safar........K_A

by khamosh_aawaaz on April 17, 2011, 10:36:18 AM
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                        tanhaai ko mehfil ka safar de aaya..!
                        lafzoan ko ghazal ka shahar de aaya..!!


                        poocha usne ki manzar kaisa thaa,
                        kahta kya use, apni nazar de aaya,


                        gilaa aaftaab ko chandni kabhi milti nahin,
                        ujaale ko tariki ki khabar de aaya,

        
                        dushmani na pahunche oorooj pe kabhi,
                        shamsheer ko mohabbat ka asar de aaya,


                        rahaa khushaq muddato.N sehra khamosh..!
                        bekhudi mein use bahr de aaya..!
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«Reply #1 on: April 17, 2011, 11:12:22 AM »
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it was just to see if the post is working or not,bcoz it was'nt earlier.
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«Reply #2 on: April 17, 2011, 11:27:02 AM »
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bht khoob khamosh ji...
sply 3rd one...
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«Reply #3 on: April 17, 2011, 11:34:12 AM »
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bahut bahut Khoob Khamosh Awaaz ji..

Bahut Hi khoobsurat Ghazal Pesh Ki hai Aapne

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«Reply #4 on: April 17, 2011, 03:19:41 PM »
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wah. Padhte waqt kho gaya shayeri me. Bhut achha likha hai aap ne
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«Reply #5 on: April 18, 2011, 08:05:56 AM »
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Quote from: Imdad on April 17, 2011, 03:19:41 PM
wah. Padhte waqt kho gaya shayeri me. Bhut achha likha hai aap ne

thanx
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«Reply #6 on: April 18, 2011, 08:16:23 AM »
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wah wah khamoshji.... bahut khub...

puchha usne ki manzar kaisa tha....
kahta kya usse apni nazar de aaya...

kya baat hai... khub...
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«Reply #7 on: April 23, 2011, 01:23:34 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: April 25, 2011, 07:53:53 AM »
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Ye tahreer bhi aapki bahut acerangez hai khmosh saheb, daad qubul kijiye.

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Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on April 17, 2011, 10:36:18 AM
             
                        tanhaai ko mehfil ka safar de aaya..!
                        lafzo.N ko ghazal ka shahar de aaya..!!


                        poocha usne ki manzar kaisa thaa,
                        kahta kya use, apni nazar de aaya,


                        gilaa aaftaab ko chandni kabhi milti nahin,
                        ujaale ko tariki ki khabar de aaya,

       
                        dushmani ooruj pe na pahunche kabhi,
                        shamsheer ko mohabbat ka asar de aaya,


                        rahaa khushaq muddato.N sehra khamosh..!
                        bekhudi mein use bahr de aaya..!
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«Reply #9 on: April 28, 2011, 06:32:18 AM »
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Quote from: manzil-e-ishq on April 17, 2011, 11:27:02 AM
bht khoob khamosh ji...
sply 3rd one...

THANX M.E.I
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«Reply #10 on: April 28, 2011, 09:16:56 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on April 17, 2011, 11:34:12 AM
bahut bahut Khoob Khamosh Awaaz ji..

Bahut Hi khoobsurat Ghazal Pesh Ki hai Aapne

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

thanx khawaish ji
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«Reply #11 on: May 02, 2011, 08:36:02 AM »
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Quote from: Shihab on April 28, 2011, 09:48:53 AM
Bahut Barhiya Khamosh Saheb
Sabhi Ashaar Khoob Rahe Janab
Is Khoobsurat Peshkash Pe Dili Dad

Shad o Aabad Rahiye...

~Shihab~



thanx shihab sb
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«Reply #12 on: May 11, 2011, 07:21:19 AM »
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Quote from: waquif ansari on April 25, 2011, 07:53:53 AM
Ye tahreer bhi aapki bahut acerangez hai khmosh saheb, daad qubul kijiye.

(waquif ansari)


THANKX WA
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«Reply #13 on: May 16, 2011, 10:36:51 AM »
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Quote from: adil bechain on April 23, 2011, 01:23:34 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause

thanx
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«Reply #14 on: May 22, 2011, 12:31:52 PM »
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Quote from: Shihab on April 28, 2011, 09:48:53 AM
Bahut Barhiya Khamosh Saheb
Sabhi Ashaar Khoob Rahe Janab
Is Khoobsurat Peshkash Pe Dili Dad

Shad o Aabad Rahiye...

~Shihab~



thanx shihab ji
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