Sambhalna Chaahe......!!!

by Talat on August 05, 2009, 11:56:00 AM
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«Reply #15 on: August 06, 2009, 05:09:58 PM »
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Talat,
very nice.....
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«Reply #16 on: August 06, 2009, 05:26:20 PM »
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bahaar abhi aayi nahin, pheeza bhi khili nahin
anjaan aur maasum kali phir bhi nikharna chahe

jahan raste khatam hote hai, wahaa koi hamara nahin
phir bhi yeh kadam us manzeel ki aur guzarna chahe!
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«Reply #17 on: August 07, 2009, 05:04:44 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on August 05, 2009, 11:56:00 AM

bahut achche di...yeh ghazal zindgi k har ootar chadaav aur insaani zindadili ko pradarshit karti hai.bahut achche di is tarah kii ghazal shayad aap hi likh sakte ho...


mujhe ghir k baadlon main khone kii chahat nahin
main toh ban k shabnam har raat baras jaana chahoon
mujhe qaid ho kar deewaron main ghutne kii chahat nahin
main toh azaaz maut k gale milna chahoon
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«Reply #18 on: August 07, 2009, 11:49:01 AM »
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Quote from: poppoetry on August 05, 2009, 02:06:56 PM
bahut hi pyare aur dil ko chune waale alfaaz likhe hai aapne Talat ji.
har alfaaz behtrin......har lafj....bahut accha lga padhkar.... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


Thanks so much Pooja dear..Thanks a lot for always reading and appreciating.
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Talat
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«Reply #19 on: August 07, 2009, 01:02:33 PM »
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Quote from: Sophi on August 05, 2009, 04:53:47 PM
Wow Talat di. Bahoot Bahoot Khubsoorat Ghazal hai .. bahoot hi Behtareen hamesha ki tarah Usual Smile

Thanks so much Divs for appreciating this work dear Usual Smile
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«Reply #20 on: August 07, 2009, 01:03:03 PM »
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Mashaallah ... Talat Ji .... Kya Khoob Likha hai.... Samay Ke Rehte Aur WAdde Ke Mutabiik..
Lijiye Kucch Arz Hai....
 


Ishq Kii Aag Mein Jalnaa Chaahe
Khuun AnkhooN Se Niklnaa Chaahe

Jisne Kiyaa Tha Waffaa Ka Ahad
Woh Apne Ahad Se Mukarna Chaahe

Zist Ke Pinjare Mein Qaid Parinda
Khulii Hawaa Mein Udhnaa Chaahe

Kab Se Safaid Kagaj Sa Ik Shaks
Ab Rang Apnaa Badlanaa Chaahe

Kal Thi Jisko Mere Naam Se Nafrat
Woh Aaj KadamoN Pe Bikharna Chaahe

Jisko Dekh Kar Jeeta Hai "HumTum"
Ussi Qaafir Par Marna Chaahe !!


HumTum
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Talat
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«Reply #21 on: August 07, 2009, 01:09:08 PM »
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Quote from: Mann on August 05, 2009, 05:07:53 PM
Talat Jiiiii.. Kamaal kar diya.. !! Behad Hi Khubsoorat Alfaazon se Saji Gazal Pesh Ki hai aapne.. Dil Ko Chhoo Gai aapki Yeh Gazal.. Bahut Bahut Khoooooooob.. Applause Applause


**~** Mann **~**

Thanks so much Vicky, iss khoobsurat taareef ke liye bohot bohot shukriya dear.... Thanks alot.
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Talat
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«Reply #22 on: August 07, 2009, 01:10:07 PM »
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Quote from: thegrimreaper on August 05, 2009, 05:22:28 PM
hamesha ki tarah masha-allah Applause
i especially liked the optimistic ending

Thanks so much Reaper Ji for always reading and apprecxiating my work. Tah-e-dil se shukriya aapka.
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Talat
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«Reply #23 on: August 07, 2009, 01:10:39 PM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on August 05, 2009, 06:24:24 PM
Really touching gazal Celmira ji,mindblowing creation. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
beautiful lines by Smardia ji. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Thanks so much my dear for always reading and apprexiating Usual Smile
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Talat
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«Reply #24 on: August 07, 2009, 01:13:17 PM »
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Quote from: cara on August 06, 2009, 10:51:58 AM
kya baat hai    celmira ji.....

JO KHAWAAB PURA HO NA SAKHE,WAHI HAR ROZ DEKHNA CHAAAHE,
NA JAANE KYUN AISE KHAWAAB, DIL BAAR BAAR DEKHNA CHAAHE.

MUJHKO KHABAR HAI,WOH KABHI BAN SAKHE GAA NAHIN MERA,
NA JAANE KYUN  FIR BHI YEH MERA MANN,USKE PEECHE CHALNA CHAAHE.

HAAR CHUKI HAI ZINDAGI,AB TOH USKE LIYE,
KYUN FIR DIL GUJREN HUE HAR PAL YAAD RAKHNA CHAAHE.

ZAMEEN PAR RAHEKAR,CHU TO SAKTI NAHIN HUN AB ASMAAN,
FIR BHI NA JAANE KYUN ,GHANTON BHAITKAR YEH DIL TAARE GINNA CHAAHE.

AB TOH AISA LAGTA HAI DIL KO MERE,
KI BAKI ZINDAGI, USKI YAAD MAIN HI GUJAARNA CHAAHE.


Thanks a lot Cara Ji for appreciating.....and a very nice creation from you as well... Bohot Khoob  icon_thumleft


Khwaab Ban Kar Haqiqat Aaye Meri Hayaat Main,
Us Ki Khusbuu Ho Basi Meri Ujdi Kainaat Main
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«Reply #25 on: August 07, 2009, 01:14:29 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on August 06, 2009, 04:41:18 PM
Bahut Bahut Bahut Khooob Talat dost!!!

Asaan Se Lafzo mein Aapne Zindagi ki Kuch Sachai Bayaan ki..

Bahut Gehre Jazbaat Pesh kiye hai Aapne..

bahut Ache Dost!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bohot shukriya Dost Khwaish, aapne ise samjha..bas aur kya chahiye...Thanks so much for always reading and encouraging with your beautiful words....Bohot bohot shukriya Dosrt.
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«Reply #26 on: August 07, 2009, 01:16:04 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on August 06, 2009, 04:43:50 PM
Good work Celmira and Cara ji!!!! bahoot acha likh ahai app dono ne.....

Celmira rythem of your poem.. kamaal ek ek shabd dil ko chuta hua.... Good creation!!

Thanks so much Pooja for reading and appreciating this work  notworthy
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Talat
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«Reply #27 on: August 07, 2009, 01:16:57 PM »
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Quote from: Bharat on August 06, 2009, 05:09:58 PM
Talat,
very nice.....

Thanks a lot Bharat  Usual Smile
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«Reply #28 on: August 07, 2009, 01:21:36 PM »
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Quote from: Bharat on August 06, 2009, 05:26:20 PM
bahaar abhi aayi nahin, pheeza bhi khili nahin
anjaan aur maasum kali phir bhi nikharna chahe

jahan raste khatam hote hai, wahaa koi hamara nahin
phir bhi yeh kadam us manzeel ki aur guzarna chahe!

Waah bohot khoob Bharat..it is always good to see you posting something (poetry), which has become a rare treat for Yoindia. I hope you will continue writing  drunken_smilie


Dastoor-e-Chaman Ki Khabar Nahin Hai Us Maasoom Ko,
Kali Ka Shauq Bhi Dekho, Khizaan Main Mehekna Chaahe

Manzil Hai Bohot Door, Aur Hausla Bhi Toota Hai,
Hai Ishq Ka Junoon Lekin, Ki Qadam Na Rukna Chaahe !!
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Talat
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«Reply #29 on: August 07, 2009, 01:28:06 PM »
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Quote from: -Saahil- on August 07, 2009, 05:04:44 AM
bahut achche di...yeh ghazal zindgi k har ootar chadaav aur insaani zindadili ko pradarshit karti hai.bahut achche di is tarah kii ghazal shayad aap hi likh sakte ho...


mujhe ghir k baadlon main khone kii chahat nahin
main toh ban k shabnam har raat baras jaana chahoon
mujhe qaid ho kar deewaron main ghutne kii chahat nahin
main toh azaaz maut k gale milna chahoon

Thanks a lot Salil for these words for me  icon_flower

Aur bohot hi khoob likha hai aapne  icon_thumleft



Chandni Baadalon Se Ghir Kar Bhi Nahin Chupti,
Har Shai Ko Wo Apne Hi Rang Main Rangna Chaahe,

Zindagi Kuch Is Tarah Haari Hai Apni Saanson Se,
Bujha Ke Har Chiaargh Wo Maut Se Milna Chaahe
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