: jalaa daaliye?

                                  - abd bundeli

Wah wah bahut khoob... esp the above lines ...bahut accha likha hai aapne Uncle ji  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #14 on: July 09, 2009, 05:30:36 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on July 09, 2009, 04:01:36 PM
Wah wah bahut khoob... esp the above lines ...bahut accha likha hai aapne Uncle ji  Thumbs UP
Thanks a lot Roja!
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