SAHRA KO CHHOR WADI - E - AFGHAN AA GAYE .............HASAN

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Sahra   ko   chhoR , Waadi - e - Afghan  aa  gaye ,
Shaitan    dhoondhte ,  ka'ee  Shaitan   aa  gaye


Unko   qareeb   paaya   to  khulne  lagi   zubaaN ,
Dil  se  nikal ke   hontoN  pe  armaan   aa  gaye


Haq - goi   per  musir  ye  zubaaN   gung   ho  gayee ,
Hum  ko   jo   yaad   aap   ke   ehsaan   aa  gaye


Allah   mere !  Rakhna   meri   muflisi  ki  laaj ,
Mere   ghareeb - khaane   pe   mehmaan   aa  gaye


Aamad  pe   un ki   Bazm   meiN , kahne   laga  'Hasan' ,
Lagta   hai  meri   mout   ke   samaan   aa  gaye








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Haq goi = to speak truth  ; musir = insistent  ;  gung = dumb  ;
muflisi=Poverty
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«Reply #1 on: September 06, 2012, 05:05:04 PM »
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Allah mere! rakhna meri muflisi ki laaj
Mere ghareeb-khaane  pe mehmaan aa gaye

Ghazab ka she'r hai ye. Poori ghazal achhi hai, maza aa gaya padh ke. DheroN daad aur ek Rau meri taraf se.
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«Reply #2 on: September 06, 2012, 05:19:48 PM »
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Sahra   ko   chhoR , Waadi - e - Afghan  aa  gaye ,
Shaitan    dhoondhte ,  ka'ee  Shaitan   aa  gaye   Applause Applause Applause Applause
 

Unko   qareeb   paaya   to  khulne  lagi   zubaaN ,
Dil  se  nikal ke   hontoN  pe  armaan   aa  gaye  wah kya baat hai Sir

  
Haq - goi   per  musir  ye  zubaaN   gung   ho  gayee ,
Hum  ko   jo   yaad   aap   ke   ehsaan   aa  gaye    qurbaan..bahut umda khayaal hai Sir wah


Allah   mere !  Rakhna   meri   muflisi  ki  laaj ,
Mere   ghareeb - khaane   pe   mehmaan   aa  gaye  ye dard..kya kahun.. bahut kam log ise samajahte hai..


Aamad  pe   un ki   Bazm   meiN , kahne   laga  'Hasan' ,
Lagta   hai  meri   mout   ke   samaan   aa  gaye
Applause Applause Applause Applause Khuda aapko .. acchi sehat de..aap jaise shaksha le liye sacchi duaaon ki kamee naheen







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Haq goi = to speak truth  ; musir = insistent  ;  gung = dumb  ;
muflisi=Poverty
Bahut intjaar tha aapka.. aaapko dekhkar dil khush ho gayaa.
aate hi is khoobsurat ghazal se aagaaj..
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: September 06, 2012, 05:52:42 PM »
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wah wah wah... jitni bhi bar nikli kam hai.. Usual Smile

bahut bahut bahut khoob hasan bhai.. Usual Smile
Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: September 06, 2012, 07:46:34 PM »
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very very beautiful Siddiqui ji....sach me sachchai se rubaru, ek umda ghazal
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«Reply #5 on: September 07, 2012, 12:39:01 AM »
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very nice
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«Reply #6 on: September 07, 2012, 02:27:48 AM »
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aahha gazal kehna to koi aapse sikhe  just awesome.

aapko is khubsurat gazal ke liye lakhon daad

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«Reply #7 on: September 07, 2012, 03:15:13 AM »
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waah hasan sir bhut khub
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«Reply #8 on: September 07, 2012, 03:49:48 AM »
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Sahra   ko   chhoR , Waadi - e - Afghan  aa  gaye ,
Shaitan    dhoondhte ,  ka'ee  Shaitan   aa  gaye


Unko   qareeb   paaya   to  khulne  lagi   zubaaN ,
Dil  se  nikal ke   hontoN  pe  armaan   aa  gaye


Haq - goi   per  musir  ye  zubaaN   gung   ho  gayee ,
Hum  ko   jo   yaad   aap   ke   ehsaan   aa  gaye


Allah   mere !  Rakhna   meri   muflisi  ki  laaj ,
Mere   ghareeb - khaane   pe   mehmaan   aa  gaye


Aamad  pe   un ki   Bazm   meiN , kahne   laga  'Hasan' ,
Lagta   hai  meri   mout   ke   samaan   aa  gaye








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Haq goi = to speak truth  ; musir = insistent  ;  gung = dumb  ;
muflisi=Poverty
bohut khoob hasan sir, lajwab ,umda, aur zinda ghazal kahi hai,....mubarakbad qubool kijiye..
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«Reply #9 on: September 07, 2012, 04:21:54 AM »
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waah waah Hasan bhaai jaan waapse is shaan daar ghazal ke saath bahut bahut mubaarak aapkee kamee bahut khalee ab bazm kee raunak waaps aayee hai mere dheron salaam
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«Reply #10 on: September 07, 2012, 04:29:51 AM »
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Bahut umda bahut jaandaar gazal hasan sir welcome back.....sir Clapping SmileyClapping SmileyClapping SmileyClapping SmileyClapping SmileyClapping SmileyClapping SmileyClapping SmileyClapping Smiley
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«Reply #11 on: September 07, 2012, 08:54:41 AM »
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Siddiqui Sahaab As Salaam walekum!


Kia baat hai janab badi hi dilfareb kalaam kahi hai...
Gazab ke ashaaroN se gazal ko sajaaya hai... Usual Smile

Matle se lekar maqte tak sabhi ashaar khoob rahe...
Par yeH quoted Ashaar hume behad umdaa lage... Usual Smile

Humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye..
Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...

Shaad O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile






Haq - goi   per  musir  ye  zubaaN   gung   ho  gayee ,
Hum  ko   jo   yaad   aap   ke   ehsaan   aa  gaye


Allah   mere !  Rakhna   meri   muflisi  ki  laaj ,
Mere   ghareeb - khaane   pe   mehmaan   aa  gaye









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Haq goi = to speak truth  ; musir = insistent  ;  gung = dumb  ;
muflisi=Poverty
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«Reply #12 on: September 07, 2012, 11:32:56 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut bahut khoob Hasan ji....!!!
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«Reply #13 on: September 07, 2012, 01:30:37 PM »
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Sahra   ko   chhoR , Waadi - e - Afghan  aa  gaye ,
Shaitan    dhoondhte ,  ka'ee  Shaitan   aa  gaye


Unko   qareeb   paaya   to  khulne  lagi   zubaaN ,
Dil  se  nikal ke   hontoN  pe  armaan   aa  gaye


Haq - goi   per  musir  ye  zubaaN   gung   ho  gayee ,
Hum  ko   jo   yaad   aap   ke   ehsaan   aa  gaye


Allah   mere !  Rakhna   meri   muflisi  ki  laaj ,
Mere   ghareeb - khaane   pe   mehmaan   aa  gaye


Aamad  pe   un ki   Bazm   meiN , kahne   laga  'Hasan' ,
Lagta   hai  meri   mout   ke   samaan   aa  gaye








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Haq goi = to speak truth  ; musir = insistent  ;  gung = dumb  ;
muflisi=Poverty

waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah siddiqui sahab 3rd aur 4th sher khoob rahe Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #14 on: September 07, 2012, 03:59:58 PM »
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Iftakhar  saheb. hausla  afzai  ke  liye 
tah e dil  se  shukriya  aur  duaaein.
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