Saj saNwar ke.........................................................................IFTAKHAR

by Iftakhar Ahmad on February 23, 2013, 08:16:42 AM
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«Reply #15 on: February 23, 2013, 07:26:27 PM »
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Waaaah! kya baat hai iftakhar ji. bahut bahut mubarak aapko is lajawab peshkash ke liye. tareef ke liye alfaaz nahi.
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«Reply #16 on: February 23, 2013, 07:37:02 PM »
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Janab Iftakhar Sahab,

Waah waah bahut khoob kaha hai...maza aa gaya
padhkar....hamari jaanib se dili daad o mubaarakbaad
qubool farmaayen....

"Yaad  meiN  unke   jo  likh diya
 Bas   wahi   shaayari   ban  gai

Laajwaab....

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«Reply #17 on: February 23, 2013, 07:43:47 PM »
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«Reply #18 on: February 23, 2013, 09:14:50 PM »
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Bahut khub Iftakhar ji,Achhi Ghazal kahi hai aapne.
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«Reply #19 on: February 23, 2013, 09:40:29 PM »
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Ifteqaar Sahaab Aadaab!


Masha Allaah janab kia kahne... behad khoobsurat aur umdaa kalaam
kahi hai... chhoti bher meiN umdaa ashaar kahe hai aapne... kam
lafzoN meiN gehri baat rakhna bahut bada hunar hai... Usual Smile

Is khoob kalaam par humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul
Kijiye.... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye.. aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...


Khudaa Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #20 on: February 23, 2013, 11:51:25 PM »
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waah, iftakhar saheb , waah . tabiyat khush kar di aap ki is khubsurat ghazal ne . bahr mein kahi is ghazal ki jitni tareef ki jaaye kum hai. kal mujhe aapki hindi shabdon wali ghazal yaad aayi thhi , aaj is ghazal ne stunned sa kar diya . yaqeenan ye aap ka juda rang zaahir karti hai aur ye rang bahut haseen hai . khuda aap ke qalam ko mazeed zor ata kare .amin
Bahut bahut shukriya Hasan saheb. Ye aapko logoN ka ekhlaas hai aur aapki teaching hai jiski wajah se maiN itna likh paa raha huN. YuN hi sath banaye rakhiyega.
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«Reply #21 on: February 24, 2013, 01:42:18 AM »
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wah wah Iftikhar Saheb,
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      Choti baher me lajawaab ghazal kahi hai.....................
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«Reply #22 on: February 24, 2013, 05:38:08 PM »
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kya baat hai kya baat hai iftakhar bhai kamaal kardiya , har shair ghazal ka shair hai, aapki sabse khoobsurat ghazloN meN se ek ghzal hai, khas taur se ye ashar to gazab dha gaye ,


Aashiqi bandagee ban gai,

Zindagi itr si ban gai


Yaad meiN unke jo likh diya,

Bas wahi shaayari ban gai.


Saath tera mujhe mil gaya,

Aur bas zindagi ban gai.

Is shair ki sadgi aur maoomiyat ke liye meri taraf se apne hath choom lijiyega..


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ye taliyaN bhi kam haiN ..



Ishq meiN jo pada ‘Iftakhar’

Teergi raushani ban gai,


Aur haaN ye ishq ki roshni mubarak ho.

kauN he wo khushnaseeb zara humeN bhi ti pata Chale..


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Aarish bhai, bahut bahut shukriya itni taa'reef aur taaliyoN aur Rau ke liye. Bhai aapne to mere upar taaliyoN ki bauchaar kar di. Ye aapki mohabbat aur ekhlaas hai jis se mujhe likhne ka hausla milta hai. Bahut bahut shukriya.
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«Reply #23 on: February 24, 2013, 05:53:04 PM »
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bohut khub ahmed sahab bohut umda waahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Bahut bahut shukriya Sahil bhai taa'reef aur hausla afzaai ke liye.
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«Reply #24 on: February 24, 2013, 05:54:55 PM »
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Iam speechless really fantastic beautiful ek rau bhee qubool karen
Bahut bahut shukriya Saini Sir taa'reef aur Rau ke liye.
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«Reply #25 on: February 24, 2013, 08:17:37 PM »
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Aashiqi    bandagee    ban     gai
Zindagi     itr       si      ban      gai        *Itr: Khushboo
khusboo lagaa kar kyon gali gali maare phirte ho. kabhi ye atr kabhi wo atr. kabhi kabhi nahaa bhi liya karo.ashiqi mein decency aur safaai bhi zaruri haiicon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
Jaam  tera  hi  maiN   pee  raha
Ab    yahi     tishnagi    ban    gai        *Tishnagi: Pyaas
mere brand ki koi jaam nahin hai aur main kisi bhi sharaab ki brand ambbasdor nahin hoon icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
Naam    jo    dil    se    tera    liya
Bas   wahi    bandagi    ban   gai


haan ALLAH ka naam dil se pure yaqeen ke saath lena chahiye .good practice    Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP     *Bandagi: Ibaadat

Zulm   ki   uss   pe   had  ho  gai
JhaaNsi   ki   raani   si  ban   gai

haan ji kisi ko itna bhi suppress na karo ki wo phatt pade icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent
Tod  uss  ne  diye  baaNdh  sab
Ayk    behti     nadi      ban    gai
kisi ko na sataao warna anjaam bura hoga Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased
Pyaar  uss  ko  jo  phir  se  mila
BooNd phir  shabnami  ban  gai

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Saath  tera   mujhe   mil   gaya
Aur   bas     zindagi     ban    gai
kya baat hai. per ye zindagi banti kaise hai. whats the materials required Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
Sun ke  mere  khabar  aane  ki
Saj  saNwar   ke   pari  ban  gai
kahan hai pari jaipur mein ya aur kahin icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
Yaad  meiN  unke   jo  likh diya
Bas   wahi   shaayari   ban   gai

kya likha tha mujhe bhi sunaao ji icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
Dars  'Saini',  'Hasan'   de  rahe        *Dars: Lesson/Teaching
Ab   ghazal    saaz    si   ban gai


haan sahi traing perfection deti hai. per ye dono mere student rah chuke hain Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
Ishq  meiN  jo  pada  ‘Iftakhar’
Teergi     raushani     ban     gai  

badaa naya naya sa tajurba hai ji. electicity mein ishq mila do . raushni ki crisis nahin rahe gi Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard

      *Teergi: Andhera


ek dum kaajoo burfi.delicious...............!
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«Reply #26 on: February 26, 2013, 12:00:02 AM »
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Shukriya Qalb saheb.
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«Reply #27 on: February 26, 2013, 12:10:04 AM »
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Iftakhar bhai
wah wah..bahut khoob
Aarish bhai ke comments ke saath mai bhi khada hun..aur taaliya bajaane me unka saath de raha hun..
par ye sher..Javaab nahee.
Dars  'Saini',  'Hasan'   de  rahe        *Dars: Lesson/Teaching
Ab   ghazal    saaz    si   ban gai
Mera salaam in hastiyo ko..
bahut mubarak.

Bahut bahut shukriya Mukesh bhai iss qadar taa'reef aur hausla afzaai ke liye.
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«Reply #28 on: February 26, 2013, 12:15:48 AM »
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Aashiqi    bandagee    ban     gai
Zindagi     itr       si      ban      gai 
      *Itr: Khushboo

Jaam  tera  hi  maiN   pee  raha
Ab    yahi     tishnagi    ban    gai        *Tishnagi: Pyaas

Naam    jo    dil    se    tera    liya
Bas   wahi    bandagi    ban   gai
        *Bandagi: Ibaadat

Zulm   ki   uss   pe   had  ho  gai
JhaaNsi   ki   raani   si  ban   gai


Tod  uss  ne  diye  baaNdh  sab
Ayk    behti     nadi      ban    gai

Pyaar  uss  ko  jo  phir  se  mila
BooNd phir  shabnami  ban  gai

Saath  tera   mujhe   mil   gaya
Aur   bas     zindagi     ban    gai

Sun ke  mere  khabar  aane  ki
Saj  saNwar   ke   pari  ban  gai

Yaad  meiN  unke   jo  likh diya
Bas   wahi   shaayari   ban   gai


Dars  'Saini',  'Hasan'   de  rahe        *Dars: Lesson/Teaching
Ab   ghazal    saaz    si   ban gai

Ishq  meiN  jo  pada  ‘Iftakhar’
Teergi     raushani     ban     gai         *Teergi: Andhera


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Iftakhar jee... mere pass alfaz nahi tarif k liye. Jaise mkv jee ne kaha mai Aarish jee aur mkv jee k saath hu taliyan bajane mein. bahut bahut bahutttt daad.
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«Reply #29 on: February 27, 2013, 04:01:39 PM »
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lajawaab Ghazal Ahmad sahab
iss khubsurat ghazal par dil se daad aur mubarakbaad

sabhi sher behad umda rahe
ek alg sa hi aanand aaya ghazal padhkar

u r one of the best ghazal writer of this family
aate rahie
apni kalam ki khusbu bikherte rahie

be happy always
Usual Smile
Bahut bahut shukriya Subhash jee, aapne to bahut badi baat kah di.
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