Sachche dil se maango dua............................................Aqsh..

by aqsh on August 19, 2013, 12:26:41 PM
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«Reply #30 on: August 20, 2013, 09:05:43 PM »
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wah wah Applause Applause
Thnx a lot prashad ji...
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«Reply #31 on: August 20, 2013, 09:06:45 PM »
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Aqsh ji behad hi khoob, ab yahan kahon to ghalat na hoga ke tareef ke liye alfaaz hi nahi hain mere paas...
is se pahle aapne ek Naat bheji thin, jisne mujhe bahot mutasir kiya tha aur aaj aapka ye kalaam asmaan ko chota huwa - tareef se baala umdah aur aala...
Allah se dua hai ke wo aapke qhalam may aur bhi taseer de aur aapko apni amaan may rakhe aameen summa aameen...
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Iqtedar ji meri kalaam ko padhne aur pasand karne ke liye bahut bahut shukriya.. aage bhi aise hi saath dete rahiye...
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«Reply #32 on: August 20, 2013, 09:07:25 PM »
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just beautiful
thnx mukesh ji..
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«Reply #33 on: August 20, 2013, 09:08:29 PM »
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waah waah waah Aqsh jee, excellent, khususan 4th aur 5th sher bahut pasand aae. DheroN daad aur ek Rau qubool kijiye.
thnx a lottttt iftakhar ji...rau ke liye bhi bahut bahut shukriya..
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«Reply #34 on: August 20, 2013, 09:09:13 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut bahut khoob Aqsh ji...!!!

thnxxx hriday ji a lot....
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«Reply #35 on: August 20, 2013, 09:11:02 PM »
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Waah Aqsh , aapki is ghazal ne bahut mutaassir kiya,
bahut bahut khoob likha hai , sanjeeda  aur  pakeeza
khayalaat  ashaar  mein  dhaaale hain .  Bahut bahut
mubarakbaad aur dheron daad qubool  kijya. Allah aap
ke kalaam ko   aur tabaani ata kare . Amin.

Aameen..Bahut bahut shukriya hasan ji.. aage bhi aise hi housla afzai karte rahiye.. aur aise hi apne duaon mein yaad rakhiyega.. jazak allah ul khair..
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«Reply #36 on: August 20, 2013, 09:11:39 PM »
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Wha wha bhut khub  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
thnxxx a lot rajan ji...
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«Reply #37 on: August 20, 2013, 09:12:49 PM »
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waah waah waah romance queen ka ye naya anzaaz bhi behad umda hai..Winking

Bahut bahut bahut khoob likha hai aqsh jee..dhero dhero daad..happy9

 Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Ashwani life mein romance ka tadka bahut zaroori hai bachche.. tumhe bhi samajh mein aa jayega bahut jald.. waise thnxxxxxxxxxxxx a lotttttttttt..thnx once again for this beautiful namee  Giggle
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«Reply #38 on: August 20, 2013, 09:14:34 PM »
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Waah! Leak se hatkar likha aapne aisa ki reply bhi karne ko majboor kar dia! Sach mukammal kalaam ise kahte hain jinme healthy message aur seekh ho! Aapka kum likhna aur asardaar likhna ab samajh me aa raha hai Aqsh!
bahut bahut shukriya aapka kaash ji.. aapne padha aur housla afzai ki aage bhi aise hi saath dijiyega..
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«Reply #39 on: August 20, 2013, 09:15:13 PM »
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Bahut Khoob.
thnxx a lot ravi ji....
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«Reply #40 on: August 21, 2013, 02:13:05 PM »
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Sachche dil se mango dua toh, naseeb badal jaata hai

Wakai bilkul sach kahaa.. Aksar kitaabo, risaalo me paraa hai ki kismat me jo likha hai... Wo kabhi badla nahii kartaa ....... Par duaa ak aesa hathiyaar hai.. Ak aesa jariya hai... Jo takdeer likhne waale se hi takdeer ko badalwaa deti hai

Waqt kitna hi bura kyuN na ho, aakhir tal jaata hai

Time ka kaam to gujarna hai... Wo apna kaam bari khoobi se karta hai.. Achcha ho ya bura.. Aasaan ho ya mushkil... Gujar hi jata hai

Oonche mehlon waale, kabhi zameen ki bhi khabar rakh
Ke ugta hua suraj bhi, shaam hote hote dhal jaata hai

Kaa misaal di hai.... Koi kitna bhi baraa ho... Kitna bhi unchaa ho... Udhnaa nahee chaahiye.... Kyonki jo aaj udne ko pankh de rahaa hai... Kal paanv ke niche se jameen tak bhii kheench sakta hai


Chaar din ki jawani par, naaz mat kar maati ke putle
Ke saansoN ke chalte chalte hi, phir dam nikal jaata hai

Very nice

Mat soch teri khairaat se hi, wabasta uski hayaat hai
Ke bin maa aur baap ke bhi toh, bachcha pal jaata hai

Palne wala to rab hai... Usne jise bhi duniya me paida kiya... Uska rijak bhi jameen pe utaar diya...

Ai insaan rah naadim apne gunaah par, us rabb ke aage
Phir dekh tu kaise gir kar bhi, dobara sambhal jaata hai

Bilkul ..bilkul

“Aqsh” kuch nahiN toh tu, apne muskurahat se nawaaz de
Ke tute hue khilone se bhi toh, bachcha behal jaata hai...


Zabardast.... Muskruhaat... Ak chhota sa tohfaa.... Jo bina kisi kharch ke dosre ko diya ja sakta hai... Agar ham musalsal baantne lage to... Kyaa hoga.. Soch kar hi dil bhaag-bhaag ho uthtaa hai


Baajee aapne kyaa zabardast likhaa hai..... Kitne gahre khayaalaat hai... Unki adaayegii aasaan na thii..... Bahut-bahut mubaarakbaad... Aesi hi gazle likhiye.. Jo hame kuch sikhaatii hai.... Wo jo ham bhool chuke hai.. Yaad dilaati hai

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«Reply #41 on: August 23, 2013, 02:11:41 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya masoom.. haan koshish kaarongi aage bhi aisi ghazalein likhne ki..
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