seekhna-sikhaana.. (by vb)

buhat shukriya aap ka..

Janab! abhi tak k comments k tabadlay say hum yehi nateeja nikaal sakay hen, k aap k ehsaasaat hamaray comments k muhtaaj nahi.. yaani aap kuch bhe, kabhi bhe mehsoos kar saktay hen... aur raaqim-ul-haroof ko is par koi qudrat nahi...



hum samajhtay hen k shayari seekhnay k tamam khawahish-mandon ko is men dil-chaspi honi chahiyay...




buhat shukriya aap ne book suggest ki.. is book ko samajhna nisbatan mushkil hay.... is gharaz say hum ne isay 7th number pr study karnay k liyay rakha hay.. baaki 6 books kuch aasaan andaaz men baat karti hen...


is par hum zyada baat nahi karen gay ku k ye misra zer-e-behes nahi..... ilawa azeeN ake naya silsila chal niklay ga... jo munasib maaloom nahi ho raha... haan ye zaroor kahen gay... k is ki taqtee aap ne ba-shamool-e-saakinaat he kar di hay... may be aap ne aisa hamari samajh k liyay kiya ho... lekin agar aisa nahi.. tu hamaray ilm men izaafa hua k taqtee ka ye tareeqa bhe kahin murrawaj hay...




yahan aap ne usi misray ki taqtee different tareekay say kar di hay... jisay pehlay aap aur tarah kar chukay hen... lekin aap k ilm k havalay say hamen yaqeen hay k ye faqat chhoti say ghalti hay jo kisi say bhe ho sakti hay...  mazeed nahi kahen gay kuchh k ye bhe hamaray subject ka hisaa nahi..




yahan aa kar baat nikalti hay... k aakhir kaar aap ne ye tu wazeh kiya k aap ko kahan ghalat mehsoos ho raha hay... yehi aap ko buhat shuru men he kar jana chahiyay tha... hum aap k nuqtay ko ab samjhay hen.. sahi kaha hay aap ne... k is men problem hay... jisay hum ne is liyay khaatir men nahi rakha k Meer-o-Ghalib ka muqaabla karnay say tu hum rahay... lekin hamarai na-qas aqal k mutabiq hamara mudd'aa kuchh aisay hay...




sub say pehlay prolem...

cho-R-do      in-ko-na     sihat-ka-na
FAA-E-LUN     FA-E-LUN     MAFA-EE-LUN

(is men "cho-R-do" or "in-ko-na" hum-wazan ho gayay hen... aur "seehat-ka-na" agarch hamaray hisaab say qaabil-e-qabool hay lekin "eehat-ka-na" shayad zyada durust)

is misray ko pehlay kuchh is tarah parh kar dekhen... shayad kuch tarteeb mehsoos ho..

chore do in ko nseehat karna (naseehat k noon ki zabar hazaf hay)



ab Meer ki example ka ye misra... "main jo bola, kaha k ye aawaaz" saakinaat hazaf kar k

may-jo-bo     la-k-ha      k'ye-aa-waz 
FAA-E-LUN     FA-E-LUN     MAFA-EE-LUN
(is men agar Meer sahab hamari tarah "la-ka-ha" kehtay tu "may-jo-bo" k baraber ho jata.. so "la-k-ha" ka zaber hazaf hay)


ab aap ka jaana pehchana misra... beher or sahi...

tere teer e nazar ka maara jaan se kion na jaye?

(yahan aap aakhir men, "jaye" men hamza k saath pooray ake harf "ya" ko sahi samajhtay hen... is ka matlab ye nahi k hum isay ghalat samajhtay hen.. aap hamaray comments wahan parh saktay hen... sirf misaal dena maqsad hay...)



so janab ghalati waqai sher men maujood hay is zabar ko saakin karnay par dar-guzar farmaain...


hamen jitni samajh hay wo itni he hay, agar ab bhe is men hum kuchh ghalti ya mukamaal taur par ghalat keh rahay hen tu bhe maazoor hen k mazeed kuchh keh saken... ku k is say barh kar hamaari samajh/ilm nahi...


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agar is ghazal ka mazmoon dekhen tu aap jaan len gay k ye ghazal wohi kehna chaah rahi hay... jo in comments k tabadlay ki waja say yahan hua hay... ye ghazal yahan saboot k saath rahay gee.. ye achhi baat hay... likhi is liyay thi... k hamen pehlay bhe kuchh tajurbay yahan huay...

guzaarish karen gay.. k aap ghazals par tabsira kartay waqt, sirf ashaar k giray honay ka certificate na day jaya karen.. balkay.. thora sa define kar jaya karen.. taakay hamaari or logon ki tas'hee ho sakay..

maazrat k saath... aap ka buhat waqt liya...


dua-go
vb

janaab!

wesay tu hum aap ki baat par bhe aetibaar karnay k liyay tayaar hen k mashallah hum say buhat behter hen aap... lekin sirf is liyay k shaayad un say bhe kuchh seekhnay ko milay.. hamen koi aetraaz nahi...

agar unhen manzoor ho tu un ki meherbani ho ge.. or hum apni taraf say unhen yaqeen dilaatay hen... k agar hum (yani vb jee) ghalat hoay tu hum is ko dil par na len gay... aur hamaray dil men un ki jitni izzat or qadr-o-manzilat hay us men koi faraq nahi ayay ga...

Mohtaram ,izzatafzai k loye shukriya.muazrat chahunga.awwal to mera desktop aaj kharab hai,tafseeli jawab tab se nahi se sakta. Doosre ye ki do alimon aur hard headed logon me darmyan mujh adna ka umpire Honda WWF k  umpire jaisa hai .behtar hai k. ' tum apna munh idhar kar lo,WO apna munh udhar kar le'.ya shayed saini sb  aap dono ko barabar se mutmain kar  sake in.

Aap ka buhat shukriya k tashreef layay... Hum aap k mashvaray ko danish-mandana kahan gay... Maazrat bhe  chahtay hen k invitation dena hamen sahi nahi laga...

vb bhai, aapki batona ne hamein rula kar rakh diya...hum ne tu sirf aik ghalati kee nishandahi kee thee ....koi kisi se bhi muqabila karne ka kabhi soch bhi nahi sakte,,aur aap kee shairy tu bakhuda bahut achi he ....issi tarah FH Siddiqui sahib bhi shair o sukhan ke maahir hein...hum aapki aur unki dono kee bahut izzat karte hein laikin rayay dena koi buri baat bhi tu nahi. Agar aap kahein ge tu hum ainda aapki nigarishaat per apna moonh bund rakhein gay..
Asp ne dekha ho ga ke hum ne janab FH Siddiqui sahib kee bhi aik ghazal per apni rayay dee thee...maqsad seekhna sikhane he....
hum bhi talib e ilm hein aur saari umr bhi seekhein tu ilm ka darya par nahi kar saktay. AApko hamari koi baat buri lagi ho tu muafi chahta hoon....
Enjoy this song on Utube...
Lo jee hum haray pia
 Hui teri  jeet ray!
Kahay ka jhagra baalam
teri meri preet ray!!
(lyrics of an old song?? don't remember the name of the movie, though.)

Sab ke lab per tera fasana he
Her soo bajta tera tarana he

vb naHaq hua he hum se khafa
Hato! mein ne usse manana he!!

khush raho, ay dost!!