~~"Sar-Ba-Sar Tere Jaisi"~~by Shally.

by k.shael on September 09, 2009, 09:11:24 AM
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Khuda jane kaise zabt karti ho hazaar ehsaso.n ko,
Yahan to ek mohabbat ki chahat jaan le leti hai..

Jab se chod gaya hai mujhko tanha-besahara karke,
Bass ek murda laash hai mujhme jo saans leti hai..

Chah kar bhi kabhi na lipat kar ro saki tujhse magar,
Teri har yaad aa aa kar mujhse lipat ke ro leti hai,

Kya khoob hai hamari dushmani dekho to zara yaaro.n,
Mein chirago.n pe aur hawa mujhpe nazar rakhti hai,

Kya maloom ki kya khoya kya paaya maine Shally,
Haan lekin aab zindagi me se zindagi kam lagti hai..

Shally.
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«Reply #1 on: September 09, 2009, 09:20:30 AM »
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Mashallah Bohat Achchi Ghazal Hai Shally,.

YUnhi Likhte Raho,.
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«Reply #2 on: September 09, 2009, 09:36:54 AM »
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Haule Haule Andheron Ki Adat Daal Li Maine,.
Aadhi Zindagi, Tanhaayiyon Mein Hi Nikaal Li Maine,.
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«Reply #3 on: September 09, 2009, 10:26:57 AM »
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Shukriya Aur Bahut Khoob Azeem Ji..

Jaane kya gustakhi ki hogi maine ki,
Tumse mohabbat ho jaane ki saja paayi maine..

Shally.
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«Reply #4 on: September 09, 2009, 10:31:09 AM »
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Quote from: k.shael on September 09, 2009, 10:26:57 AM
Shukriya Aur Bahut Khoob Azeem Ji..

Jaane kya gustakhi ki hogi maine ki,
Tumse mohabbat ho jaane ki saja paayi maine..

Shally.



Dard Dekar Mujhe, Apne Dard Ka Bayaan Karte Hain,.
Kaise Hain Log Yahaan Ke,
 Zakhmi Seena Karke, Halki Si Kharoch Se Darte Hain,.
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«Reply #5 on: September 09, 2009, 10:32:59 AM »
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Very Nice Azeem,

Logon ko aadat hai Azeem gamm dekar muskuraane ki,
Par jaan le duniya hamne bhi seekh li adaa gamm me muskurane ki..

Shally.
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«Reply #6 on: September 09, 2009, 10:37:10 AM »
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Very Nice Azeem,

Logon ko aadat hai Azeem gamm dekar muskuraane ki,
Par jaan le duniya hamne bhi seekh li adaa gamm me muskurane ki..

Shally.



Tu Kitna Bhi Muskuraale "Shally,.
Teri Muskuraahat Se Main Wakheef Hoon,.
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«Reply #7 on: September 09, 2009, 11:03:57 AM »
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Suna tha log aankhon me udaasi rakhte hai,
Maine to Azeem tere hothon pe udaasi ka gehra libaas
dekha hai..

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«Reply #8 on: September 09, 2009, 04:04:33 PM »
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Waah...Bohot Khoob Shally dear Applause Applause Applause

Bohot Khoob Azeem
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«Reply #9 on: September 09, 2009, 04:22:12 PM »
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Suna tha log aankhon me udaasi rakhte hai,
Maine to Azeem tere hothon pe udaasi ka gehra libaas
dekha hai..

Shally.

NIce Liens Yaar,.

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Waah...Bohot Khoob Shally dear Applause Applause Applause

Bohot Khoob Azeem

Shukriya talat Ji,/.
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«Reply #10 on: September 09, 2009, 04:31:20 PM »
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Good work shally and Azeem!!
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«Reply #11 on: September 09, 2009, 09:23:28 PM »
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Wah wah bahut khoob Shally ji and Azeem bhai beautiful gazal.mindblowing creation.excellent Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #12 on: September 09, 2009, 10:34:08 PM »
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bahoth qoob !!


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«Reply #13 on: September 09, 2009, 10:50:27 PM »
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verry gud shally ji n azeem ji...
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«Reply #14 on: September 10, 2009, 06:50:03 AM »
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Shukriya,.
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