Sard Raaton Men Bhi Kaanpte Kaanpte / सर्द रातों में भी काँपते काँपते......Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'

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सर्द रातों में भी काँपते काँपते
मुफ़लिसी चल पड़ी हाँफते हाँफते

चार पैसों की ख़ातिर वह बीमार माँ
जा रही है कहाँ खाँसते खाँसते ?

खा के दिन में भी सोयें, तो काटें कई
रात भी भूक से जागते जागते

सूद के बदले जबरन मवेशी ही वह
डाँटकर, ले गया हाँकते हाँकते

खाइयाँ नफ़रतों की बढ़ीं इस क़दर
मुद्दतें लग गयीं पाटते पाटते

फ़लसफ़ा ज़िंदगी का बयाँ कर गया
एक दर्ज़ी बटन टाँकते टाँकते

नाफ़ में जिसकी केसर हो आहू 'रक़ीब'
थक गया है बहुत ढूँढते ढूँढते

Sard raaton men bhi kaanpte kaanpte
Muflisi chal padi haanfte haanfte

Chaar paison ki khatir woh beemaar maan
Jaa rahi hai kahaan khaanste khaanste ?

Khaa ke din men bhi soyen, to kaanten kayee
Raat bhi bhook se jaagte jaagte

Sood ke badle jabran maveshee hi woh
Daantkar, le gaya haankte haankte

Khaaiyaan nafraton ki badheen is qadar
Muddaten lag gayeen paatatey paatatey

Falsafa zindagi ka bayaan kar gaya
Ek darzee batan taankte taankte

Naaf men jiski kesar ho aahoo ‘Raqeeb’
Thak gaya hai bahut dhoondhte dhoondte

---Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
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«Reply #1 on: May 29, 2015, 07:11:28 AM »
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Quote from: Satish Shukla on May 29, 2015, 06:37:20 AM
सर्द रातों में भी काँपते काँपते
मुफ़लिसी चल पड़ी हाँफते हाँफते

चार पैसों की ख़ातिर वह बीमार माँ
जा रही है कहाँ खाँसते खाँसते ?

खा के दिन में भी सोयें, तो काटें कई
रात भी भूक से जागते जागते

सूद के बदले जबरन मवेशी ही वह
डाँटकर, ले गया हाँकते हाँकते

खाइयाँ नफ़रतों की बढ़ीं इस क़दर
मुद्दतें लग गयीं पाटते पाटते

फ़लसफ़ा ज़िंदगी का बयाँ कर गया
एक दर्ज़ी बटन टाँकते टाँकते

नाफ़ में जिसकी केसर हो आहू 'रक़ीब'
थक गया है बहुत ढूँढते ढूँढते

Sard raaton men bhi kaanpte kaanpte
Muflisi chal padi haanfte haanfte

Chaar paison ki khatir woh beemaar maan
Jaa rahi hai kahaan khaanste khaanste ?

Khaa ke din men bhi soyen, to kaanten kayee
Raat bhi bhook se jaagte jaagte

Sood ke badle jabran maveshee hi woh
Daantkar, le gaya haankte haankte

Khaaiyaan nafraton ki badheen is qadar
Muddaten lag gayeen paatatey paatatey

Falsafa zindagi ka bayaan kar gaya
Ek darzee batan taankte taankte

Naaf men jiski kesar ho aahoo ‘Raqeeb’
Thak gaya hai bahut dhoondhte dhoondte

---Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'




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«Reply #2 on: May 29, 2015, 07:41:29 AM »
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«Reply #3 on: May 29, 2015, 10:47:04 AM »
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«Reply #4 on: May 29, 2015, 01:45:03 PM »
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Quote from: Satish Shukla on May 29, 2015, 06:37:20 AM
सर्द रातों में भी काँपते काँपते
मुफ़लिसी चल पड़ी हाँफते हाँफते

चार पैसों की ख़ातिर वह बीमार माँ
जा रही है कहाँ खाँसते खाँसते ?

खा के दिन में भी सोयें, तो काटें कई
रात भी भूक से जागते जागते

सूद के बदले जबरन मवेशी ही वह
डाँटकर, ले गया हाँकते हाँकते

खाइयाँ नफ़रतों की बढ़ीं इस क़दर
मुद्दतें लग गयीं पाटते पाटते

फ़लसफ़ा ज़िंदगी का बयाँ कर गया
एक दर्ज़ी बटन टाँकते टाँकते

नाफ़ में जिसकी केसर हो आहू 'रक़ीब'
थक गया है बहुत ढूँढते ढूँढते

Sard raaton men bhi kaanpte kaanpte
Muflisi chal padi haanfte haanfte

Chaar paison ki khatir woh beemaar maan
Jaa rahi hai kahaan khaanste khaanste ?

Khaa ke din men bhi soyen, to kaanten kayee
Raat bhi bhook se jaagte jaagte

Sood ke badle jabran maveshee hi woh
Daantkar, le gaya haankte haankte

Khaaiyaan nafraton ki badheen is qadar
Muddaten lag gayeen paatatey paatatey

Falsafa zindagi ka bayaan kar gaya
Ek darzee batan taankte taankte

Naaf men jiski kesar ho aahoo ‘Raqeeb’
Thak gaya hai bahut dhoondhte dhoondte

---Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'



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Wah Kya Baat Hai Satish Ji.. Maza Aa gaya Aapki Likhi Yeh Ghazal padh Ke.. Umda Peshkash.. Applause Applause


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Nazre inaayat aur hausala afzai ka bahut shukriya....Raqeeb
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श्री सतीश शुक्ला जी बहुत ही बेहतरीन गजल है ढेरो दाद कबूल करे | दूसरा स्टेंजा बहुत ही गजब का था दिल को छु गया  Applause Applause Applause icon_salut icon_salut


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Very nice.

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Quote from: vinery on May 29, 2015, 10:47:04 AM
Very nice.

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