Samunder-e-Ashq......"Sahal".

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            Samunder-e-Ashq......"Sahal".

Jab kabhi apni aankhon ke ander dekha,
Zabt  ashkon ka aik samunder dekha.

Alam ye aisa aaj kal se nahi haiN,
Barson se maine yahi manzer dekha.

talashte hain log hatheliyon mein taqdeer,
Maine haathon se bigadta muqadder dekha.

Sukhi hui daali,bikhre hue patte har taraf,
Baagh mein maine rota hua shajer dekha.

Dard se aah ker palatker jo dekha “Sahal”,
Apno ki haathon ghopa hua khanjer dekha.
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«Reply #1 on: August 17, 2013, 04:50:53 PM »
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uuuuuuuuffff kyaa kehne aapke janaab, jaan hi le li aapne, bahut bahut khoobsurat ehsaas aur utni hi khoobsurat bayaani, ek dum zabardasssttt, bahut bahut khoob likhaa hai aapne Sahal ji, mazaa aa gayaa padh ke....!!!
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«Reply #2 on: August 17, 2013, 05:03:34 PM »
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bahut khoob sahal bhai.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: August 17, 2013, 05:42:00 PM »
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uuuuuuuuffff kyaa kehne aapke janaab, jaan hi le li aapne, bahut bahut khoobsurat ehsaas aur utni hi khoobsurat bayaani, ek dum zabardasssttt, bahut bahut khoob likhaa hai aapne Sahal ji, mazaa aa gayaa padh ke....!!!

bohut bohut shukriya "Hriday" ji,,bohut khushi hui ke apne waqt deker padha aur pasand kiya ...
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«Reply #4 on: August 17, 2013, 05:43:05 PM »
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Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

bahut khoob sahal bhai.. Usual Smile

Thankyou ! touhid bhai.
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«Reply #5 on: August 17, 2013, 06:26:01 PM »
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wah wah Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: August 17, 2013, 06:27:08 PM »
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wah wah Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Thankyou ! nand ji
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«Reply #7 on: August 17, 2013, 06:45:34 PM »
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waah bohat khoob,..............bohat c daad,...........
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«Reply #8 on: August 17, 2013, 07:04:18 PM »
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Sahal Sahaab Aadaab...!


WaaH janab kia kahne waaH bahut khoob janab bahut khoob... aaj laga ke Sahal sahaab bhi shayri karte haiN ... kafi khoobsurat aur umdaa khayaalaat ko gehre ashaaroN meiN bayaaN kiya hai aapne...

Behad khoob kalaam huyi hai janab...
Is umdaa kalaam par humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile




talashte hain log hatheliyon mein taqdeer,
Maine haathon se bigadta muqadder dekha.

Sukhi hui daali,bikhre hue patte har taraf,
Baagh mein maine rota hua shajer dekha.


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«Reply #9 on: August 17, 2013, 07:07:00 PM »
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«Reply #10 on: August 17, 2013, 07:07:28 PM »
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Very Beautiful Sahal ji... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: August 17, 2013, 07:56:21 PM »
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Sahal Sahaab Aadaab...!


WaaH janab kia kahne waaH bahut khoob janab bahut khoob... aaj laga ke Sahal sahaab bhi shayri karte haiN ... kafi khoobsurat aur umdaa khayaalaat ko gehre ashaaroN meiN bayaaN kiya hai aapne...

Behad khoob kalaam huyi hai janab...
Is umdaa kalaam par humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbbyarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile


Bohut bohut shurkiya parwaaz sahab
Bohut hi mashkoor hun apka jo apne padha pasand kiya.

Nawazish.
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«Reply #12 on: August 17, 2013, 08:42:31 PM »
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Allah khaer kare...
bahot hi khooob, bahot hi badhya, sirf waaaaah waaaah aur waaah
Applause Clapping Smiley ApplauseApplause Clapping Smiley Applause
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«Reply #13 on: August 17, 2013, 08:46:48 PM »
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            Samunder-e-Ashq......"Sahal".

Jab kabhi apni aankhon ke ander dekha,
Zabt  ashkon ka aik samunder dekha.

Bahut khooooooooooob.. Applause Applause

Alam ye aisa aaj kal se nahi haiN,
Barson se maine yahi manzer dekha.

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

talashte hain log hatheliyon mein taqdeer,
Maine haathon se bigadta muqadder dekha.

Waaaaaaaaaaah sahal kya kehne is sher ke.
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Sukhi hui daali,bikhre hue patte har taraf,
Baagh mein maine rota hua shajer dekha.

superbbbbbbbbbbbb.....
 Applause Applause Applause Applause

Dard se aah ker palatker jo dekha “Sahal”,
Apno ki haathon ghopa hua khanjer dekha.

waah waah waah......
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause


waah waah waah sahal kya baat hai bahut hi umda peshkash... bahut hi gehre khayal se saji hui tumhare is kalaam ko dheron dheron dheron daaaaaaaaaad...
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«Reply #14 on: August 18, 2013, 02:07:20 AM »
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wha wha bhut khub
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