Sachche dil se maango dua............................................Aqsh..

by aqsh on August 19, 2013, 12:26:41 PM
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«Reply #15 on: August 19, 2013, 03:50:55 PM »
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Just EXCELLENT
thnx saini sir..
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«Reply #16 on: August 19, 2013, 03:53:44 PM »
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Wah Badi Pyari Soch Hai Aapki
Mujhe Bas Thoda Sa Shaq Tha
Abhi Door Ho Gaya Bahut Shukariya
Pls Bura Mat Maaniyega Bina Samjhe
Bhi Taareef Karna Theek Nahi Na Khair
Sahi Mein Aapko Ab Tak Jitna Parha
Hai Usme Sabse Zyada Ye Pasand Aaya
Bahut Bahut Khub Behna Is Khoobsurat
Peshkash Pe Hazaaron Dili Daad

ALLAH pak aapko Chust. Mast. Aur Swast Rakhe Aameen


Shad o Aabaad Rahiye

Shihab
Jazak allah shihab ji aur is mein naraaz hone jaisi koi baat nahin hai. aapne padha aur pasand kiye thnx a lot.. aur duaon ke liye bahut bahut shukriya allah aapko jazaye khair se nawaze aameen..
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«Reply #17 on: August 19, 2013, 03:55:28 PM »
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Summa Aameen ...Aapko Bhi
Bahut Bhut Shukaria Aapka


Shad o Aabaad Rahiye


Shihab
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«Reply #18 on: August 19, 2013, 03:56:02 PM »
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bahot sunder likha hai aqsh
thnx a lot poonama ji...
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«Reply #19 on: August 19, 2013, 03:58:37 PM »
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kya baat hai aqsh ji.. bahut umdaa peshkash..

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thnx a lott touhid ji..
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«Reply #20 on: August 19, 2013, 04:17:25 PM »
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wah wah Applause Applause
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«Reply #21 on: August 19, 2013, 04:19:25 PM »
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Aqsh ji behad hi khoob, ab yahan kahon to ghalat na hoga ke tareef ke liye alfaaz hi nahi hain mere paas...
is se pahle aapne ek Naat bheji thin, jisne mujhe bahot mutasir kiya tha aur aaj aapka ye kalaam asmaan ko chota huwa - tareef se baala umdah aur aala...
Allah se dua hai ke wo aapke qhalam may aur bhi taseer de aur aapko apni amaan may rakhe aameen summa aameen...
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«Reply #22 on: August 19, 2013, 05:33:22 PM »
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just beautiful
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«Reply #23 on: August 19, 2013, 07:00:20 PM »
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waah waah waah Aqsh jee, excellent, khususan 4th aur 5th sher bahut pasand aae. DheroN daad aur ek Rau qubool kijiye.
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«Reply #24 on: August 19, 2013, 09:44:54 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob Aqsh ji...!!!
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«Reply #25 on: August 19, 2013, 11:23:29 PM »
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Waah Aqsh , aapki is ghazal ne bahut mutaassir kiya,
bahut bahut khoob likha hai , sanjeeda  aur  pakeeza
khayalaat  ashaar  mein  dhaaale hain .  Bahut bahut
mubarakbaad aur dheron daad qubool  kijya. Allah aap
ke kalaam ko   aur tabaani ata kare . Amin.
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«Reply #26 on: August 20, 2013, 01:12:58 AM »
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Sachche dil se mango dua toh, naseeb badal jaata hai
Waqt kitna hi bura kyuN na ho, aakhir tal jaata hai

Oonche mehlon waale, kabhi zameen ki bhi khabar rakh
Ke ugta hua suraj bhi, shaam hote hote dhal jaata hai

Chaar din ki jawani par, naaz mat kar maati ke putle
Ke saansoN ke chalte chalte hi, phir dam nikal jaata hai

Mat soch teri khairaat se hi, wabasta uski hayaat hai
Ke bin maa aur baap ke bhi toh, bachcha pal jaata hai

Ai insaan rah naadim apne gunaah par, us rabb ke aage
Phir dekh tu kaise gir kar bhi, dobara sambhal jaata hai

“Aqsh” kuch nahiN toh tu, apne muskurahat se nawaaz de
Ke tute hue khilone se bhi toh, bachcha behal jaata hai...



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«Reply #27 on: August 20, 2013, 01:30:20 AM »
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waah waah waah romance queen ka ye naya anzaaz bhi behad umda hai..Winking

Bahut bahut bahut khoob likha hai aqsh jee..dhero dhero daad..happy9
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«Reply #28 on: August 20, 2013, 04:19:31 AM »
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Waah! Leak se hatkar likha aapne aisa ki reply bhi karne ko majboor kar dia! Sach mukammal kalaam ise kahte hain jinme healthy message aur seekh ho! Aapka kum likhna aur asardaar likhna ab samajh me aa raha hai Aqsh!
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«Reply #29 on: August 20, 2013, 04:38:20 AM »
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Bahut Khoob.
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