SadiyoN Se Laila Majnu Ki Kabre.....masoom shahzada

by Masoom Shahzada on February 16, 2013, 05:10:26 AM
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Choolhe me rotiyaaN jalii, kuch to baat hai.
Ghanto tak guftagu chalii, kuch to baat hai.
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SadiyoN se Laila Majnu kii kabre udaas thii.
Es saal kaliyaaN khilii, kuch to baat  hai.
.
MaiN thiik waqt par wahaaN se gujraa tha.
Wo raaste me na milii, kuch to baat hai.
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Garibo ka thand se marna, chhotii si baat thii.
Chhotii baat barii chalii, kuch to baat hai.
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Ye ghar kal tak maidan-ae-jang tha.
Saas bahu galey milii, kuch to baat hai.
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«Reply #1 on: February 16, 2013, 05:16:23 AM »
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Garibo ka thand se marna, chhotii si baat thii.
Chhotii baat barii chalii, kuch to baat hai. .
 
Ye ghar kal tak maidan-ae-jang tha.
Saas bahu galey milii, kuch to baat hai.
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«Reply #2 on: February 16, 2013, 05:56:24 AM »
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waah waah kyaa baat hai
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«Reply #3 on: February 16, 2013, 06:04:39 AM »
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Quote from: Masoom Shahzada on February 16, 2013, 05:10:26 AM

Choolhe me rotiyaaN jalii, kuch to baat hai.
Ghanto tak guftagu chalii, kuch to baat hai.
.
SadiyoN se Laila Majnu kii kabre udaas thii.
Es saal kaliyaaN khilii, kuch to baat  hai.
.
MaiN thiik waqt par wahaaN se gujraa tha.
Wo raaste me na milii, kuch to baat hai.
.
Garibo ka thand se marna, chhotii si baat thii.
Chhotii baat barii chalii, kuch to baat hai.
.
Ye ghar kal tak maidan-ae-jang tha.
Saas bahu galey milii, kuch to baat hai.

SadiyoN se Laila Majnu kii kabre udaas thii.
Es saal kaliyaaN khilii, kuch to baat  hai.

WAH WAAH LAJAWAB MASOOM ,,ZABARDAST,,
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«Reply #4 on: February 16, 2013, 06:12:29 AM »
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wah wah wah masoom jee umda ghazal hai daad qubool kareN
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«Reply #5 on: February 16, 2013, 06:51:52 AM »
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Quote from: Masoom Shahzada on February 16, 2013, 05:10:26 AM

Choolhe me rotiyaaN jalii, kuch to baat hai.
Ghanto tak guftagu chalii, kuch to baat hai.
.
SadiyoN se Laila Majnu kii kabre udaas thii.
Es saal kaliyaaN khilii, kuch to baat  hai.
.
MaiN thiik waqt par wahaaN se gujraa tha.
Wo raaste me na milii, kuch to baat hai.
.
Garibo ka thand se marna, chhotii si baat thii.
Chhotii baat barii chalii, kuch to baat hai.
.
Ye ghar kal tak maidan-ae-jang tha.
Saas bahu galey milii, kuch to baat hai.


Bahuttttttttttttt Bahutttttttttttttttt Khoooooooooob!!


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«Reply #8 on: February 16, 2013, 08:28:54 AM »
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Masoom Pyaare Aadaab!



WallaaH kia kahne janab, bahut khoob bade hi gehre aur umdaa khayaaloN
ko khoob lafz diye hai aapne... Usual Smile

Sabhi ashaar Mashaa AllaaH behad umdaa rahe... Usual Smile
Isi fikr meiN likhte rahiye janab, aapki kalam meiN gazab ki dhaar hai..

Meri hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye.... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #9 on: February 16, 2013, 08:41:25 AM »
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Quote from: Masoom Shahzada on February 16, 2013, 05:10:26 AM

Choolhe me rotiyaaN jalii, kuch to baat hai.
Ghanto tak guftagu chalii, kuch to baat hai.  v.nice Thumbs UP
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SadiyoN se Laila Majnu kii kabre udaas thii.
Es saal kaliyaaN khilii, kuch to baat  hai.  Waah Waah
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MaiN thiik waqt par wahaaN se gujraa tha.
Wo raaste me na milii, kuch to baat hai.    (Kuch zaruri kaam hoga beta.. ) Thumbs UP
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Garibo ka thand se marna, chhotii si baat thii.
Chhotii baat barii chalii, kuch to baat hai.    Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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Ye ghar kal tak maidan-ae-jang tha.
Saas bahu galey milii, kuch to baat hai.  haha haan kuch to baat hai...


Tooooooooooooooo good beta. likhte raho. bahut ache likhte hai aap. Usual Smile
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«Reply #10 on: February 16, 2013, 08:53:00 AM »
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Quote from: Masoom Shahzada on February 16, 2013, 05:10:26 AM

Choolhe me rotiyaaN jalii, kuch to baat hai.
Ghanto tak guftagu chalii, kuch to baat hai.
.
SadiyoN se Laila Majnu kii kabre udaas thii.
Es saal kaliyaaN khilii, kuch to baat  hai. icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch
.
MaiN thiik waqt par wahaaN se gujraa tha.
Wo raaste me na milii, kuch to baat hai.
.
Garibo ka thand se marna, chhotii si baat thii.
Chhotii baat barii chalii, kuch to baat hai.
.
Ye ghar kal tak maidan-ae-jang tha.
Saas bahu galey milii, kuch to baat hai.



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«Reply #11 on: February 16, 2013, 09:32:59 AM »
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bht khoob Masoom dost
khoob ghazal kahi aapne
daad daad

( wese jis sher par Qalb sahab ne apna dimaag khujaya uss sher par mera dimaag bhi pareshaan h )

khus rahie
aate rahie
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«Reply #12 on: February 16, 2013, 09:38:25 AM »
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wah wah
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«Reply #13 on: February 16, 2013, 09:52:53 AM »
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masoom ji ,  bahut  khubsurat ghazal kahi hai .
roz  naye   naye   gul  khia  rahe   hain.
...Kuchh  to baat  hai.
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«Reply #14 on: February 16, 2013, 09:55:46 AM »
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बहुत खूब मासूम जी क्या बात है

Choolhe me rotiyaaN jalii, kuch to baat hai.
Ghanto tak guftagu chalii, kuch to baat hai.

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