Shaamiyaane Men Hain / शामियाने में हैं.....Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'

by Satish Shukla on December 28, 2013, 06:39:31 PM
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«Reply #15 on: December 30, 2013, 01:21:20 AM »
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Quote from: Satish Shukla on December 28, 2013, 06:39:31 PM
फिर से शहनाइयाँ शामियाने में हैं
दो बड़ी कुर्सियाँ शामियाने में हैं

जब, जहाँ चाहिये, बस लगा लीजिये
अनगिनत ख़ूबियाँ शामियाने में हैं

साथ सखियों के मिलकर सताती हैं जो
चुलबुली भाभियाँ शामियाने में हैं

सालियाँ लाएंगी, नेग दो, वर्ना ख़ुद,
ढूंढ लो, जूतियाँ शामियाने में हैं

प्यार की फब्तियाँ, प्यार की गालियाँ
रात भर मस्तियाँ शामियाने में हैं

वक़्त है, अब दुल्हन हो रही है बिदा
चारसू, सिसकियाँ शामियाने में हैं

ये छुड़ाता है घर, गाँव, सखियाँ 'रक़ीब'
बस यही ख़ामियाँ शामियाने में हैं

fir se shahnaaiyaaN shaamiyaane meN haiN
do badi kursiyaaN shaamiyaane meN haiN
thik hai janaab dulha aur dulhan baithe hain to kya baaqi log khade rahe ge. ye to koi tariqa nahin hua mehmaan nawaazi ka mujhe agar aap bulaao ge to mere liye bhi kursi ka intezaam rakhna main zayada der khadi nahin rah sakti icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!
jab, jahaaN chaahiye, bas laga leejiye
anginat khoobiyaaN shaamiyaane meN haiN
 Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard =))sahi farmaya main jab bhi tour ya excursion mein jaati hoon to saath khema le jaati hoon maza aataa hai
saath sakhiyoN ke milkar sataati haiN jo
chulbuli bhaabhiyaaN, shaamiyaane meN haiN
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saaliyaaN laayeNgi neg do warna khud
dhooNdh lo, jootiyaaN, shaamiyaane meN haiN
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pyaar kee fabtiyaaN, pyaar kee gaaliyaaN
raat bhar mastiyaaN, shaamiyaane meN haiN
 Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
waqt hai, ab dulhan ho rahi hai bidaa
chaarsoo siskiyaaN, shaamiyaane meN haiN
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ye chhudaata hai ghar, gaaon, sakhiyaaN 'Raqeeb'
bas yahee khaamiyaaN,  shaamiyaane meN haiN
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--- Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'


satish ji you are simply a great poet icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!
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«Reply #16 on: December 30, 2013, 02:14:38 AM »
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Waah waah Shukla sir bahut khoobsoorat ghazal, maza aa gaya padh kar, dheroN daad aur ek Rau qubool kijiye meri taraf se.
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«Reply #17 on: December 30, 2013, 03:12:08 PM »
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waaaaaaaaah waaaaaaaaaaaah bahut khoooooob satish sahab.. Usual Smile Usual Smile

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«Reply #18 on: December 31, 2013, 01:14:59 PM »
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WAAH WAAH WAAH.........
Bahut Bahut Khoob Sir....


Nazre inaayat aur hausala afzai ka bahut shukriya...Bishwajeet 'Musaahib' Sahab...Raqeeb Lucknowi
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«Reply #19 on: December 31, 2013, 02:19:41 PM »
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Quote from: mkv on December 29, 2013, 01:36:24 AM
Jai shri krishna Sir
वक़्त है, अब दुल्हन हो रही है बिदा
चारसू, सिसकियाँ शामियाने में हैं

ये छुड़ाता है घर, गाँव, सखियाँ 'रक़ीब'
बस यही ख़ामियाँ शामियाने में हैं

maza aa gaya..

aur matle ka to javaab hi naheen..
saani misra..wah wah wah ..
bahut bhaya mujhe ye andaaz

Bahut bahuit shukriya Manoj Ji....waqt kam de pata hoon
yo par isliye sharmindagee mahsoos hoti hai ke aap sab
ahbaab ke kalaam naheen padh pata...Raqeeb Lucknowi
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«Reply #20 on: December 31, 2013, 03:36:28 PM »
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Quote from: MANOJ6568 on December 29, 2013, 01:49:17 AM
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Thanks very much...Manoj6568 Ji....Raqeeb
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«Reply #21 on: December 31, 2013, 06:14:42 PM »
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Bahut shukriya....Miraj Sahab.....Raqeeb
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«Reply #22 on: December 31, 2013, 07:13:49 PM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on December 29, 2013, 05:47:30 PM

Raqeeb Sahaab Aadaab...!

WaaH waaH waaH janab waaH kia kahne aapke in khoob khayaaloN ke Shamiyaane se muraad har khayaal baqoobi nibhayaa hai aapne...
Badi hi pur asar aur khoobsurat kalaam huyi hai janab... Har sher qabil e daad hai... aur Maqte ke toH kia kahne bus laa jawaab ...

Is khoob kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... bazm ko nawaazte rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez...



Nazre inaayat aur hausala afzai ka bahut shukriya...Parwaaz Sahab....Raqeeb Lucknowi
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waaaah satish ji bahut khoooob
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Waah-Waah. Bahut sundar.
Shubhkamnayen.
-Arun Mishra.

Respected Arun Mishra Ji,

Bahut bahut shukriya....ghazal pasand karne aur hausala afzai ka...

Saadar,

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Quote from: Sheba on December 30, 2013, 01:21:20 AM


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Bahut bahut shukriya....Sheba Ji.....kursiyaan to sabke liye hain lakin do badi hain....VIP's ke liye kam se kam dulha-dulhan ko ek din ke liye to VIP rahne deejiye....Raqeeb
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Waah waah Shukla sir bahut khoobsoorat ghazal, maza aa gaya padh kar, dheroN daad aur ek Rau qubool kijiye meri taraf se.

Bahut bahut shukriya...Iftakhar Ahmad Sahab.....Raqeeb
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waaaaaaaaah waaaaaaaaaaaah bahut khoooooob satish sahab.. Usual Smile Usual Smile

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Bahut shukriya.....Touhid Sahab.....Raqeeb Lucknowi
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«Reply #28 on: January 04, 2014, 06:36:00 PM »
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फिर से शहनाइयाँ शामियाने में हैं
दो बड़ी कुर्सियाँ शामियाने में हैं

जब, जहाँ चाहिये, बस लगा लीजिये
अनगिनत ख़ूबियाँ शामियाने में हैं

साथ सखियों के मिलकर सताती हैं जो
चुलबुली भाभियाँ शामियाने में हैं

सालियाँ लाएंगी, नेग दो, वर्ना ख़ुद,
ढूंढ लो, जूतियाँ शामियाने में हैं
 Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
प्यार की फब्तियाँ, प्यार की गालियाँ
रात भर मस्तियाँ शामियाने में हैं

वक़्त है, अब दुल्हन हो रही है बिदा
चारसू, सिसकियाँ शामियाने में हैं

ये छुड़ाता है घर, गाँव, सखियाँ 'रक़ीब'
बस यही ख़ामियाँ शामियाने में हैं

bahut badiya
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«Reply #29 on: January 04, 2014, 07:02:13 PM »
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Bahut  khoob, Satish Ji. Khubsurat mahaul kashi ki hai. Shamyane, naye purane,yaad as gaye.
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