sach bolne waale ,,,,,,ghazal,,,,,jeet jainam saini

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sach bolne waale abb kahaa,n rah gaye iss zamaane main,
ishq ke  khel main mazaa aane lagaa dil aaj-maane main,

thokar khakar sambhal jane wala shaks kamyaab hota hai,
harta wahi hai jo lagaa rehta hai galtee dohraane main,

apne suwaarth main kisi ka ghar to tabah kar sakte hai,
par kisi main mahaanta nahi kisi kaa ghar banaane main,

barsaat bhee be-bas hai kaise pyaas bhujhaye bharti ki,
gussaar se baraa suraj laga hai bharti ko jalaane main,

majboor insaan kaise khuwaab  dekhega iss jahaa,n main,
yaha,n adam koi qasar nahi chorta kisi ko mitaane main,

gairo,n se kaise  shikawa  kartaa apne halaat kaa jeet,
apne hi ghaat lagaate hai akser  kasti ko dubaane main,
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«Reply #1 on: June 21, 2015, 08:06:38 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: June 22, 2015, 12:14:48 AM »
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waah waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #3 on: June 22, 2015, 03:49:43 AM »
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Very nice.
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«Reply #4 on: June 22, 2015, 07:57:14 AM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #5 on: June 22, 2015, 11:56:24 AM »
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बहुत बहुत खूब......

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«Reply #6 on: June 22, 2015, 06:00:55 PM »
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bohat bohat shukriya surinder sir ji
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«Reply #7 on: June 22, 2015, 06:01:28 PM »
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shukriya saini sir ji
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shukriya pooja ji
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«Reply #9 on: June 22, 2015, 06:04:48 PM »
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shukriya amit sir ji
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wah... baht khoob lkkha hai aapne beta. khush raho. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #12 on: June 22, 2015, 06:18:52 PM »
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bohat bohat shukriya suman aunty ji
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«Reply #13 on: June 23, 2015, 10:51:44 AM »
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bahut khoob Jeet ji....!!!
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