sachmuch sabki mata dharti

by suman59 on December 02, 2012, 07:56:52 AM
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सचमुच सबकी माता धरती
अपनी भाग्यविधाता  धरती

लुट रहा है किसकी अस्मत
मानव समझ न पाता धरती

काश कहीं तुम मिल जाते तो
अपना दर्द सुनाता धरती

तुझ में ही तो खो जाना है
तुझसे ऐसा नाता  धरती

तुम हो माँ  से बढ कर सबकी
रिश्ता यही सुहाता  धरती

नदी, हवा के संग ये पर्वत
गीत तुम्हारे गाता धरती

उजड रहा हरियाला-आँचल
लालच ही उकसाता धरती

माँ  के बाद नाम जुबाँ  पे
बार-बार बस आता धरती 
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«Reply #1 on: December 02, 2012, 08:27:29 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: December 02, 2012, 08:28:27 AM »
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wah wah, apnee dharti maa ke liye apar sneh, ye humari sanskriti hai ki hum dharti ko bhi maa ka sthan dete hain, dhero dad suman ji  icon_salut icon_salut icon_salut
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«Reply #3 on: December 02, 2012, 09:46:44 AM »
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Bahut badhiya..
dobara padha maine..
bahut umda
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«Reply #4 on: December 02, 2012, 11:59:38 AM »
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very very true lekin kitne log samajhte hain inn baaton ko....
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«Reply #5 on: December 02, 2012, 01:26:55 PM »
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bahut khoob bahut khoob
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«Reply #6 on: December 02, 2012, 02:19:07 PM »
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bahut sunder bahut sunder ek rau tumhaaraa huaa "kaash kaheen tum mil jaatee to.
apnaa dard sunaataa dhartee.
pahle misre men jaataa kee jagah jatee kar leejiye
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«Reply #7 on: December 05, 2012, 08:50:23 AM »
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Quote from: pritam tripathi on December 02, 2012, 08:27:29 AM
Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you!
i have no words

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«Reply #8 on: December 05, 2012, 08:51:29 AM »
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Quote from: prashad on December 02, 2012, 08:28:27 AM
wah wah, apnee dharti maa ke liye apar sneh, ye humari sanskriti hai ki hum dharti ko bhi maa ka sthan dete hain, dhero dad suman ji  icon_salut icon_salut icon_salut


shukriya prashad jee
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«Reply #9 on: December 05, 2012, 08:52:06 AM »
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Quote from: mkv on December 02, 2012, 09:46:44 AM
Bahut badhiya..
dobara padha maine..
bahut umda

shukriya mkv jee
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«Reply #10 on: December 05, 2012, 08:53:15 AM »
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Quote from: Ritesh Modi on December 02, 2012, 11:59:38 AM
very very true lekin kitne log samajhte hain inn baaton ko....

samjhte bahut log hai bas dikhate nahi hai.
aapka bahut bahut shukriya modi sb
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Quote from: anmolarora on December 02, 2012, 01:26:55 PM
bahut khoob bahut khoob

thank you vry much anmol arora sb
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«Reply #12 on: December 05, 2012, 08:56:44 AM »
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Quote from: suman59 on December 02, 2012, 07:56:52 AM

सचमुच सबकी माता धरती
अपनी भाग्यविधाता  धरती

लुट रहा है किसकी अस्मत
मानव समझ न पाता धरती

काश कहीं तुम मिल जाती तो
अपना दर्द सुनाता धरती

तुझ में ही तो खो जाना है
तुझसे ऐसा नाता  धरती

तुम हो माँ  से बढ कर सबकी
रिश्ता यही सुहाता  धरती

नदी, हवा के संग ये पर्वत
गीत तुम्हारे गाता धरती

उजड रहा हरियाला-आँचल
लालच ही उकसाता धरती

माँ  के बाद नाम जुबाँ  पे
बार-बार बस आता धरती  

correct kiya saini sb
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«Reply #13 on: December 05, 2012, 01:10:56 PM »
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shabdo ke peeche pavitra bhawna hain suman ji, bahut pyari peshkash rahi
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«Reply #14 on: December 06, 2012, 02:51:22 AM »
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Quote from: livingbytheday on December 05, 2012, 01:10:56 PM
shabdo ke peeche pavitra bhawna hain suman ji, bahut pyari peshkash rahi

shukriya jee
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