Sadme se yun ubharne laga dil kamaal hai

by livingbytheday on December 18, 2012, 01:31:35 AM
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Sadme se yun ubharne laga dil kamaal hai
Kya jaane zindagi ki ab  yeh kaisi chaal hai

Jagne lagi hain dil mein umangey jawan jawan
Lagta hain ishq ne beechayaa  phir se  jaal hai

Karti nahi hain tang pareshaaniyaan mujhe
Mere paas aaj maa ki duaon ka dhaal hai

Kuch ho bhi jaata waqt pe jo keh diya hota
Unki nazar mein bhi yahi shayad malaal hai

Na soyenge woh raat saari fikr mein mere
Koi unse  jaake keh do mere theek haal hai

Soch ki safaayee se kirdaar bantaa hai
Har dil mein saath vikram ke rehta betaal hai

Waada nahi tha phir bhi chale aaye hain milne ko
Na jaane hasrato ka yeh kaisa maya jaal hai

Logo ki zimmedaari rahi humesha hi “Deepak”
Aandhi mein bhi jalaa kiya aksar mashaal hai
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«Reply #2 on: December 18, 2012, 03:59:05 AM »
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«Reply #3 on: December 18, 2012, 04:02:32 AM »
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«Reply #5 on: December 18, 2012, 06:09:27 AM »
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Bahut  khoob , Deepak ji . bahut  mubarakbaad . Hasan
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«Reply #6 on: December 18, 2012, 06:26:15 AM »
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Quote from: livingbytheday on December 18, 2012, 01:31:35 AM
Sadme se yun ubharne laga dil kamaal hai
Kya jaane zindagi ki ab  yeh kaisi chaal hai

Jagne lagi hain dil mein umangey jawan jawan
Lagta hain ishq ne beechayaa  phir se  jaal hai

Karti nahi hain tang pareshaaniyaan mujhe
Mere paas aaj maa ki duaon ka dhaal hai

Kuch ho bhi jaata waqt pe jo keh diya hota
Unki nazar mein bhi yahi shayad malaal hai

Na soyenge woh raat saari fikr mein mere
Koi unse  jaake keh do mere theek haal hai

Soch ki safaayee se kirdaar bantaa hai
Har dil mein saath vikram ke rehta betaal hai

Waada nahi tha phir bhi chale aaye hain milne ko
Na jaane hasrato ka yeh kaisa maya jaal hai

Logo ki zimmedaari rahi humesha hi “Deepak”
Aandhi mein bhi jalaa kiya aksar mashaal hai



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«Reply #7 on: December 18, 2012, 07:24:31 AM »
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Deepak Jee Aadaab!



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Quote from: livingbytheday on December 18, 2012, 01:31:35 AM


Jagne lagi hain dil mein umangey jawan jawan
Lagta hain ishq ne beechayaa  phir se  jaal hai

Karti nahi hain tang pareshaaniyaan mujhe
Mere paas aaj maa ki duaon ka dhaal hai

Kuch ho bhi jaata waqt pe jo keh diya hota
Unki nazar mein bhi yahi shayad malaal hai

Waada nahi tha phir bhi chale aaye hain milne ko
Na jaane hasrato ka yeh kaisa maya jaal hai
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acche ashaar farmaayen hai aapne deepak jee
is decent ghazal par meri mubaarakbaad qubool kareN
likhte rahiye..
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bhot khooob jnab waah Applause
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