Sard Raaton Men Bhi Kaanpte Kaanpte / सर्द रातों में भी काँपते काँपते......Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'

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«Reply #15 on: June 01, 2015, 05:02:31 AM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on May 29, 2015, 01:57:34 PM
excellent daad daad daad daad daad

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«Reply #16 on: June 01, 2015, 09:56:15 AM »
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Quote from: Mann on May 29, 2015, 02:15:23 PM
Wah Kya Baat Hai Satish Ji.. Maza Aa gaya Aapki Likhi Yeh Ghazal padh Ke.. Umda Peshkash.. Applause Applause


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«Reply #17 on: June 01, 2015, 10:20:42 AM »
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lajawaab aur behtareen satish sahab behad khoob.. Usual Smile Usual Smile

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«Reply #18 on: June 01, 2015, 01:10:13 PM »
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bahut hee umdah Raqeeb Sahib, dheroooooooN daad.
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«Reply #19 on: June 01, 2015, 01:11:00 PM »
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वाह....वाह....वाह....

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«Reply #20 on: June 02, 2015, 05:44:51 AM »
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Quote from: Ram Krishan Rastogi on May 29, 2015, 07:41:29 AM
श्री सतीश शुक्ला जी बहुत ही बेहतरीन गजल है ढेरो दाद कबूल करे | दूसरा स्टेंजा बहुत ही गजब का था दिल को छु गया  Applause Applause Applause icon_salut icon_salut


Bahut bahut shukriya......Raqeeb
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«Reply #21 on: June 05, 2015, 12:44:55 PM »
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Quote from: Satish Shukla on May 29, 2015, 06:37:20 AM
सर्द रातों में भी काँपते काँपते
मुफ़लिसी चल पड़ी हाँफते हाँफते

चार पैसों की ख़ातिर वह बीमार माँ
जा रही है कहाँ खाँसते खाँसते ?

खा के दिन में भी सोयें, तो काटें कई
रात भी भूक से जागते जागते

सूद के बदले जबरन मवेशी ही वह
डाँटकर, ले गया हाँकते हाँकते

खाइयाँ नफ़रतों की बढ़ीं इस क़दर
मुद्दतें लग गयीं पाटते पाटते

फ़लसफ़ा ज़िंदगी का बयाँ कर गया
एक दर्ज़ी बटन टाँकते टाँकते

नाफ़ में जिसकी केसर हो आहू 'रक़ीब'
थक गया है बहुत ढूँढते ढूँढते

Sard raaton men bhi kaanpte kaanpte
Muflisi chal padi haanfte haanfte

kyaa baat hai ye majboori ye zaroorat ALLAH raham kare bahut khoobsoorat dard bhara matlaa tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed!

Chaar paison ki khatir woh beemaar maan
Jaa rahi hai kahaan khaanste khaanste ?

maa ka muqaablaa bhalaa kaun saa rishta is zamee.n pe kare gaa Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP!

Khaa ke din men bhi soyen, to kaanten kayee
Raat bhi bhook se jaagte jaagte

ahaa kyaa ghareebi ki tasweer khinchi hai  tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed!

Sood ke badle jabran maveshee hi woh
Daantkar, le gaya haankte haankte

waah waah ye to insaao.n ke beech shaitaano.n mein se ek kaa misaal bakhoobi pesh kiyaa hai kyaa kkahne ji tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed!

Khaaiyaan nafraton ki badheen is qadar
Muddaten lag gayeen paatatey paatatey

ke....lamho.n ne khataa ki sadiyao.n ne sazaa paayi icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!

Falsafa zindagi ka bayaan kar gaya
Ek darzee batan taankte taankte

kyaa baat hai waah waah kyaa daanishwari nazar hai bahut khuch kah gayaa ye sher is pe to mazeed bahut nazariyaat waaze ho sakte hai badaa wasi sher hai ye Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley!

Naaf men jiski kesar ho aahoo ‘Raqeeb’
Thak gaya hai bahut dhoondhte dhoondte

haan ji ghazaali ka haal yehi to hai  icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!

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waah waah waah satish sahab is pe main rau naa doo.n to meraa yahaan aanaa bekaar hai icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!


aisi sanjidaa aur maanekhez ghazal kahaan padhne ko mil rahi hai YOINDIA pe
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«Reply #22 on: June 06, 2015, 04:57:29 AM »
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waah waah waah satish sahab is pe main rau naa doo.n to meraa yahaan aanaa bekaar hai icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!


aisi sanjidaa aur maanekhez ghazal kahaan padhne ko mil rahi hai YOINDIA pe


Nazre inaayat aur hausala afzai kabahut shukriya Sheba Ji.... aapka comment kuchh aur achchha kahney ki prerna deta hai...bhavishya men bhi isee tarah utprerak ki bhoomika ada karte rahen hamari guzarish hai.....Raqeeb Lucknowi
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«Reply #23 on: June 08, 2015, 05:20:49 AM »
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Wah bahut khoob.
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«Reply #24 on: June 08, 2015, 06:22:45 AM »
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Quote from: SARVESH RASTOGI on June 08, 2015, 05:20:49 AM
Wah bahut khoob.
SARVESH RASTOGI

Bahut bahut shukriya.... nazre inaayat ka Sarvesh Rastogi..... Raqeeb
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«Reply #25 on: June 08, 2015, 07:01:24 AM »
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Behtreen peshkash dheroooo daaadddd but rau due
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«Reply #26 on: June 08, 2015, 08:20:12 AM »
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Quote from: jeet jainam on June 08, 2015, 07:01:24 AM
Behtreen peshkash dheroooo daaadddd but rau due

Nazre inayat aur hausala afzai ka bahut  shukriya ..... jeet jainam ji ..... Raqeeb
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«Reply #27 on: June 09, 2015, 10:49:39 AM »
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फ़लसफ़ा ज़िंदगी का बयाँ कर गया
एक दर्ज़ी बटन टाँकते टाँकते
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«Reply #28 on: June 11, 2015, 05:11:28 AM »
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Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on June 09, 2015, 10:49:39 AM
फ़लसफ़ा ज़िंदगी का बयाँ कर गया
एक दर्ज़ी बटन टाँकते टाँकते
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bahut khoob

Bahut bahut shukriya Saru Ji ..... aapne jo she'r bahut pasand kiya hai.... bahut logon ne apni tarah ka bilkul alag she'r kaha
aur bahut pasand kiya ... aur aap jaise jauhari ki nazar bhi waheen ruki... haardik aabhar.....Raqeeb Lucknowi
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